Rikara SeriesOS: #5 Shadows of Heart.. - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Yayini give some satbuddhi to Harneet too .. send this to her .. let RiKara shift to some undisclosed location after this heart to heart conversation.. since Harneet anyway doesn't have a story for them .. at least she won't keep stretching them for nothing.. this is all that I want .. won't even take five minutes of her precious screen time n tada RiKara will be over all hale n healthy n then she can keep concentrating on things that she's apparently more capable of handling .. Both talking their insecurities out is a dream .. kitna accha lagega .. but nah.. mus kaise milenge .. anyway thanks for giving me my share of sensible two .. loved it


hey bhagwaan.. neha you want me to give whats little left of me..😲

She wouldn't let rikara have a heartfelt conversation since her laila is fond of all wrong things even that new biker for that matter..😆 This wouldn't take more than 5 epi's.. even if you stretch like anyting..😆 MU Galore is all what we get.. sabar ki phal is not going to be there.. i ve made up my mind rikara aint gonna get a proper story anytime..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Karthi dii..plz send this to GulNeet..fed up with their atraangi script...kuch bhi dikhate hain..how I wish to watch them talking..I love your writings because of the conversation...thanks for this..it was like a stress reducer after watching yesterday's epi..and thanks for leaving a pm..


Tasnim.. Kaash main send kar paati..😭 Maan ki aasha aise OS se mein nikal dete.. warna conversation and rikara... No Harneet has much busy work to do..😡

Stress reducer is all what we want now..😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: rikara94

This one is Brilliant karthi👍🏼

Thank god they talked and solved the issues between them
Their Conversation was really amazingly writen dear

Show mein toh they like kuchbhi dikhate hai yar.. dhang ke dialogued bhi nahi dete..unke beech convo krwana toh dur ki bat..if cvs will try this na then definatlly mu clear ho jayenge and jo bhi issues hain sort out ho jayenge but nahhh! Cvs ko dimag nahi chalana hai apna😆

But thank god you wrote this and thank you so much for sharing this amazing piece


Jo.. thankyou.. !! thanks for loving the convo..!

CV's would nt bring them in a same frame for more than 2 min, let alone convo.. this is getting bad worse and worst..🤢 CV's grow logic in freezers..😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: DEFOM

gosh wonderful series

plz do pm when u update next


Hi dEfom, thanks dear.. will pm u sure..!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
Superb 5 shots
Hope they remember everything
When they wake up after the Hangover
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Part 5 Updated:

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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Shadows of heart is so good
Finally omkara let out everything
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
hey yayini. . loved it as alwz..

keep it up!
stay blessed
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved all the 5 shots! update soon ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Karthi di..marne ka iraada hain kya..?? Itni intensity kaha se laati ho..?? I'm still in the whirlpool of it..loved the way they both remembered their marriage during the wedding phere and vows..and whenever I read "Back in their room" mera dil toh dance marta hain..jhatt se pata chal jata hain that sanskaaripan is on the way...the last word of Om stole my heart.. "Kyunki tum meri Gauri ho..." "Meri Gauri" sounds so perfect from him.. *SIGH* It was amazing..thanks for the pm di...
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