VIDHA SS: I Am Nothing Without You - Page 5

Barbie... Make VIPS beat RA black blue .. grey... 😆😡

Originally posted by: rama_2010

Barbie... Make VIPS beat RA black blue .. grey... 😆😡

hey dear.. romance bhi likhogi na 😳

only two parts left...

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

only two parts left...

3 part action packed and fourth mein romance..

kyun u did not like it kya??

SS bht acha likha again...
Mere vipu ko q rulaya...😡😆 chalo it's ok... bt no more rona dhona plzz..

I loved how u made Vipu smart enough to fake hia hatred..😳 mera isshmarty Vipu...😳

RL was too gud in her phone convo.. she was Barb-ish there. .😛

Ok I hope u take it till 5th.. ofc if u hav time to do so...😛

Barbie Excellent really i felt like reading a novel types..Excellent narration, can imagine the scenes thru ur wordz.👏

Barbie kal review dungi...i have no patience to read anything today...when you have time read my post. Acha hi likhi hogi meri behana 😆Till then take care.

Originally posted by: rama_2010

arey i iiked it very much especially the turmoil that vips is going thru...

i liked a brooding dutta .. after the marriage wala track... 😆 especially the last two weeks of dec 2010 episodes...

oh those dec episodes😆😆...he used to beat everyone black and blue who ever used to come in front of him...itna gussa ho gaya tha woh beautiful face dekh ke😆😆...i had thought that he wuld have jumped in joy that kind heart ke saath beautiful chehera free mein mil gaya hai..😆😆

Originally posted by: NusiSg

SS bht acha likha again...
Mere vipu ko q rulaya...😡😆 chalo it's ok... bt no more rona dhona plzz..

I loved how u made Vipu smart enough to fake hia hatred..😳 mera isshmarty Vipu...😳

RL was too gud in her phone convo.. she was Barb-ish there. .😛

Ok I hope u take it till 5th.. ofc if u hav time to do so...😛

nahi nahi this is the final rona dhona...hamara pati next time bilkul bhi nahi royega i promise...promise from ur SS😆😆

Originally posted by: nandyy55

Barbie Excellent really i felt like reading a novel types..Excellent narration, can imagine the scenes thru ur wordz.👏

Opening scene was there u gave ur touch Dha lying on Vipz hand.

Romance needed 😆 & really u can write more means y 4 chapters can drag to 7 parts bcoz u started on Monday so end it on sunday.

Finally shud i say this or not dont know😳

Have to say this better u become a writer by profession 😊

C u later on with nxt msg.

u dont know how big compliment u gave to me...thank u so much...ok i will try to write many more things but if i write 7 parts then when will i think about my next story when safedians will again go to meet vipu baba😆😆😆

Originally posted by: pearl100

Barbie kal review dungi...i have no patience to read anything today...when you have time read my post. Acha hi likhi hogi meri behana 😆Till then take care.

sure ..no problem..u read it later..phursat se baith ke and then comment karna😃