ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter - Page 44

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

UOTE=priya_avi] At first sight...love this new title...though both titles were nice but at first I suspected witness was a romantic thriller,.my suspicion got stronger with shlok-gun-run-evidence in first few chap...then u explained what's ur tittle about...but this one goes well with the pace of the story...
Jane love the way u moving the story and ashlok invisible bond...and love this shlok double the time...momma's boy...I have a soft corner for such men ...a man who cant understands and grasp the feelings n emotions of his own mother can't understand n love others...totally my POV...
I hate heroes doing circus to make a gal fall for him...
But here I wants to contradict with my own likes...
I have no problem if shlok do Summersault to make her smile...
No prob if he becomes superman to bring some light in her life...
She may take some time to let things settle down around her...but he have to wait for this dasmel in distress...
I have my hopes high for asthas knight in shining armour...
Bcoz what she gone through in her life made me feel so... want only happiness for her for the left of her life...
Nice story n all d best anu 👍🏼

hi love, loved the thought of yours...how nice.ly you commented..

That makes two of us deeps.

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

I feel she has to fight her inner fears by herself and come out clear...again shlok able be there as his mental and,moral,support...like the tall pillar...say he has to her physics job...

No one but she can do that. She needs to want to fight in the first place, he'll be there to hold her love her reassure her that he's there for her no matter what. Thanks deeps.

Originally posted by: mehare

Awesome update

Thank you very much Mehare 😊

Originally posted by: rbb1

Wow really really nice update thank you aww at least he got to hold her and he knows that she loves him as well, poor Astha she is trying to hard not to be in love

Thank you Ray! Yes! He did. She let him hold her. She's loosing her battle. But she'll deep on trying.
Really happy that you too like the story so far. Means so much to me,

Originally posted by: lively_roshani

lovely

Thank you Rosh! 😊

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Thank you Ray! Yes! He did. She let him hold her. She's loosing her battle. But she'll deep on trying.
Really happy that you too like the story so far. Means so much to me,

your story is brilliant love the positivity just hope Astha mngee to forget about her past

Originally posted by: sruthykarthika

Waw. Amazing. I am on the 9th cloud. Very very very happy. Plz pm me whenever u update.

Oh! Thank you Sruthy! I'll let you linger there for a little while then. But the fall back to earth may be little hard...

Glad to have given you bit of happiness through my writing. I'm humbled.

Will surly send you a pm with the next update.

Originally posted by: bm11

Anu, loved the update. Just loved it.👏

Very romantic, very fragrantly.

He was dressing himslef as he was going to the date. It was a date for him I believe.

Chose the shirt and it's after the surgery when she saw him unconscious and naked, I believe😆

Doctors are like that, right?😳

What I liked very much "Recieved. Thank you"

Just brilliant. I would use it if you don't mind for the presents or flowers unwanted.👍🏼Cute.

Their feeling each othe's presence was well described to my mind, warmth, frangances.

Anu, I'm not even mentioning the poem

Thank you for the pm.

Thank you my Michelin star chef 😆
I'm glad you liked the update.
If you'd let me suggest something, until you start your next fiction...write a poem ud be so good at it and a natural at it.
Every time he gets to meet her is the date for him. As long as he gets to see her he'll be happy as bunny.
I need to ask one friends about that if they feel likewise seeing handsome men that they treat...
This is all in my head.
And my my jane...who's sending you unwanted gifts... Does your hubby know this. Use it by all means. I have no objection.
Hope you'd get the time to keep on reading this and commenting. I'd really like that very much.
I assume you liked the four lines. 😛

Originally posted by: sreekailas

Anu di...trust me this was d bessst update i've ever read..seriously. cannot tell u how much i loved it..i must say u r xlin urself with each chapters..@ d beginning i was also blushing along with aastha.. N shlok!! He was on d top of d world!!victorious warrior!!shlok's preparations b4 going to meet aastha!!omg it was too damn hilarious!!after thst..i only saw fireworks!!and in d end..i never thought that aastha will cry..donno dat sudden act of her's made my heart ache..thank god shlok is there, her knight in shining armour to protect hrr!!
Im really feeling happy now..that poor girl aastha was cursed to have d ill fate, of not being able to enjoy d best phase of her life, teenage..but now i can see dat 17 year old girl coming back..enjoying herself in d feeling of being loved..though she is not acceptin it, im sure she's having dat feeling!!

Hey! Anju! Thank you for this lovely comment. I'm touched. Glad you like the update. And all the little things that I've included in it. Thank you for noticing and the appreciating.
He will paint her life colors once more. He's ready with the paint and brush she just need to tell him where to start. She deserves all his love and so much more. She needs to put herself out there once more. Thats what frightens her the most.
Thank you lil one once again for the love...