Rikara SeriesOS: #5 Shadows of Heart..

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yayini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Patharsitara
Lovely

Thank you sitara..!! Keep reading dear!!

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yayini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: BIaddict
Loveddd it. Please keep writing more Rikara stuff. Can't get enough of it.

How tough its it to direct such a scene..!! Koi mujhe story writer ki post de do.. will do it for muft muft muft🤣

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yayini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: minamma
Love your series..
Plzz update you other works soon
Dying to read them

hi mina,

thanks for following my work regularly..

Will update this OS first and then the FF.. keep reading dear! Hugs🤗

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yayini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Naina280599
This is so amazing! I love this series.
The first os was lovely! Their conversation was gold. I loved the write up! The hug was much needed! Totes loved this!
Confused souls is so beautifully written. I loved the draping moment. You are amazing at elaborating feelings and emotions! Loved the ending!
Innocent Mistakes is totally mind-blowing! I loved this so much. The mangalsutra scene was too good. Loved TejRi here. Rikara scene in the end is so beautiful! Loved it, specially Om's dialogue in the end.
Thank you so much for writing these amazing one shots. Waiting anxiously for the next ones!
Much love 🤗

Thank you so much dear..!! Glad you liked all three..!! Am planning on a drunken confession next chapter..lets see.!! Keep reading..😊

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whity.007

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: yayini

Sathya kahan gayi tum... anyways thank you dear..!!🤗

Hi karthi

Sorry dear, I was quite busy with dasara festival dear.

Unable login with IF regularly

I'll be back after vacations dear...

Kindly update YOUR FF THMM

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Neha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Yayini .. I loved this .. such a moment where Gauri drops guard .. hayee .. n the entire build up to it s so well done .. I loved the symbolic Mangal sutra convo n Omkara guilty as usual n then the wedding photo making an appearance.. taking Gauri away in its stride n Omkara getting a treat .. aweee.. yes this is bipolar for him .. hehe .. though it's hilarious to have it end with a cryptic him who's been refused his fave candy .. hehe .. can't wait for the drunken confession.. bring it on .. loving your os series girlie .. thanks a ton

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yayini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

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Originally posted by: sree10
Maaa... maa...nheee ... misunderstanding,...

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yayini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me
Yayini .. I loved this .. such a moment where Gauri drops guard .. hayee .. n the entire build up to it s so well done .. I loved the symbolic Mangal sutra convo n Omkara guilty as usual n then the wedding photo making an appearance.. taking Gauri away in its stride n Omkara getting a treat .. aweee.. yes this is bipolar for him .. hehe .. though it's hilarious to have it end with a cryptic him who's been refused his fave candy .. hehe .. can't wait for the drunken confession.. bring it on .. loving your os series girlie .. thanks a ton

Hey neha.. yeh thanks kya keh rahi ho tum😡

tankoo for loving the os.. omkie is bipolar, gauri is bipolar, Cv are multipolar, we are tripolar..

I dunno where will end up after all this mindblasting arcs..😆

MS convo to aise create kar diya maine, kyunki he has to know he can't have her and all that glorious haq while denying her the relationship. Thats the state he is currently in. He detests her, doesn't have trust but wants her attention, wants all that haq of the husband. Omkie has gone pagal re...🤣