arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

👏Really amazing Indi.Couple of things grabbed me.👏

1- Acc to Dr he is listening ..very nice touch

2-Doc notices Anjali ------good one as we all had a great wish for that

3-Bedroom scene and the lines are really mesmerizing.Love how the main characterization is still same😊

4-Jalaibi touch...😊

5-Mandir conflict ..loved it😆

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 12 years ago

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: sohara
Fab chapter.
Arnav and Khushi's morning romance was just uff!
I was giggling like an idiot imagining the scene.

play with his thick wayward hair, kiss that widow's peak, draw him close and forget everything. he had just showered, his skin was cool, damp, taut, asking to be touched. and that heady fragrance of his showering gel, why must he do this to her. unfair.

Just awesome! my favorite lines from this chapter.

Next comes the flash back. Of course resembled the darga scene. It was one of my favorite scene from IPK, their second encounter. It was unique.

It's good that the doc told her that he can hear them. I'm sure when he will see his jhalli wife's crazy antic, he can't be mum. he has to respond.

thanks, sohara,
so all you want are those ahem scenes haan? naughty girl. clever girl. i adore the darga scene... that "phenk do," i can write a book on it. also khushi's hurling herself into his path... not willing to take nastiness from him a second, she takes the steps herself to follow him... makes her own destiny as it were. beautiful touch by writers.

in pink, yes, that is most likely to happen, her constant jabber, he;'ll have to get up and say "shut up, khushi." 😆

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: CravingKhana
Wow I think you r the same Indi from before ... I just saw this res ing to come ha k and catch up

hi 😳, you are the same craving khana and i am the same indi. good to see you. i still have no idea how people find the stories, but delighted you did. see you.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
👏Really amazing Indi.Couple of things grabbed me.👏
1- Acc to Dr he is listening ..very nice touch
2-Doc notices Anjali ------good one as we all had a great wish for that
3-Bedroom scene and the lines are really mesmerizing.Love how the main characterization is still same😊
4-Jalaibi touch...😊
5-Mandir conflict ..loved it😆

thank you thank you thank you and thank you, arshi. you noticed so many things. i am writing the story as i go along... no real plot, hoping the characters will cue things. dr verma notices anjali... where will it lead, will it lead anywhere? still no idea.

thanks for liking bedroom scene. hope there was enough hotwa this time 😆

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: RebeccaDaphne
Amazing part Indy, I loved the romantic bedroom scene! And they were both in each others heads after the mandir meeting!
So Dr Verma has noticed Anjali?...😳 !
Lovely chapter Indy, it's getting really interesting! 👏

thanks, rebecca,

yeah, my asr and khushi were in each other from the word go... 😳

and dr verma... an enigma he is in his own way. but he did notice anjali 😳 and that her husband was never there.

thanks for reading, hope i can tell a story well.

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

aww...ArShi morning scene was awesomely cute...he is the best husband ever...
So he can hear them and Khushi talking to him non-stop...she loves his eyes because they remind her of chocolates...Only Khushi can say that...
Dr. Verma and Anjali???I guess too early to say that...
loved the update...waiting for more...thanks so much for the pm...

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divsarunfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

excellent👏.awesome and mind blowing update 😊

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Cadence_12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

oh indi di! 🤗the famed morning-after that never happened. sigh. you write so beautifully, i can 'see' the melting brown in your writing.

hugs!

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: divsarunfan
excellent👏.awesome and mind blowing update 😊

thank you so much, divsarunfan. hope you had fun. 😊

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: mashira
oh indi di! 🤗the famed morning-after that never happened. sigh. you write so beautifully, i can 'see' the melting brown in your writing.

hugs!

thank you, rashmi. how i have waited to see that brown melt. it's a bit scary to write about that, one would never want to stop. yes, it was certainly a morning after, some day i'd like to see what happened the night before teehee.

and i can trust you to tell me when something is not so nice too i hope. 🤗

Edited by indi52 - 12 years ago