Rikara SeriesOS: #5 Shadows of Heart.. - Page 6

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Palakh Aggarwal

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Posted: 7 years ago

oh man loved the part so so greatly written

n thanks for d pm dear

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priya_86

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Posted: 7 years ago

Karthi...awesome dear...

You are literally the lifeline for Rikara 😃

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rikara94

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Posted: 7 years ago

Its wonderfull karthi

You wrote this prefectly

Aww they remembered their marriage while pheras..lovely

And their room scene..convo..lovelyyy and thoda sanskar bhi😆

And omkie gauri ke sath sab kuch share krna chahta hai..hope show pe b kre..i hate you cvs😡

My gauri walaa part amazing..show bhi bola na meri gauri❤️

Waiting for another shot ..update soon

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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 7 years ago

awesome update yar...

loved it totally

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perFICtionist.

@perFICtionist.

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Posted: 7 years ago

hotness personified! 😳

noodle strap pulled down near her arms, dress up till her things, unbuttoned shirt wrapped on him and legs entwined! *DEAD* Honestly by the ending of unspoken desires i thought they did it.. a small part of me died that their first would not be remembered. But. But. But. You are awesome and you always take your time for the final act.

This was beautifully written! i love the omkara you created here.. unafraid of expressing his feelings along with the ever so delicious devilish glint! loved the way he approached Gauri.. cautiously yet authoritatively! 👏

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sara1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

The best updates ever. Awesome Rikara's shot. Thank you for writing them.

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 7 years ago

amazing loved all the parts till now.Continue soon.

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