VIDHA SS: I Am Nothing Without You

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Now its your fault friends😆😆..After my first OS,u encouraged me so much that I could stop myself from writing this SS..
All i can do is sit and rant and bash the CVs for not executing a track properly and sit and dream about how a track should be shown..
So this is an example of my imagination on this current Raja Track..
Here we go


Part 1


"What would have happened of me had I not escaped from that creep"..Dhani shivered on recalling how Raja made advances towards her, his lustful looks and creepy touches brought fear on her face and she trembled for a second..She made a quick thanks to god for saving her from his lustful hands, then rubbing herself, she broke down..

Dhani, sitting down on the floor, started weeping..Hot tears flowed down her eyes and she was venting out every single emotion in her, every peck of pain, every drop of hurt..

The memory of that day was so hard to be forgotten..



*FLASHBACK*


Dhani could sense Viplav's increasing tension with each passing day...He was worried for his little sister, who was then the wife of that cheap fellow...What would happen if Raja got intimate with Shalini and ruin her life...
Dhani had shared this problem with her best friend Raj Laxmi..and together they had planned to trap Raja without informing Viplav...She did not want Viplav to get worried more...
Little did the two innocent girls imagine that Raja was overhearing their convo and their master plan will backfire them..


On the day of the execution of their plan..Dhani send the whole family to watch a movie...But she stayed back, making excuse of having a terrible headache...Viplav too wanted to stay with her but he went out on being constantly requested by Shalini and Dadiji..

Then according to the plan Dhani was telling Raja that she had married Viplav for money and she did not love him and now she wanted to be with Raja...Dhani's words were not to be recorded so Rajlaxmi was not around...And Raja very cleverly, recorded Dhani's words in his mobile..

When the whole family arrived, Raja played the video of Dhani in front of them ..


*FLASHBACK ENDS*


Dhani can never forget that day...

Viplav knelt down on the floor as if his whole world collapsed in front of his eyes...His eyes were filled with tears...Dhani could see his heart breaking in his eyes...
Viplav's heart...which was with him but meant for Dhani, that heart which loved her crazily, that heart which craved for her and now its the same heart which hated her the most..

She remembered Viplav shouted "GO AWAY DHANI...and never try to come in front of me...I dont need Your excuse, I dont need ur support, I dont need you.."..His words had irked her, pricked her, and pained her beyond imagination..Her heart ached in pain but she was devoid of solace..

Viplav refused to sleep with Dhani in the same bedroom that night...But DT KT somehow managed to convince him to stay in his room and Dhani silently walked out of their room..

She is now in this small room where Tripurari and Durga once used to live...
She looked at the pile of clothes on her bed, waiting to be kept inside the wardrobe...She saw that Black Net Saree. which Viplav had gifted her ..She threw away the black saree thinking Viplav too douted her and wept hard...Nothing really seemed to hurt her more than those looks of Viplav full of hatred..

Sitting on the floor, her eyelids started to droop down...She was falling into a deep sleep..


Viplav was standing at the door..He immediately rushed inside and sat on the floor beside Dhani, to prevent her head from falling...Her head rested on his shoulders and both of them fell asleep..



P.S. Now this is my first SS...sorry for the errors...but please leave ur comments...All kinds of comments are welcomed...U can tell me about anything which u did not like...so that I can improve myself
..I will write the next part if u say..







Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gud one barbie. ..emotional kardiya...
Plizz cont d remaining...
Basically I don't like which makes dhaani n vipu cry n d misunderstanding...

Appreciate ur effort. 👏👏
Waiting for d next part. .wer dey ll b together 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good effort...how could vidha be separate for 16days😭...highly impossible😆...eagerly waiting for your next one...I hope its better than this...with less sorrow😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: revathirk

Gud one barbie. ..emotional kardiya...

Plizz cont d remaining...
Basically I don't like which makes dhaani n vipu cry n d misunderstanding...

Appreciate ur effort. 👏👏
Waiting for d next part. .wer dey ll b together😊

Hi Reva 😃 ..Thanks for reading it...yeah i am also like u ...dnt like to see dukh bhari atmas and sad endings...but i just wanted to make their patch up beautiful so started my SS with a separation track...how badly dhani was missing her viplav...i can guarentee u a very happy ending but dont want to rush with my story...only 4-5 parts it wil have...and i will update the next two parts tomorrow itself...intezar karna aur intezar karwana dono hi mujhe pasand nahi hai 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

Hi Reva 😃 ..Thanks for reading it...yeah i am also like u ...dnt like to see dukh bhari atmas and sad endings...but i just wanted to make their patch up beautiful so started my SS with a separation track...how badly dhani was missing her viplav...i can guarentee u a very happy ending but dont want to rush with my story...only 4-5 parts it wil have...and i will update the next two parts tomorrow itself...intezar karna aur intezar karwana dono hi mujhe pasand nahi hai 😉



No worries. Barbie I m ready to wait for ur next update...
Lil bit separation chalega it increases d passion n luv...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pearl82

Good effort...how could vidha be separate for 16days😭...highly impossible😆...eagerly waiting for your next one...I hope its better than this...with less sorrow😊

Hey Pearl...Thank u so much for reading it and commenting here 😃 u knw that i am still a beginer!...i dnt knw how to deal with my own track properly 😆 but i love u for appreciating it...actualy i saw how vidha romances everyday and now i want to see an intense separation track...how both are missing each other...sory yaar i am yet to reveal what vipu is thinking about dhani so cant give romance in part 2 itself!...please have patience to read just two more parts... i will give u a nice ending... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow babie do emotional one love it
sad for vidha being separate but im sure you will show something which will brought them close

well written n cont it

lovely work
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please continue, Barb! I feel so much pain in your SS. I love the intensity you've captured between Viplav Baba and Dhani. A wonderful first part and I can't wait to read the rest. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg so emotional yaar but love it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

Hey Pearl...Thank u so much for reading it and commenting here 😃 u knw that i am still a beginer!...i dnt knw how to deal with my own track properly 😆 but i love u for appreciating it...actualy i saw how vidha romances everyday and now i want to see an intense separation track...how both are missing each other...sory yaar i am yet to reveal what vipu is thinking about dhani so cant give romance in part 2 itself!...please have patience to read just two more parts... i will give u a nice ending... 😊


eagerly waiting barbie

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