Lost Chances - A RiKara FF Chapter 17 on Pg 64 (05/04)

writergenie17 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#1
Hello my fellow forum waasiyon... Aapko Genie ka saadar pranam. 😃
I am brand new at this and would love to have your support and feedback guys. I have recently started watching DBO and fallen in love with RiKara.❤️ I did go back to Ishqbaaz for background info and skimmed through the earlier seasons on Hotstar when I was in India... so if I get any back stories or characterizations wrong, forgive, forget and enjoy the story!

Also, I apologize to any IshKara shippers... this is not going to be fun for you. 😭

Chapter Index:

01 : Pg 1

02 : Pg 2

03 : Pg 3

04 : Pg 6

05 : Pg 8

06 : Pg 11

07 : Pg 13

08 : Pg 15

09 : Pg 18

10 : Pg 24

11 : Pg 26

12 : Pg 34

13 : Pg 39

14 : Pg 46

15 : Pg 52

16 : Pg 59

17 : Pg 64

So without further ado, here's

_________________________________________________________________

Chapter 1 - (Un)Lucky Meetings

Ishaana's nervousness at being back inside OM was obvious by the way her hands wouldn't stop fiddling with her phone as she sat on the simultaneously grand but somehow comfy couch in front of Dadi, Jhanvi aunty, Priyanka and Shivaay's wife Anika. It had been a quirk of fate that Priyanka Oberoi and her sister-in-law Anika had seen her when they'd been out shopping.

That Priyanka had been the one to call out her name and walk up to greet her politely, was a such an astonishing turn of events in and of itself, that Ishaana had not even thought to walk off before they could approach. She was trying to convince herself that it was unfortunate that she'd been back in Mumbai and in that mall just when the two Oberoi women were, but who was she kidding? There had not been one day in the intervening three years that Ishaana had not thought about one Omkara Singh Oberoi and wondered what if.

The Omkara she'd tried to con but had ended up falling for had spoiled her rotten for other men. Every man she looked at in the days, weeks and months following her departure from his life, Ishaana found lacking in comparison to her praannath' as she'd jokingly called him. He truly was the best of them... Caring, sensitive, truthful, inclusive and very romantic but at the same time courageous and so unique, that Ishaana knew she wouldn't find anyone better even if she tried.

It didn't hurt that he was easily susceptible to emotional entreaties and appeals to his softer side. Omkara Singh Oberoi had been the perfect target for her, if only she hadn't been so stupid as to fall for him in return. She had tried to move on, don't get me wrong, but it truly hadn't worked. For better or worse, Ishaana was stuck on Omkara Singh Oberoi.

And now that an opportunity such as this had been dropped into her lap, she knew she had to capitalize on it. She just wasn't sure how... Though all the ladies in front of her had been unfailingly polite to her, there was a definite awkwardness in the air. But the fact that Omkara's younger sister had invited her to OM herself, Ishaana wanted to take that as a sign that she, if not the rest of the ladies, wanted her there... maybe even back in her brother's life?

Telling herself that nothing ventured meant nothing gained, Ishaana took a breath and tried to make an attempt to reconnect

"A lot has changed since I was last here..."

It was Dadi who answered...

"Oh yes... It had been about three years now beta. Lots of changes have come and gone... and some are here to stay" she said with a slight smile on her face, glancing at Jhanvi, who also smiled back.

Failing to understand the rampant subtext in that statement, Ishaana could only look on in a puzzled manner

"Yes... Shivaay and Anika got married soon after you... had to leave beta. They have a darling little one named Shubham. And my Rudra also got married to Saumya, you know her, right? They're both in the US now, pursuing their higher studies. Oh... Tej and I have separated."

Ishaana could only stop herself from gaping at Omkara's mom as she spoke about the huge changes in their lives as if discussing the weather and managing to get a subtle dig at her at the same time

"Oh... Congratulations Anika... and I'm sorry about you and uncle...Aunty.. I didn't" she stuttered, thrown off completely

"There's nothing to be sorry about Ishaana. You couldn't have known... besides, there's nothing to actually be sorry for. It is not the ideal situation but there are lots of families that are not ideal but manage to still remain happy."

The matter of fact attitude from the usually emotional Jhanvi further confused Ishaana while another issue worried her... there had been zero mentions of her oldest son. No one had in fact spoken anything about Omkara. With her heart in her mouth, Ishaana looked around, trying to figure out if something had happened to him. She knew that Omkara was emotionally sensitive and easily affected or manipulated... and that she'd probably left him broken from the inside when he found that she'd been conning him.

"And... Everyone else is doing okay?"

This time, it was Priyanka who pipped up

"Oh Choti maa and Chote papa are out on another of their vacations..." she giggled, causing everyone to smile indulgently at her

"And I'm currently helping Bhabhi here run a charity... We run a charity that benefits underprivileged women and children"

"That's great... Priyanka."

Ishaana couldn't stop herself from low key trying to look for any signs that Omkara was still in OM

"Do you need anything Ishaana? You're looking for something... Or someone"

Anika, who'd spoken, looked at her with a knowing smirk while her voice sounded as innocent as a lamb's

Ishaana couldn't stop herself from flushing uncomfortably while she fought against bending her head down in embarrassment

"Oh... ummm... O..Om..kara... I was just wondering about Om.. kara"

"Oh yeah! We haven't even mentioned him since you got here... Om..."

Anika was deftly interrupted by Jhanvi, who turned to her with a slight smirk on her face

"Om is doing... well, he's become very different from back then Ishaana... you see he's-"

______________________________________

A/N: Sorry about the cliffhanger! Please read, like and comment on the story and let me know what you think...

Edited by writergenie17 - 7 years ago


DO NOT COPY THIS POST AS THIS IS EXCLUSIVE TO INDIA FORUMS


Created

Last reply

Replies

476

Views

130.2k

Users

72

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

AsadZoyaILU thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Hey i am also a rikara fan but was and still am ishkaras fan. plz dont be unfair to ishkara fans by upseting ishana in ur story
smrithy14 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#3
Hey genie
I read this part in tellyupdate
I loved it
this is Dbo forum so don't worry here rikaraians is majority
plz update next part soon
sara1990 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#4
I love Rikara too. Please update soon
maivelli thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#5
updates next part soon

plz plz plz 👏
writergenie17 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: smrithy14

Hey genie

I read this part in tellyupdate
I loved it
this is Dbo forum so don't worry here rikaraians is majority
plz update next part soon


Hey!

I am posting this on TU too parallel-ly... nice to find you on two different sites!

Thank you for your sweet comment and encouragement 😳

I am updating as soon as I finish writing... so expect updates soon!
Edited by writergenie17 - 8 years ago
writergenie17 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Love to read update soon


Thanks! Will update in a day or two...
writergenie17 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: sara1990

I love Rikara too. Please update soon


Hi! thanks for the comment... Will update in a day or two...
writergenie17 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: pt311288

updates next part soon

plz plz plz 👏


I will update as soon as I finish writing the next part which should be in a day or two..
writergenie17 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: Sofna

Interesting. Do update soon


Thanks... Will update in a day or two.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".