ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter - Page 42

Originally posted by: priya_avi

At first sight...love this new title...though both titles were nice but at first I suspected witness was a romantic thriller,.my suspicion got stronger with shlok-gun-run-evidence in first few chap...then u explained what's ur tittle about...but this one goes well with the pace of the story...
Jane love the way u moving the story and ashlok invisible bond...and love this shlok double the time...momma's boy...I have a soft corner for such men ...a man who cant understands and grasp the feelings n emotions of his own mother can't understand n love others...totally my POV...
I hate heroes doing circus to make a gal fall for him...
But here I wants to contradict with my own likes...
I have no problem if shlok do Summersault to make her smile...
No prob if he becomes superman to bring some light in her life...
She may take some time to let things settle down around her...but he have to wait for this dasmel in distress...
I have my hopes high for asthas knight in shining armour...
Bcoz what she gone through in her life made me feel so... want only happiness for her for the left of her life...
Nice story n all d best anu 👍🏼

Wow really really nice update thank you aww at least he got to hold her and he knows that she loves him as well, poor Astha she is trying to hard not to be in love

Waw. Amazing. I am on the 9th cloud. Very very very happy. Plz pm me whenever u update.

Anu, loved the update. Just loved it.👏

Anu di...trust me this was d bessst update i've ever read..seriously. cannot tell u how much i loved it..i must say u r xlin urself with each chapters..@ d beginning i was also blushing along with aastha.. N shlok!! He was on d top of d world!!victorious warrior!!shlok's preparations b4 going to meet aastha!!omg it was too damn hilarious!!after thst..i only saw fireworks!!and in d end..i never thought that aastha will cry..donno dat sudden act of her's made my heart ache..thank god shlok is there, her knight in shining armour to protect hrr!!
Im really feeling happy now..that poor girl aastha was cursed to have d ill fate, of not being able to enjoy d best phase of her life, teenage..but now i can see dat 17 year old girl coming back..enjoying herself in d feeling of being loved..though she is not acceptin it, im sure she's having dat feeling!!

really liking the story so much.

Dear friends, sorry not able to reply something with the site. Acting up on me. Thank you for the love and encouragement. Will reply once it stops being all high and mighty with me.

OK so shlok is ready to fight for their love

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

UOTE=priya_avi] At first sight...love this new title...though both titles were nice but at first I suspected witness was a romantic thriller,.my suspicion got stronger with shlok-gun-run-evidence in first few chap...then u explained what's ur tittle about...but this one goes well with the pace of the story...
Jane love the way u moving the story and ashlok invisible bond...and love this shlok double the time...momma's boy...I have a soft corner for such men ...a man who cant understands and grasp the feelings n emotions of his own mother can't understand n love others...totally my POV...
I hate heroes doing circus to make a gal fall for him...
But here I wants to contradict with my own likes...
I have no problem if shlok do Summersault to make her smile...
No prob if he becomes superman to bring some light in her life...
She may take some time to let things settle down around her...but he have to wait for this dasmel in distress...
I have my hopes high for asthas knight in shining armour...
Bcoz what she gone through in her life made me feel so... want only happiness for her for the left of her life...
Nice story n all d best anu 👍🏼

hi love, loved the thought of yours...how nice.ly you commented.. love when u cal me love my lovely friend... 😛

Lovely and sweet update! So Shlok wants to fight for her!