Lost Chances - A RiKara FF Chapter 17 on Pg 64 (05/04)

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 28

Posted: 7 years ago

#471

This was amazing loved it so much.
Superb.
Continue soon.

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#472

I loved the way you penned down the vulnerability of Omkara..the mere thought of something happening to Gauri is enough to shake him to the core..
The love Omkara has for Gauri was shown so beautifully here..and I loved how Gauri assured him..
Gauri has become sanskaari chiraiyya.. ☺️
Sanskaar is good you know.. 😉 😛 😆
Waiting for the next chapter..

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#473

It was really amazing update dear

I just loved it

He loves her so much,she is his life and he can't live without his life

And the thought of losing her..he was angry with himself..too worried and scared

And the way she assured him...whole situation was wriiten beautifully

And at the last some sanskari tadka you add was inyeresting and ☺️☺️

Continue soon

Edited by rikara94 - 7 years ago

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#474

That was perfect reaction from Omkara

He can't be angry on her, but defenitely worried for her

Loved the last bit... Naughty couple

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#475

I LOVED IT !!!! JUST beautiful and the end... Damn Gauri surely knows how to spice up their married life.

I can totally understand Om's anger yet Gauri needed to be the one to face that reporter

It is nice to see how much they care for each other and their safety.

Yet my favorite part was when she called him Om...knowing that only when they were alone she would call him that way made it even more special ❤️

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Aarathi krishnan

@Aarathi85

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#476

Liked it...its awesome...iam happy that om is not so angry with gauri...they are actually perfect couple...its good that they have decided to take their relation to next level...the last part was hot and passionate...

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guy3

@guy3

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#477

First off, wonderful story and I like how you have sensibly handled the characters.
After vivi and Lizzie, was looking for more rikara and am so glad to have found you.
And with that profile pic, you have me eating out of your hands, ms.austen.
Keep it coming, loving this story to bits already

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