VIDHA SS: I Am Nothing Without You - Page 3

Originally posted by: sura123

Hey barbie..good one..loved it😊

you have better thoughts than our cvs

pls continue dear

hi sura...good to see u..thanks for loving it...cvs cant keep vidha away for 1 hour and here i have started with a separation...😆😆...thanks for appreciating ..will return soon with the next part😊

Meri choti pyari behna 😃🤗 acha i can suggest you write their feelings and emotions they expressed in those 16 days...jab phir se milenge jo tadapta hua ehsaas hai woh ubhar ke ayega ...this would make it so much more beautiful...not particularly every day skip few days but let thier pent up feelings come out inform of anger at once and then they open up everything and reunion happens. Mera dosri post hai padhle 😃

Originally posted by: pearl100

Meri choti pyari behna 😃🤗 acha i can suggest you write their feelings and emotions they expressed in those 16 days...jab phir se milenge jo tadapta hua ehsaas hai woh ubhar ke ayega ...this would make it so much more beautiful...not particularly every day skip few days but let thier pent up feelings come out inform of anger at once and then they open up everything and reunion happens. Mera dosri post hai padhle 😃

flashback scene ayega...but not in details..i have no patience to write 7-8 chapters😆😆..but reunion mein kuch kuch hoga😆😆

Reunion's part take tips from mehr aapa 😆 she is an expert in that for giving suggestions 😆

English bhalo parishna bolechili j mitthebadi.
Khub bhalo hoeche ,u r extremely talented.
Roj likhbi.tobe bakita exam er por ok? 17 tarikhe na kar jano exam ache.
Tor fan hoe jacchi re.
Viplab dhani 16 din alada ,its sooo painful.
R korishna jano erokom.

Originally posted by: simplejoy

English bhalo parishna bolechili j mitthebadi.
Khub bhalo hoeche ,u r extremely talented.
Roj likhbi.tobe bakita exam er por ok? 17 tarikhe na kar jano exam ache.
Tor fan hoe jacchi re.
Viplab dhani 16 din alada ,its sooo painful.
R korishna jano erokom.

na na mitthebadi noy🤣..ami bolechilam je hammier moton pari na..hammie ja lekhe..baap re..amke dictionary use korte hoy..koto words jibone sunini😆😆..

Awww meri SS (soul sout)😛
Kitna acha likha hai re... hmm separation..!! Wow I loved it dear.. do continue. . Wud love to read more about my Vipu..😳
Loved how in ur story RA is actually conspiring against ViDha n doing something like a villain. ..😛 update asap n do pm me dear..😳

Originally posted by: NusiSg

Awww meri SS (soul sout)😛
Kitna acha likha hai re... hmm separation..!! Wow I loved it dear.. do continue. . Wud love to read more about my Vipu..😳
Loved how in ur story RA is actually conspiring against ViDha n doing something like a villain. ..😛 update asap n do pm me dear..😳

i am happy to see u here my dear SS...🤗 yes i will inform u when i will update the next parts...

barbo


Hugs dear ..

It was really good and you took separation at first place . Bring it on intense girl .. You can do it .. Waiting for the part II . Bring your sense of humour along with intense .. Good going barbo


Khoob bhallooo likethi acchi .😳

Flying colors from baba tharaf se .. DP deko

WELL done barbs love the style ,tone of the a SS... you have included familiar settings ,which makes it easier to capture the true flavour of the SS.. staying away from each other tapped on my immediate pathos ..and thus cannot wait toread how you continue the SS by making events that will make viplav and dhani come close to each other... hammie will look out for " Iam Nothing"..
much love hammie