You mean the world to me. ObBros TS - Page 4

Originally posted by: srividhya68

wow
it was really awesome
loved it so much
eagerly waiting for the nxt part
plz cont

Originally posted by: realraul2307

Wow, nice story!👏 Waiting for the next part! Thank you for the PM😊

Originally posted by: Cookieg

Nicely done
Please continue the story
Looking forward to the next update ⭐️

Originally posted by: sunflower52

Amazing loved your OS and how you connected the past of bro's to their present characterization. 👏

Hopefull this type should be shown so we could understand why they are like this. Please do continue

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

This was simply amazing 😳
Very beautifully and imaginatively penned down 👏
Looking forward to the next part

Originally posted by: ...Angels...

This is such a beautiful part👏

Dear, I could feel Shivaay's pain😭

No wonder he has turned out to be like this, it's mostly Tej and Saniya's fault😡

And you made my cutie pie cry to😭

It was so cute, when he was looking for his Shivaay bhaiya.

Even though Om kept his pain silent, I could still feel it because of the way you write.

When you write you weave the words together in a truly breathtaking way

I LOVED it❤️

Do update soon!

Thanks for the pm🤗

Originally posted by: Sparklle801

I was being so emotional reading it. So much sadness, three obbros face so much in their childhood. I am feeling so bad for laddoo and shivaay. I think this is the time when om will get caught in drug addiction, just a guess though.
Nice part, waiting for the next.

Originally posted by: arachne

Senpai, notice me! 😆

I am a fan of Poisonous Love, very beautifully made and made me believe in a ship that I did not even think about.

Why did I bring that up? Well because that shows the amount of talent that you have as a storyteller. You told a story in that VM that was so believable, you converted me to the idea of SvetKara 😆

This piece of work is beautiful, providing backstories for all three brothers, and what stories they are. The pain, the challenges they face and how all of this connected to their present characteristics. And as a fan of Rudra, the amount of angst you put him in saddens and gladdens me at the same time. So much angst!

I would love to be able to read more, to see the end of the 3 shots.

But I also understand that a writer's block is not something small. I hope you will be able to overcome that and write the continuation to this shot. But if you can't that is ok too.

Ganbatte ne 🤗

Originally posted by: twerping

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Hi dear!

I have many of your works pending to read. I will soon start over them Sorry for the delay.

I feel you dear. Writer's block is a horrible thing. Makes me feel almost suffocated.

As for the plot, you have taken the few facts cv's have granted us, taken the ideals of the characters, added your own interpretation and weaved a beautiful tale.

I loved the fact that everything is in its own place. This fic of yours is "change".

Shivaay changes to what he is, Rudra's alternate facade comes up and Om, if I am not wrong, steps forward to the darker aspect of his life.

I will wait for the next.

Niki