FF:Other name of love: Believe, Chp 8 page 6 - Page 2

Chapter 3

Nikhil and Lajo worked real hard to settle down and succeed in their respective careers. Lajo became the reason for nikhil to concentrate in his work. But nikhil's mom was one stubborn lady. She wouldn't so easily start liking Lajo. It was Nikhil's obstinacy that made her agree. His Mom was a nice lady by nature but at times just couldn't understand the goodness in some people. To her, Lajo was just a poor girl who has ruined her son's life. There nothing more important for her than her children. She could do anything and everything just to make them happy.

Nikhil and Lajo finally decided to get engaged. Their engagement ceremony was a great one. A large number of important and recognized guests were invited. Nikhil and Lajo selected the ring for each other. They were happy more than anyone present there. They celebrated and enjoyed it to the core.

They loved each other dearly. It was the most memorable and happy day for

both of them.

Lajo's friends always told her that Nikhil was one ignorant guy and you never know when he would betray you. But Lajo never believed any of them. For her, Nikhil was the perfect man. Both of their love for each other was true and eternal. Neither Lajo nor Nikhil was cheating on each other.

~ 15 years later~

A young man came downstairs dressed up in the night dress with messed up hair. A servant followed with tea in his hand to the dining table and kept it before him. He was a handsome young guy studying MBA from the best university of the country. His father had already had the breakfast and was busy reading the newspaper. The bell rang and a servant was asked to open the gate. He came in 5 minutes later with a letter in his hand telling the guy's father that 'a girl has come with her belongings and asked me to give this to you.'' The father, without uttering a single word ran to the door to get the girl in. He was shocked and depressed. He couldn't believe his eyes.!

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Originally posted by: londonkababu

You are a natural story teller. I like your style of giving information to the reader but holding back for more.

Please keep writing, I am intrigued .

Originally posted by: jojo1986

loved it update soon

Originally posted by: sami01

beautiful re...good work ,child..hm very inetrsting reminds me of a show called meri zaat zara e benishaan... one of my all time fav show.

eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Chapter 4

Who are you? Where have you come from? Where did you get this letter from? He asked her. She looked confused and sad. "My name is Payal. I lived with this lady who was my mother's friend. She took care of me ever since my mother died when I was only 2. I found this letter in her cupboard. Your address was written on it so I came to you. Our house has been taken away by the bank as we failed to pay back the loan" Said the girl.

He asked her where the lady was with whom she lived. With sadness on her face and tears in her eyes, she replied "She has been admitted to a mental asylum. She has become mentally ill. There was always something that bothered her but she never told me, Her tension and depression rose to such an extreme level in this stage of her life that she became mentally unstable"

The father, who was Nikhil, was shocked and couldn't believe his ears. "I want to meet that lady" said Nikhil. The girl was depressed to reply that no one can meet her until the few first months. She is not in a condition to do so. Nikhil becomes extremely miserable and sad. He gets the girl in and permits her to live with him and his son until she finds a new home.

Nikhil was looking at the letter. Tears rolled down his eyes as he read it. He could not believe that destiny has brought to him what he had forgotten years ago. He was confused about why Lajo wrote, but never sent this letter to him. He was in a state of shock, sadness, depression and tension, all together.

That same night, Payal, standing on the terrace was thinking to herself "what must have been between the two? How does that man know her?" That lady, named Lajo, was more than just an aunt who took care of her when the her mother died. She was just like a mother to her. She knew no one else would have taken care of her so dearly. No one does it in today's world. She wanted to know what bothered lajo so much that she became mentally ill. What was it that disturbed her every night, which made her spend the nights crying? She decided that she would do anything to know what it was. She wanted to help Lajo. "That lady has done so much for me, it's my turn now to help her out" Said Payal. She wanted to know about her past and help her recover her mental illness. She had a gut feeling that there was something in her past that would help her recover. "Tomorrow's sun will mark the beginning of this journey of mine to search the truth."

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Originally posted by: Marvi_21

Chapter 4

Who are you? Where have you come from? Where did you get this letter from? He asked her. She looked confused and sad. "My name is Payal. I lived with this lady who was my mother's friend. She took care of me ever since my mother died when I was only 2. I found this letter in her cupboard. Your address was written on it so I came to you. Our house has been taken away by the bank as we failed to pay back the loan" Said the girl.

He asked her where the lady was with whom she lived. With sadness on her face and tears in her eyes, she replied "She has been admitted to a mental asylum. She has become mentally ill. There was always something that bothered her but she never told me, Her tension and depression rose to such an extreme level in this stage of her life that she became mentally unstable"

The father, who was Nikhil, was shocked and couldn't believe his ears. "I want to meet that lady" said Nikhil. The girl was depressed to reply that no one can meet her until the few first months. She is not in a condition to do so. Nikhil becomes extremely miserable and sad. He gets the girl in and permits her to live with him and his son until she finds a new home.

Nikhil was looking at the letter. Tears rolled down his eyes as he read it. He could not believe that destiny has brought to him what he had forgotten years ago. He was confused about why Lajo wrote, but never sent this letter to him. He was in a state of shock, sadness, depression and tension, all together.

That same night, Payal, standing on the terrace was thinking to herself "what must have been between the two? How does that man know her?" That lady, named Lajo, was more than just an aunt who took care of her when the her mother died. She was just like a mother to her. She knew no one else would have taken care of her so dearly. No one does it in today's world. She wanted to know what bothered lajo so much that she became mentally ill. What was it that disturbed her every night, which made her spend the nights crying? She decided that she would do anything to know what it was. She wanted to help Lajo. "That lady has done so much for me, it's my turn now to help her out" Said Payal. She wanted to know about her past and help her recover her mental illness. She had a gut feeling that there was something in her past that would help her recover. "Tomorrow's sun will mark the beginning of this journey of mine to search the truth."

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Originally posted by: londonkababu

I enjoyed reading chapter 4 more because there was a very crucial change in the storyline. The reading got me engaged from the start of the first paragraph I'd have liked more description about individual characters, it truly helps build a mental picture of the person in the readers

mind.

As regards the story itself, I do find it a riveting read, and am left every time to want more.

Please do continue your good work. I for one am hooked.

Please do take any criticism in a positive light, I do think that you are a natural story teller.