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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: twerping
Oh my god!! You are the best!! The way you've created the backstory for the two elder brothers here particularly... it's absolutely stunning! Omkara's distrust of Tej and his commitment to his family, Shivay's obsession with status and family lineage and with the last bit, creating the perfect ground for Om's own descent into addiction...
Amazing! Absolutely amazing! Also, Rudra's own vulnerability to pain and grief making him what he is today...wow man! just so impressive!

Eagerly waiting for part 2~

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Hi dear!

I have many of your works pending to read. I will soon start over them Sorry for the delay.

I feel you dear. Writer's block is a horrible thing. Makes me feel almost suffocated.

As for the plot, you have taken the few facts cv's have granted us, taken the ideals of the characters, added your own interpretation and weaved a beautiful tale.

I loved the fact that everything is in its own place. This fic of yours is "change".

Shivaay changes to what he is, Rudra's alternate facade comes up and Om, if I am not wrong, steps forward to the darker aspect of his life.

I will wait for the next.

Niki

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Why are you not satisfied with this? Its A.W.E.S.O.M.E!

I wish this is how it will be in the show as well. A much needed and anticipated back story for the brothers. Shivay's 'past' perfectly explains his 'today'. His disgust for everyone not with an influential surname. My heart went out to him when he got separated from his friend and heard the blast. Such a traumatizing moment that can haunt one for life.

The start of Omkara's contempt for Tej and now Om's introduction to drugs. You have covered it all. Please continue! Will be waiting 🤗

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Anjum.

@Anjum.

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Once again, your stunningly, intricately woven story has blown me away! An amazing look into the minds of each ObBro. I felt for each and every one of the characters! You've done an amazing job!

And don't be too hard on yourself I'm sure what you're working on is going to be awesome!

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an_k

@an_k

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

hi dear...read it in the morning but was in a hurry so didn't comment...it was amazing...you wrote so so so beautifully that words won't be enough...everything was so well connected and everything made sense n logic...i am just waiting for the next part plzz plz plz update it soon

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: falala333
Nice one.. a kind of imaginative back story to the ObBros and why they are the way they are currently.. looking forward to the next part😊

thanks a lot 😃

this idea always fascinated me as to why ObBros are the way they are😆

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: grownup
no words soumya didi...I was awesome just loved it...brilliant...there is no reason I find not to be satisfied and not to continue writing... it was...

pls continue writing...

looking forward to the next part...

thanks a lot darling...btw how old are you?😆

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: skm27395
Hey Saumya I m a big fan of urs...DAT was something out of this world..u tried to reconnect their current traits to past trauma which I appreciate👏this is one of ur best yet⭐️do continue sooon😊

thank you shreya...haha...

thanks a lot for the encouragement means a lot especially now😊

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Meha101
Intense...really felt the pain obbros went through...great backstory for what they are now.i kind of able to relate to how they became what they are.

thanks a lot.

yes i took their current traits and made up a backstory for that.