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Posted: 8 years ago
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A/N: A humongous Thank you to everyone who read, liked and commented on the first chapter...

Most if not all of the dialogue in the first chapter was in English but writing Gauri in English takes something away from her character. So I'm attempting to write her in Hindi... Any part of her or any other character's dialogue which is in English words is spoken in English.

That's it from me for now, here's the second chapter, enjoy...

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Chapter 2 - His... What?!

Whatever Jhanvi had been about to say, was forever lost as she got interrupted by a feminine shriek from upstairs. Ishaana jerked in her seat in shock, trying to figure out what was going on and found her confusion only deepening when she saw the other women grinning at each other and shaking their heads in resignation as if random womanly shrieks were a run-of-the-mill thing in OM.

Before she could form another thought, the shriek was followed by some giggles and another little yell before she heard and then saw a petite girl run down the stairs, looking back intermittently to check for pursuit. The girl... no young woman was fair, with sharp features dominated by a pair of almond eyes which were at the moment glittering in excitement. Clad in a simple purple salwar kurta with an intricately embroidered dupatta flowing out behind her, she made a beeline for the ladies with a wide mischievous smile.

Dadi smiled back at her benevolently as she bent to take the old lady's blessing, her hand resting on the bent head of the young lady, caressing her silky, waist-length hair for a moment before sliding down to cup her chin

"Ab kya kiya hai tune puttar? Aaj na, tum mere peeche nahin chupne waali..."

Ishaana watched, distracted from searching for Omkara, as the young woman's face screwed up in a dramatic fake pout and beseeching puppy eyes made their appearance

"Kya dadi... aap bhi aaj unki side le rahe ho. Aap to hamesha meri side pe hote ho na?"

"Magar aaj aisa nahin ho sakta Gauri puttar... Aaj subhe subhe hi mere pyaare pote ne mujhse wada le liya tha ki aaj ke din jo bhi ho, mein uski hi side loon. Aur waise bhi tujhe to pata hai, mein hamesha tum dono ki side pe hoon... Waise bata to sahi, aaj tune kiya hi kya hai?"

Without a word the young woman, Gauri, brought her clenched fist up and opened it with a triumphant expression, letting everyone see what he hand held... It was a bunch of plain black hair ties.

Ishaana couldn't make head or tail of what was happening in front of her and she turned bewildered eyes to everyone else who seemed to either be shaking their heads smiling fondly at Gauri once more or were outright laughing in shared glee with her.

Anika and Priyanka high-fived her laughingly, while Dadi and Jhanvi were fondly smiling at the sight.

"Wah Bhabhi! Aap ne to kamal kar diya aaj. Mujhe nahin laga ki aap ye aaj kar paoge magar aap to ekdum amazing nikli!"

Bhabhi?!... that meant that this woman was married to one of the Oberoi brothers. Shivaay was obviously married to Anika who was sitting right there. And Rudra, as per what Jhanvi had said, was married to Saumya who she had met previously and who was definitely not the woman in front of her. And that left just one Oberoi brother for consideration... and it was a name Ishaana didn't want to consider.

Ishaana had come back to OM with a clear idea of what... rather who, she wanted and a vague plan as to how to achieve it. But a married Omkara had never factored into any of her plans.

And that this woman... this petite, long haired sanskari type thing sitting on the floor in front of Dadi, could just not be Omkara Singh Oberoi's wife. Omkara was a man par excellence - an artist, a connoisseur and a person of refined tastes. How could he be happily married to someone so commonplace and unremarkable? Granted, she was pretty in an elfin sort of way, but she had none of the characteristics that Ishaana knew Omkara had been looking for in his life partner.

When she had been in his life, Ishaana had come to know of his likes and dislikes, and she knew very well that Omkara liked tall, willowy figured women with an artistic bent and an attitude to boot. He needed a strong, independent woman in his life, someone who could stand up to him and his adarshvadi type ideals. And from first impressions, this Gauri didn't seem to fit any part of that bill. She was tiny, child-like in her face and innocent attitude, appeared to be simple and unrefined and quite traditional in her outlook and manners. There was no way the Omkara Singh Oberoi she knew could be happy with this girl.

Mentally giving herself a pep talk and planning to find out more about this situation, Ishaana sat back to watch the events as they progressed, trying to figure out if she still had any chance to become someone important in Omkara's life.

"Are kaise nahin karti? Khidki-tod idea aakhir kisne diya tha?"

"Haan Anika Di... aapke idea ke liye thank you. Ekdum perfectly kaam kar gaya. Unhe to pata bhi nahin chala hoga ab tak ki yeh hair ties hum ne chura liye hain. Ab hum dekhte hain aaj woh kaise apne baalon ko hamesha ki tarah baandhke aayenge."

"Are Gauri... aaj uska birthday hai. Aaj usko apni manmaani kar lene do na..."

