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realraul2307

@realraul2307

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Wow, nice story!👏 Waiting for the next part! Thank you for the PM😊

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Wandering about

@Nomadic_Vibe

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: grownup
do u all mind me asking...what on earth is this RES???? I have heard this over a million times in this forum but I have never been able to figure out what is it?? mind me asking what is the full form????

Red is short for Reserved😃

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Cookieg

@Cookieg

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Nicely done
Please continue the story
Looking forward to the next update ⭐️

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deejagi

@deejagi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

lovely. Short of words. Please update the next part soon. 😊

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Ume Salma Kakal

@sunflower52

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Amazing loved your OS and how you connected the past of bro's to their present characterization. 👏

Hopefull this type should be shown so we could understand why they are like this. Please do continue

Edited by sunflower52 - 9 years ago

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

This was simply amazing 😳
Very beautifully and imaginatively penned down 👏
Looking forward to the next part

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---Angel---

@---Angel---

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

This is such a beautiful part👏

Dear, I could feel Shivaay's pain😭

No wonder he has turned out to be like this, it's mostly Tej and Saniya's fault😡

And you made my cutie pie cry to😭

It was so cute, when he was looking for his Shivaay bhaiya.

Even though Om kept his pain silent, I could still feel it because of the way you write.

When you write you weave the words together in a truly breathtaking way

I LOVED it❤️

Do update soon!

Thanks for the pm🤗

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Saumya

@Sparklle801

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

I was being so emotional reading it. So much sadness, three obbros face so much in their childhood. I am feeling so bad for laddoo and shivaay. I think this is the time when om will get caught in drug addiction, just a guess though.
Nice part, waiting for the next.

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arachne

@arachne

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Senpai, notice me! 😆

I am a fan of Poisonous Love, very beautifully made and made me believe in a ship that I did not even think about.

Why did I bring that up? Well because that shows the amount of talent that you have as a storyteller. You told a story in that VM that was so believable, you converted me to the idea of SvetKara 😆

This piece of work is beautiful, providing backstories for all three brothers, and what stories they are. The pain, the challenges they face and how all of this connected to their present characteristics. And as a fan of Rudra, the amount of angst you put him in saddens and gladdens me at the same time. So much angst!

I would love to be able to read more, to see the end of the 3 shots.

But I also understand that a writer's block is not something small. I hope you will be able to overcome that and write the continuation to this shot. But if you can't that is ok too.

Ganbatte ne 🤗