ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter - Page 43

Originally posted by: bm11

Anu, loved the update. Just loved it.👏

Very romantic, very fragrantly.

He was dressing himslef as he was going to the date. It was a date for him I believe.

Chose the shirt and it's after the surgery when she saw him unconscious and naked, I believe😆

Doctors are like that, right?😳

What I liked very much "Recieved. Thank you"

Just brilliant. I would use it if you don't mind for the presents or flowers unwanted.👍🏼Cute.

Their feeling each othe's presence was well described to my mind, warmth, frangances.

Anu, I'm not even mentioning the poem

Thank you for the pm.

sorry double post 😕

how is ur mil anu?

Originally posted by: bm11

Anu, loved the update. Just loved it.👏

Very romantic, very fragrantly.

He was dressing himslef as he was going to the date. It was a date for him I believe.

Chose the shirt and it's after the surgery when she saw him unconscious and naked, I believe😆

Doctors are like that, right?😳

What I liked very much "Recieved. Thank you"

Just brilliant. I would use it if you don't mind for the presents or flowers unwanted.👍🏼Cute.

Their feeling each othe's presence was well described to my mind, warmth, frangances.

Anu, I'm not even mentioning the poem

Thank you for the pm.

Anu u send pms... 😲 I heard something lik no pms...only twittering...k let me buddy u n u add me to ur pm list...

Hi jane...
Hope anu wont bother spamming her thread 😆

Lovely update Anu... The way shlok sending her flower and message was so sweet...

Originally posted by: priya_avi

At first sight...love this new title...though both titles were nice but at first I suspected witness was a romantic thriller,.my suspicion got stronger with shlok-gun-run-evidence in first few chap...then u explained what's ur tittle about...but this one goes well with the pace of the story...
Jane love the way u moving the story and ashlok invisible bond...and love this shlok double the time...momma's boy...I have a soft corner for such men ...a man who cant understands and grasp the feelings n emotions of his own mother can't understand n love others...totally my POV...
I hate heroes doing circus to make a gal fall for him...
But here I wants to contradict with my own likes...
I have no problem if shlok do Summersault to make her smile...
No prob if he becomes superman to bring some light in her life...
She may take some time to let things settle down around her...but he have to wait for this dasmel in distress...
I have my hopes high for asthas knight in shining armour...
Bcoz what she gone through in her life made me feel so... want only happiness for her for the left of her life...
Nice story n all d best anu 👍🏼

For the 5th time I'm trying to post this reply for you. Hope I succeed. Thanks for the long and wonderful comment Priya. Glad you like the new title. I like it too. And on Shlok being s mommas boy...I'm married to one as well. So you know I like the kind.

Shlok is willing to do anything, run stark naked if that'll make his Astha jump with joy. Don't worry I'll keep his vanity in check. Or do you want me to...

She needs to want him to love her...he's there waiting...he's determined so we shall have our happy ending she will have her ever after...
Thank you priya once again. It's good to have you back.

Originally posted by: priya_avi

Oh watsup...read in meeras ff that ur mil is not well... Hope she's fit n fine now...

She's not doing ok. It's the wretched cancer that's eating her up. And we can't do anything but watch her fade away day by day. It's so sad to even think of her. She's such a nice person. Worry more for my sweet hubby. Thanks anyway priya for the wishes.

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Finally he held her from falling and their eyes meet...waiting for the unsaid emotions from the eyes to write a new chapter of love the beginning and her to control her feelings more and more and finally spill out the feel like lava burst from volcano...thru her eyes rather than words...lovely update Anu...

Oh! Deeps! Yore lines are so poetic. It's so beautiful. Yes he's trying to hold her keep her from falling. He's willing and waiting to start the new chapter. She needs to give the go ahead. At moment it's just her eyes that doing all the talking. Will he be able to bare what she actually has to say?

Thanks for the lovely comment. I'm inspired to write better.

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Any...the poem btw...I want my hubby to utter those words in my ears...very sensous...it took my heart away

Thank you deeps! Let it be known to him and I'm sure he'll be more than willing to appease your dil ki Baath...

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

She's not doing ok. It's the wretched cancer that's eating her up. And we can't do anything but watch her fade away day by day. It's so sad to even think of her. She's such a nice person. Worry more for my sweet hubby. Thanks anyway priya for the wishes.

aww I am so sorry to hear that Anu

Originally posted by: priya_avi

Its awesome anu...shlok way to go man...this is what u should be doing...make her smile and help her overcome her terrible past...I think already its happening... Now she's only clinging to the fact that she don't deserve to be loved...but the reason behind it is slowly but steadily leaving her mind...good progression!

He needs all our support to get her come out of this slump. You seem to be his cheerleader. He'll be glad.
It's happening. But not fast enough for us and Shlok. He's patient and willing to give her time. Thank you priya once again.