Rikara SeriesOS: #5 Shadows of Heart..

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Sindhu

@sree10

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Love it. Thanks for the pm

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Faye

@FayeMia

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

As much as I have issues with getting Omkara high, this was just amazing. Thank you for this one Karthi. atleast these two talk! Half the problems would have been solved had they tried to talk or even ask questions.

This new MU is the dumbest kuch bhi after all we have been through and I can't rant enough about it. Also, I blame both of them. Neither team Omkara nor team Gauri. Thank you for this lovely piece, even if they might forget it in the morning it was a bliss to read them talk.

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Yayini give some satbuddhi to Harneet too .. send this to her .. let RiKara shift to some undisclosed location after this heart to heart conversation.. since Harneet anyway doesn't have a story for them .. at least she won't keep stretching them for nothing.. this is all that I want .. won't even take five minutes of her precious screen time n tada RiKara will be over all hale n healthy n then she can keep concentrating on things that she's apparently more capable of handling .. Both talking their insecurities out is a dream .. kitna accha lagega .. but nah.. mus kaise milenge .. anyway thanks for giving me my share of sensible two .. loved it

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Karthi dii..plz send this to GulNeet..fed up with their atraangi script...kuch bhi dikhate hain..how I wish to watch them talking..I love your writings because of the conversation...thanks for this..it was like a stress reducer after watching yesterday's epi..and thanks for leaving a pm..

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

This one is Brilliant karthi👍🏼

Thank god they talked and solved the issues between them

Their Conversation was really amazingly writen dear

Show mein toh they like kuchbhi dikhate hai yar.. dhang ke dialogued bhi nahi dete..unke beech convo krwana toh dur ki bat..if cvs will try this na then definatlly mu clear ho jayenge and jo bhi issues hain sort out ho jayenge but nahhh! Cvs ko dimag nahi chalana hai apna😆

But thank god you wrote this and thank you so much for sharing this amazing piece

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perFICtionist.

@perFICtionist.

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

#innocent mistakes:

the title is so apt! The 'gift' unraveled the pandoras box she had buried ever so deeply in her heart and the rapid outpour of emotions blurred her iron-will.. so beautifully written yayini! loved it. Omkara and his yearning for love will always mesmerize me! one touch of love from gauri and he surrendered his everything to her! commitment phobia, expression problem whatever be it plaguing this man... such simple and innocent gestures speak volumes of the child suppressed within who craves for nothing but unconditioned, uncomplicated love!

#4. unspoken desires

they talk. period. Fact that they happen to communicate is so unfathomable that the profoundness of even 'period' withers away!😆 intoxicated or not, on gunpoint or not, last breath r not! they bloody talked! oh! you relieved me of the excruciating pain of being a rikara fan!😉😛 not only did they talk but how... everything guarded and hidden came guzzling out like a hurricane! and they each took in every damned word spoken to wriggle out as much solace as they could offer! omkara's insecurities and Gauri's reservations came out ever so poetically! beautiful yayini! just beautiful👏😳

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yayini

@yayini

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: FayeMia
As much as I have issues with getting Omkara high, this was just amazing. Thank you for this one Karthi. atleast these two talk! Half the problems would have been solved had they tried to talk or even ask questions.

This new MU is the dumbest kuch bhi after all we have been through and I can't rant enough about it. Also, I blame both of them. Neither team Omkara nor team Gauri. Thank you for this lovely piece, even if they might forget it in the morning it was a bliss to read them talk.

talking clears 90 pc of siyappa but cv s wont vouch for it.. the d make a khichdi out of story but wouldnt go the logical way.. I am team rikara when it comes to putting the blame on.. 😆

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Palakh Aggarwal

@RudrakshPreesha

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#38

gosh wonderful series

plz do pm when u update next

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yayini

@yayini

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Ann17
hawww...

now waiting for part 6... !

loved it.. awesome, wondering what will happen nxt...

keep writing...

stay blessed