Chap 14 on Pg 136 Entrapment : An Extremely Dark Advni FF - Page 6

Originally posted by: ChitraGS

OMG it is priya, especially this one is extremely exhausting , i feel so drained sometimes, I have written about 50 to 60 percent so far, but its scatter, not in sequence,

30 percent of starting is done, and 20 percent of ending is done, so far, and bit and pieces of a few middle parts i have written

Originally posted by: ChitraGS

Hello my lovely, thank you so much for such wonderful words of appreciation, and for indicating that i put a disclaimer, I will do that now. As of IF claiming copyright, TBH this story is a gift lets say to all of the readers including myself, who didnt get the story we were promised. I might consider moving to a blog for sure, but i will also leave a copy here on IF for anyone of those Advni fans who were aching for a darkish story like me and felt robbed eventually.

The problem with the show was they used unnecessary gizmos and scientific madness, and ruined the reality factor for a lot of us. SIGH !!!

Speaking of the dominant part, Okay i am going to have to put this in the disclaimer too. TBH the reason FSOG faced a lot to backlash from the BDSM inclined community was because she pinned Greys behaviour on his traumatic past. BDSM has nothing to do with trauma, it is a sexual preference. Some people want it, like it, its thier choice. Why? There is no answer to that. Its the same reason why you might like Chocolate ice cream over butter scotch😃, its jsut a preference.

so i think it will be unfair for me to pin Advay's behaviour on his trauma or his past etc. lets just say he was exposed to this preference and he made it his way of life. Tho my Advay plays hardcore, Christian is a watered down version in front of Advay. Hence why i have explicitly mentioned it in my disclaimer.

But why does Advay like torturing Chandini, that bit will come out beautifully, so that bit i will be writing in detail. But why is he a dominant, because thats who he is, thats his personality. But he is totally diff to Grey, Grey was an ass hole most of the times and for no reason. Adavy does things but has a reason i think thats what makes him different. Please do give it a read and let me know what you make of it, trust me i have written it tastefully, it wont offend anyone, it may do little bit, but if it does that you can always skip that part😳,

@bold, I am truly honoured by your words, I have no words to describe how flattered i feel at the moment. I am very bad at taking compliment,s but trust me i am over the moon, and typing this with a perpetual grin plastered across my face at your kind words.

TBH this story is only jsut my second attempt at writing a story. I am taking this as a learning curve, and since I have been receiving so many wonderful compliments from all of you, I might want to write professionally for sure. All of you lovely people have given me the encouragement to take up my passion professionally

So thanks a lot again for all your suggestions and your kind words. Keep reading, this story will entrall you i promise, but more so it will make you weep buckets, for both of them. 😳

❤️ Chitra