Chap 14 on Pg 136 Entrapment : An Extremely Dark Advni FF - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
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No words to describe this chapter. You just raised the chemistry benchmark of this couple. Seriously, it was that good. Can't wait for the next update. My mind will be pre-occupied with this FF all the time.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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what did he mean when he said she had blood on her hands ? I think he meant he was a part of the conspiracy to kill his parents and she therefore isn't suitable to sit for the Maha Pooja
but Chandni felt he was talking about her periods and blabbered the justification for it and when he understood the meaning of her words he had a hearty laugh
it must have been too amusing for him but when poor Chandni realized what she had blabbered to a complete stranger she must have wished to die of embarrassment
and at the first meeting only he declares that he is her future husband he really wastes no time and gets down to business at the earliest
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Kya meeting thi.. wow.. this should have happened in serial, no need of that murti drama.. but on second thoughts your this advay can't b shown on indian TV.. so this can only happen in chitraji world.. advay remembering his family & chandu looks pretty emotional here, how much he tries to b this dark & dominating personality, a part of him will alwayz b dev & he will resurface from time to time in these familiar circumstances.. this advay- dev tug of war is main charm for me & u seem to capture this beautifully..

About BDSM i agree that it is a choice of different lifestyle which is based on a person's preference.. & i m giddy with excitement how hardcore your advay is going to play.. i know u write aesthetically but i want chandani to b an equal in this side.. she should enjoy being submissive to dominant advay.. otherwise this holds no excitement.. as i have read somewhere that actually it is submissive who holds all d power.. but i will patiently wait for your story to unfold as u alwayz pleasantly surprise me..


PS- does IF allows such mature material here?? Its just a curious ques..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chandni must have been shocked when he made that declaration and have thought that he was crazy
but of course marrying her was a part of his revenge plan and he intended to carry it out completely
later she ran away from him without watching and ran into Shikha it proves she was still lost in him
then she wanted to see him once more she is already getting attracted to him and subconsciously she is being pulled towards him
he must have known she will have such a reaction so he indulged and turned back and looked at her directly
they both had an intense staring competition then
I think Murli is completely right he is lovestruck at the first sight and he is falling for her subconsciously again
both were restless after the first meeting and kept thinking of each other all the time
so does he want to spank her now to remove the itch on his hands
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
he changed his initial plans
at first it was decided that Murli will click the picture of Chandni in his arms and maybe spread in the area
but now he asked Murli to delete the pictures
he must have thought something even better
I wonder what he plans to do next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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for a moment Chandni had thought of Dev
she had prayed to her Bholenaath to give back Dev to her after 16 years and had said a special prayer
but seeing him she dismissed the thought
as Dev would have called her by the familiar name and smiled and talked to her
she had no idea that Dev will come back to her in a completely different avatar that she won be able to recognize him so easily now
at least she thought of Dev and connected him to Advay for a moment that makes me happy
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
I want him to take his full revenge and punish all the ones involved in the conspiracy
if possible I want him to get back his Mahant title along with all the responsibilities associated with the post and I also want all the people there now to know what atrocities Indrani had committed 16 years back
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow that was an amazing update loved it so much.
The meeting of Advni was fabulous.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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AdNi meeting was really magical

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