Rikara SeriesOS: #5 Shadows of Heart..

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mina

@minamma

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Love your series..

Plzz update you other works soon

Dying to read them

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Naina

@Naina280599

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

This is so amazing! I love this series.

The first os was lovely! Their conversation was gold. I loved the write up! The hug was much needed! Totes loved this!

Confused souls is so beautifully written. I loved the draping moment. You are amazing at elaborating feelings and emotions! Loved the ending!

Innocent Mistakes is totally mind-blowing! I loved this so much. The mangalsutra scene was too good. Loved TejRi here. Rikara scene in the end is so beautiful! Loved it, specially Om's dialogue in the end.

Thank you so much for writing these amazing one shots. Waiting anxiously for the next ones!

Much love 🤗

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priya_86

@priya_86

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Karthi...your stories...as usual have such a feel good effect...how i love them...i neednt say more about them...you know very well 🤗

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Priya_Iyer

@Priya_Iyer

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Kaarthi,

The third part was hot da and they dint even kiss! I just love your works!

How do you manage it? You have to teach me! I tried writing a sanskaari stuff on Faye di's insistence but mujhe khud feels nahi aaye. 🤣

Anyways awaiting the fourth part eagerly now.

Hugs

Piyu.

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yayini

@yayini

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
love it

Thank you gurl! Watch out for more updates.!!

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yayini

@yayini

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: rikara94
Loved it karthi
Loved tejvi and ri part also..
first time experience tejiri scenario
And tejvi's gift..picture of rikara on their wedding day amazing
At last rikara's moments are really well written dear..
Waiting for the next shot

hi jo.. bas yehi ek sahaara hai.. mu clear karne ke liye..😆

O is always attracted to G whereas G is in patni dharam mode.. so its natural that he gets affected when she initiates such a thing than vice versa..😆

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yayini

@yayini

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Priya_Iyer
Kaarthi,
The third part was hot da and they dint even kiss! I just love your works!
How do you manage it? You have to teach me! I tried writing a sanskaari stuff on Faye di's insistence but mujhe khud feels nahi aaye. 🤣

Anyways awaiting the fourth part eagerly now.

Hugs
Piyu.

Sensuality lies in the proximity and for that they not always have to touch, kiss, feel and all that.. it just flows with the essence of situation.. piyu..😊 Tumhe toh zyaada feels aati hain, bas tum usse likh nahi rahi ho.. try to karke dekho ek baar?

Luv,

Yay

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yayini

@yayini

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: priya_86
Karthi...your stories...as usual have such a feel good effect...how i love them...i neednt say more about them...you know very well 🤗

Pri..

My stories are never complete without your feedback..!! Thats one thing which has been my aadat.. to look forward to your feedback.. Thanks for loving my writing so much and for insisting it time and again.. makes me feel more special!!

Thank you and hugs..!!

🤗🤗

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yayini

@yayini

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: whity.007
Awesome karthi👏

Sathya kahan gayi tum... anyways thank you dear..!!🤗

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yayini

@yayini

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Karthi diii...you made me happy..the mangalsutra scene was beautiful...TejVi's gift was the best...loved TejRi equation..and the thodi thodi sanskaari thoughts of them was just awww... 😳

tasnim.. 🤗

Nex is gonna be sanskaari with a drunken confession coming up..🤗

OS hi sahi.. CV's se koi umeed nahi bachi ab..😆