VIDHA SS: I Am Nothing Without You - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: samanthana

barbo


Hugs dear ..

It was really good and you took separation at first place . Bring it on intense girl .. You can do it .. Waiting for the part II . Bring your sense of humour along with intense .. Good going barbo


Khoob bhallooo likethi acchi .😳

Flying colors from baba tharaf se .. DP deko

Thank you so much Sammy Dear😳..i am glad that u liked my story...hugs for u too for liking it and commenting here🤗

and yes i saw ur Dp..
teri heere jaisi ankhen , ankhon mein hai lakhon baatein, baaton mein ras ki barsaatein ...mujhme pyar ki pyar jagaye😳😳...sundar sundar deep deep ankhen
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

WELL done barbs love the style ,tone of the a SS... you have included familiar settings ,which makes it easier to capture the true flavour of the SS.. staying away from each other tapped on my immediate pathos ..and thus cannot wait toread how you continue the SS by making events that will make viplav and dhani come close to each other... hammie will look out for " Iam Nothing"..
much love hammie

OMG Aj mere naseeb khul gaye😳...my dearest friend cum english teacher appreciated my SS😊...Thanks a lot Hammie...Ur comments always mean a lot to me...Thank you🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Titu..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗
u r a writer..😲 woh v acha..👏 well done!! i loved the first part..!! continue ASAP...!!😃
Atleast here RA is behaving like a true villain!😆😆 Jaldi update kariyo behena!! get their emotions properly expressed!! waiting!! waiting!!

Mujhe PM kardena nxt part update karne k baad!😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Spreeti98

Titu..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗

u r a writer..😲 woh v acha..👏 well done!! i loved the first part..!! continue ASAP...!!😃
Atleast here RA is behaving like a true villain!😆😆 Jaldi update kariyo behena!! get their emotions properly expressed!! waiting!! waiting!!

Mujhe PM kardena nxt part update karne k baad!😆😆

thanks for commenting...will PM u when i will update the next part😊😊
and yes here raja is like a true villain...u know nah that i am more intelligent than the cvs😉😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
hey barbie.. what a diversion... from comedy to intense story...
good going girl... loved it and do continue... the last scene
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rama_2010

hey barbie.. what a diversion... from comedy to intense story...

good going girl... loved it and do continue... the last scene

thanks...😊 keep reading ...
i will now update my next part😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Barbs ! I am late ! 😳
Enjoyed reading emotional ride of isolation b/w couple and always craved for hard poised intensive emotions which was never done in actual Hope you will be keep updating us.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cocoatree

Hi Barbs ! I am late ! 😳
Enjoyed reading emotional ride of isolation b/w couple and always craved for hard poised intensive emotions which was never done in actual Hope you will be keep updating us.

its better late than never Archu...thanks...and i am happy that u enjoyed..
i will be updating the next part within two mins😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So friends get ready to go on another emotional roller coaster ride...
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So here I am updating the 2nd part...everyday i will update...within four days my SS will end..😃
feel free to drop any kind of comment..u can tell me if u did not like anything so that i can improve my writing in the next part...
so here we go


Part 2:


It was early morning 4:50 am. She still laid in her husband's arms..her head rested on his shoulders and his hands were securely wrapped around her waist..Viplav woke up and saw dhani still in deep sleep..He picked her up in his strong arms and made her lay on the bed and hurriedly left..


Viplav entered his bedroom and closed the door behind him...He knelt down on the floor and cried like a little baby...Tears were continuously flowing down his cheeks...How could he do that?..How could he neglect his love to this extent?..How could he stoop so low and hurt and kill her everyday by giving those looks full of hatred..She did not go to Ashram because she wanted to be with him..he knew that.. then why was he not allowing her to come near him..??..inspite of knowing how much she craved for him, his attention and his love, he is ignoring her...
"Its better to give her poison and kill her rather than killing her everyday" Viplav said to himself..he laid on the floor and fell asleep there...

Its 11:40am when his Dadiji came to wake him up...He got up and opened the door and then went inside the washroom..


While washing his face he started thinking

*FLASHBACK*

"You are a characterless woman Dhani...just go away...GET OUT"...Viplav shouted at her and she silently left...he then laid on his bed...wanted to go to sleep and prayed for everything to be fine when he would wake up..he just could not belive what he saw and heard in the video...everytime he had supported Dhani, for everything but this time..this time how could he support her?...He heard her saying that she did not love him...In pain and frustration he got up from bed and screamed "DHAANNIII"...He had never felt pain like this before...

It was the next afternoon...he was lying on the bed, lost in thoughts, when suddenly his mobile started ringing...He checked his phone...his phone was silent...then he realised that it was Dhani's phone, which was still lying there on the desk in his room and it was ringing...he ignored it...again it was ringing...he rejected the call without even looking at the screen...It was the third time the phone was ringing...An irritated Viplav, this time noticed that the call was from Tarini Ashram..
He received tha call and before he could utter a word, Raj Laxmi almost shouted from the other side "Dhani did u manage to trap that stupid fellow?...ok then tomorrow I will reach in time with my video recorder...u just manage to send Jijaji out...because just like you I too dont want him to take any extra tensions...we will capture everything and show it to Jijaji and ur chudail mom-in-law and pea-brained sis-in-law...our plan is sure to work...But u r risking ur honour for jijaji and his family...please be careful haan...Ur hubby is lucky to have you who can go to any extent for him and his family...Hello..helloo are u listening to me Dhani?..are u there"..
the phone fell from Viplav's hand and broke ..he stood there shocked stunned...

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Viplav again splashed some water across his face...He was determined to expose Raja soon and that will be a perfect answer to his Mother, Dadaji, dadiji and Shalu...They will understand that they are lucky to have Dhani in her house as their Daughter-In-Law..
But he wanted to keep Dhani out of all these...He knew that no-one is going to believe him, no matter what solid proof he would show them against Raja, if he supported Dhani...So With great difficulty he had to behave like this, fake his hatred for Dhani, to convince everyone that he is not supporting his wife...He knew that once he get some proof against Raja, his family is sure to believe him and go against that creep..
But he knew that he could no longer hide his feelings for her...Her immense love for him is making it impossible for him to stay away from her and hide the truth...


P.S. friends please dont worry Romance will come...only two parts left...if needed i will write till 5th part..but romance will surely come..romance ke bina kaise chalega nahin?😆...till then enjoy this one and please leave ur comments


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Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 9 years ago

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