Oh... to aaj Omkara ka birthday hai... What better day to surprise him than today? It might be the best opportunity for her to return to Omkara's life in whatever capacity, thought Ishaana.

"Hume pata hai aap yahi kahengi Maaji... magar aap hi bataiye... kya aapko unhe nahin dekhna aaj pehle ki tarah khule baalon ke saath?"

"Wo... You're right. Mere Om ko waise dekhe hue bahut din ho gaye hain. I am not saying ki I approve of this, but mujhe bhi Om ko pehle ki tarah dekhna hai. Uski happiness to bade dinon baad laut aayi hai and aaj use pehle ki tarah khule baal wale version mein bhi dekh loongi to it'll be amazing..."

"Thank you Maaji... Ab aap sab ka kaam ye hai ki agar Omkara ji yahaan aayen, to aap logon ne mujhe nahin dekha... okay?"

Just as Gauri was about to bolt from there for parts unknown, she looked up at Jhanvi and sitting next to her, Ishaana.

"Oh sorry... hum itna harharaaike bhaag rahe the ki humne notice his nahin kiya ki koi mehmaan aaya hai. Disturb karne ke liye maaf kar dijiye Maaji"

"Sorry bolne ki zaroorat nahin hai... Gauri, yeh Ishaana hai... Yeh kuch saal pehle Om ki... dost hua karti thi"

Jhanvi sounded a bit uncomfortable as she tried to introduce her son's ex-girlfriend to her daughter-in-law without sounding too callous.

"And Ishaana, I'm sure you would've understood by now... she's-"

"GAURI!..."

Ishaana stiffened as she heard Omkara's voice once more... three years had only served to make his voice sound that much sexier. If his voice was able to affect her to this extent, what would happen when he stood in front of her? That there was a definite amount of anger in that single word she'd heard was just a bonus that settled it in her mind that maybe Omkara and Gauri's relationship might not all be the bed of roses everyone else thought it was.

"Lagta hai Om aaj SSO ver 2 ban gaya hai Chutki...bhag le, agar yahaan ayega to Zulfi Singh Oberoi ko mein sambhal loongi"

Another mischievous glint lit in Gauri's eyes as she nodded to Anika and got up hurriedly

"Ab hume yahaan se harharaaike bhaagna padega... Sorry Dadi, Maaji. Hum abhi jaa rahe hain. It was nice to meet you Ishaana ji. Omkara ne hume aapke bare mein bahut kuch bataya hai... Aaj shaam ko hum sab ne ghar mein Omkara ji ke liye party rakhi hai... agar aap bhi aayengi to sabko bahut acha lagega."

In seconds, she was sprinting off but since she'd been intent on finishing every bit of her verbal invitation to Ishaana, she failed to notice as she turned a corner, that she was going to run straight into the person she was running from. That is, until she ran right into a very familiar hard chest and got caged in some beloved strong arms. Unable to override her first instinct as a wife to snuggle in her husband's arms, Gauri burrowed a bit further into her Jatadhari's chest before looking up at him with puppy eyes turned up to the maximum.


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A/N: That was the second chapter guys... please write to me with any feedback you might have, every little bit helps 😊

Don't forget to like and comment...
Edited by writergenie17 - 7 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
awww lovely update šŸ‘

will there be any flashback of Rikara story ?


plz do introduce and would love to read how ishana going to try her bit ?


hope here jatadhaari hippi loves his wifey a lotšŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Super story yaa... loved both the chapters... its so much of fun...

Ishana walking back with plans only to be confronted by a happily settled Omkara n his Gauri is a brilliant part to explore... i loved Gauris interaction with the family n the tiny bit with her husband... shes a dynamite... bubbling along n making everyone happy... i loved how much she conveyed to Ishana who seemed still stuck in the past in that small convo before falling in the arms of her husband...

Cant wait to read more... you go fine...

Thanks for now...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a cute update... Gauri is trying to steal his hair ties...And he succeeded ishaana's wanted omkara back in her life but he is already taken... She still has hope seeinbomkara shouting... If he is that doesn't mean he is available waiting for next...

Such a cute hug at the last awiee...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome Loved it
wow it's total different...
so ishaana is back
but here om is happily leaving with gauri...
I really hope that she will understand that om is really happy with gauri
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PSA : To all my readers, I am a newbie and so get only 10 posts per day. I am still learning to ration it out properly... so if there is a delay in updating or replying to your comments, please understand and forgive.

Also, I'm gonna be replying to all your amazing comments in this one long post due to my need to reply to your love and encouragement but also my sad management skills which don't leave me with enough posts left each day, to update my fics...

Cheers 😃


...Thank you?

