arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: divsarunfan
wow.superb frd

thank you, divsarufan, 😃🤗

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
Indi,
I am in tears and my heart is aching. Our poor Arnavji and poor Kushi. I can feel the whole family's heartache. Get up Arnav I kept saying to myself. I love the flashback to how they met and when Nani cried I cried.
I love your story and I want him well soon! Kushi needs him, they all need him, I need him to be well. Coma, a time of resting and nothing to disturb your thoughts. His well needed rest and her hearing his thoughts superb, even in a comatose state he thinks of Kushi.
Thank you.👏

thank you, cynthia,🤗

oh i need him back too. but it looks like he needs this break from everything... coma can also do good things, right? tell me tell me. i am so glad you felt nani... she's beautiful... in fact that's one character i am awed by, so layered, so much in her, a real woman.

they are in each other, can he ever really not have her in his consciousness? or she him? now of course i am talking gibberish, but that's how it seems to me. i hope you really enjoyed and guess what i was commenting on your story on the saansey thread when you posted your comment here...

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supriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: indi52

hi supriya, 🤗

sorry to make you sad. i am so glad though that you liked the writing... and the nani khushi thing. okay, i may have conveyed it poorly, but the second girl in the goons' clutches is not khushi, just a random girl.. another victim.

when he reads the ad, he catches on what was happening in that room, and he goes to settle it once and for all... i had a feeling his excess anger also had something to do with him seeing khushi in that state and finally understanding why.

wanting more? okay, baby... let me get my old imagination crackin'.

oh thanks for correcting 😊

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Putija

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Indi kal aaj aur kal beautifully woven the story sentimental loving what the and not the least Arnav's shut up Khushi so the hope is there lovely update

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: chalhov
Indi kal aaj aur kal beautifully woven the story sentimental loving what the and not the least Arnav's shut up Khushi so the hope is there lovely update

hi chalhov, 😃

thank you thank you. kal aaj kal aur parso... i want to go everywhere... shut up khushi, nice? hawww. i just get the aaas when he says that.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: basb
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thanks so much, basb, appreciate your reading without you.

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IssK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Great update! The scene at home was exceptional 👏 Very moving.
The back and forth style is working well and your details, a real treat 👏 All in all, lush with emotion! Pleasure to read.

Thanks for the PM 😊
(No the pressures but baitings phor two mores...more chapter and more bitwa)

Edited by IssPKaur - 12 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Good one Indi as your story telling style is fascinating as I already mentioned.You are taking flashbacks along with the real current one and that makes it more thrilling for keeping readers at the edge.

So he has been her protector since the day one as always my HORUS he is... And KADOOS too .. uhhh. What's new...

Love the positivity of Khushi as always giving others smile and hope by burying hers.She is hearing him as he tells her Shaut up instead of tum Theek ho...good touch

Beating up goons .Yes hero of hers and rakshus for others...Always wanted him beating badly Shyam .never happened😡😡😡

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 12 years ago

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: IssPKaur
Great update! The scene at home was exceptional 👏 Very moving.
The back and forth style is working well and your details, a real treat 👏 All in all, lush with emotion! Pleasure to read.

Thanks for the PM 😊
(No the pressures but baitings phor two mores... more chapter and more bitwa)

thanks, i bhill not makes you bhaits too longs, especially on the bitwa phront. in fact, the moment i read it, a whole chapter flashed before my hungry eyes... thanks for that, dear reader. and please do always feel free to tell me if something is irksome, or not sexy. 😆

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Good one Indi as your story telling style is fascinating as I already mentioned.You are taking flashbacks along with the real current one and that makes it more thrilling for keeping readers at the edge.

So he has been her protector since the day one as always my HORUS he is... And KADOOS too .. uhhh. What's new...

Love the positivity of Khushi as always giving others smile and hope by burying hers.She is hearing him as he tells her Shaut up instead of tum Theek ho...good touch

Beating up goons .Yes hero of hers and rakshus for others...Always wanted him beating badly Shyam .never happened😡😡😡