Originally posted by: pt311288

awww lovely update šŸ‘

will there be any flashback of Rikara story ?


plz do introduce and would love to read how ishana going to try her bit ?


hope here jatadhaari hippi loves his wifey a lotšŸ˜†


Thanks pt... There will be a flashback in a couple of chapters... let me give you some RiKara before that...😳 and you don't need to worry about this jatadhari hippie... he does love his wife a lot!


Thanks angel SRJ!

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Super story yaa... loved both the chapters... its so much of fun...

Ishana walking back with plans only to be confronted by a happily settled Omkara n his Gauri is a brilliant part to explore... i loved Gauris interaction with the family n the tiny bit with her husband... shes a dynamite... bubbling along n making everyone happy... i loved how much she conveyed to Ishana who seemed still stuck in the past in that small convo before falling in the arms of her husband...

Cant wait to read more... you go fine...

Thanks for now...


Aah A-Musing-Me! You're making me blush... Thank you for being such an awesome personā¤ļø I am glad you liked my Gauri... You'll definitely see a lot more of her and her hippie pati soon!

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Such a cute update... Gauri is trying to steal his hair ties...And he succeeded ishaana's wanted omkara back in her life but he is already taken... She still has hope seeinbomkara shouting... If he is that doesn't mean he is available waiting for next...

Such a cute hug at the last awiee...


Thanks Ila!... I'm glad youliked the last chapter... Yes, we know how tadibaaz these Oberoi men are... The Omkara in this story is definitely not available to anyone other than his wifey.

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it

wow it's total different...
so ishaana is back
but here om is happily leaving with gauri...
I really hope that she will understand that om is really happy with gauri


Hi Ayushi! Thanks for commenting on this chapter... I'm glad you loved it. Ishaana is here with a plan in mind... I'm still in the process of writing this one so we'll have to see how the plan unfolds. But for now, stay tuned for the next chapter!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for being so patient and commenting such encouraging things! I am so glad that you guys liked my Omkara, my Gauri and even my Ishaana... As thanks, here's a GauRiKara-licious chapter, just for you... Enjoy!
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Chapter 3 - Birthday Gifts

Omkara was on a mission to find his missing wife and exact revenge for her little stealing act that morning. His hair was in desperate need of a trim and he really didn't want to wear it open today of all days, when he knew about 78000 pictures would be taken. But apparently his little chiraiyya had a different idea and she'd very cleverly taken away all of his hair ties when he'd been busy searching for an errant thumb tack on their carpet that he was now sure had been only in his wifey's overactive filmy imagination.

In his intent pursuit, he'd even overlooked the fact that there seemed to be some guests at OM. And now that he had his little love just where he wanted her, in his arms, Omkara was treated to the cutest puppy dog eyes.

"Hmmm... those are cute and they would usually get you out of trouble on a normal day. But today is special so that's not gonna happen"

"Acha?... Aaj kya special hai?"

"Oh... itni jaldi bhool gayee? Abhi aadhe ghante pehle hi to tumse apna Birthday gift liya tha."

"Acha to aaj wo gift ho gaya?... to gift hi sahi. At least hume kuch aur to aapko tohfa dena nahin padega right? Par gift nahin... gifts kahiye. Ek par to aap kabhi rukte nahin ho..."

"Did you want me to stop at one Gauri?" he smirked at her with one eyebrow raised

"Humne aisa kabhi nahin kaha na..." the blush she was fighting valiantly against was winning.

"Nahin... par tumne kabhi complain bhi to nahin kiya pehle" that sexy smirk just deepened and she lost her battle against the blush, feeling her face redden like a tomato.

"Aur ab bhi nahin kar rahe... kabhi karenge bhi nahin. Vaise how many was that?"

He pretended to think about it, folding her closer to him and leaning back against the wall

"I think... that was about 6?.. yeah I wanna say 6"

"Acha... to Mr. Omkara Singh Oberoi math mein itne weak hein? Subah subah ke 4 aur... abhi thodi der pehle ke... let's say 7. Milake 11 hogaye hein. Aur abhi..."

She counted one her fingers...

"17 baaki hain..."

"Agar tumhe pata hi tha to poocha kyun? Vaise wo sab itna detail mein yaad rakhti ho? Aur gin bhi leti ho?... Wah yaar tum to badi-"

"Shhh... aap bhi na, koi sun leta to?"

"Abhi logon ki yaad bahut aa rahi hai tumhe... jab 11 aur 17 ke baare mein argue kar rahi thi to yaad nahin tha?" he continued with a smirk

"Chaliye... chodiye hume. Aaj aapka special din hai to ghar mein bahut kaam hai na. Aur ghar mein mehmaan bhi aaye hein. Oh... hum to bhool hi gaye! Aapki wo purani girlfriend aayi hein."

"Girlfriend?! Kaun hai?" Om sounded puzzled and a little cautious

"Woh... Ishaana ji ko dekha humne baahar, living room mein sab ke saath. Bahut sundar dikhti hein... Hume pata hai ki aap unse gussa the pehle, par abhi teen saal ho gaye hein aur ab aap woh Omkara nahin hein. Agar aap bura na maanein to hum ek baat kahein aapse?"

Omkara's arms tightened fractionally around her waist at the mention of Ishaana, but he nodded fairly calmly at her question, waiting for her to go on.

"H... Hume lagta hai ki aapko shayad Ishaana ji ko... ek mauka aur dena chahiye. Tab unki koi majboori thi magar ab aap bhi badal gaye hein aur shayad wo bhi. Ab agar itne saal baad wo wapas ayi hein OM mein to iska matlab hai ki wo shayad aapki dost banna chahti hein... phirse. Magar ye bas humara sujhaav hai... hume jo sahi laga, humne aapse keh diya. Aage aapko jo correct lage, aap wahi karna. Just ek baar is baare mein ho sake to soch lijiye..."

Gauri looked at her husband apprehensively... she knew he looked calm from the outside but that his emotions had been roiled from within. Ishaana's betrayal had shaken him the first time around and the days after Gauri's confession of being Chulbul had only made the sting of betrayal from people he'd let himself become close to, all the more tough to bear. This was only going to bring back all those negative emotions to the fore and that was the last thing she wanted, especially on his birthday. But if her Om could leave this emotional scar behind and move forward today, Gauri was all for taking the risk.

Even as Chulbul, she had known that Omkara rarely made any friends. If Ishaana could be a friend, someone who he had been comfortable around in the past, she was willing to take the risk and undertake the worrying and tension every woman felt when her husband became friends with a beautiful ex. The reward would outweigh the risk many times over...

Om looked at his wife, surprised at her suggestion

"Tum... You're saying ki mein Ishaana ko ek aur chance doon. Gauri you know that she wasn't just a friend right? Tumhe is se koi problem nahin hai? You don't worry ki wo phir se mere kareeb aane ki koshish kare to?"

Gauri shook her head emphatically and snuggled closer to Om's heart, wrapping her arms around his waist

"Hume Ishaana ji ke baare mein bas wo cheezein pata hein jo aap ne humse kahi hein. Hum unko nahin jaante thik se... Magar hum aapko jaante hein aur hume aap par sabse zyaada vishwaas hai. Hum jaante hein ki aapki life mein humari jageh koi aur le hi nahin sakta aur na hi humare liye is poore universe mein aapke jaisa koi ho sakta hai. To hume koi fikr nahin hai. Haan, agar wo Ishaana kuch try kare na, to hum kya khade khade phool todte rahenge? Ek jhaap mein deewar pe sata na de to hum bhi Gauri Kumari... sorry, Gauri Omkara Singh Oberoi nahin"

The conviction in her voice and fire in her eyes as she looked up only made Om tilt his head down and cover her sweet mouth with his own. Right there, in the middle of a corridor, not even meters away from the rest of his family Omkara Singh Oberoi let his wife know exactly how much he liked it when she claimed to be his and claimed him as hers.

When they parted a couple of minutes later, he smiled lazily at her and asked

"And how many is it now? I recall you saying 11 at last count. So out of 28, I still have what 16 kisses left? After all mujhe apni biwi se at least 28 kisses to milne chahiye on my 28th birthday"

"Chalo aap bhi kya yaad rakhoge ki aapka Gauri Omkara Singh Oberoi se paala pada tha... rakh lijiye, yeh wala humari taraf se free tha. Your count is still at 17"

And with a sweet smirk on her face, she turned and ran off down the corridor leaving her amused husband shaking his head and walking off to greet his family and get the meeting with Ishaana over with.

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That's a wrap on Chapter 3 guys... I hope you liked romantic OmRi...

Please don't forget to like and comment your thoughts and ideas... I love to hear from you!

As always, any and all feedback is highly appreciated.


Edited by writergenie17 - 7 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww :') Rikara feels right at the heart😳 read all 3 parts in one go šŸ˜† waiting for your next installment
(Gonna come online every now and then to check on updates. Cause I'm so extra like that šŸ˜‰)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aweee.. Genie... *hugs*... such a romantic update this is.. super glad that we got this before Omkara meets Ishana.. such a soother.. yeppp m as relaxed as Gauri .. Ishana can try things out but the kinda slow brewed bond that RiKara share makes it funny to see anyone try making headways into this.. all the best to her.. hehe.. n this RiKara are totes adorbs.. can continue reading about them for pages without a complain.. n with your smooth n easy writin skills loving this story that's gonna make RiKara love stronger..


Loving it.. thanks for now.. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😊

lovey dovey update

wil love to read elaborated romance between rikara 😳 just a wish if u give it a try

thnq u so much for lovely update šŸ˜†

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