FF:Other name of love: Believe, Chp 8 page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is my first ever fan fiction on Lakhil. The story revolves around the families of the two and how destiny plays game with them.

Chapter 1

Lajo came in running as happy as ever. She
was jumping out of excitement and happiness. She hugged her mother and told
that her first ever book has been published successfully. Her mother was happy
too. She then ran to her father to tell the same. Both her parents prayed for
her book to be a success. After all it was their one and only daughter's dream.
She had worked real hard on the book.

Later that evening she planned to visit her
childhood friend, Nikhil. They were best friends and shared everything with
each other. They went out to spend the evening at the nearby restaurant, having
fun and some delicious food. Nikhil was extremely happy to hear about Lajo's
book. He congratulated her and assured her that her book was going to see
enormous heights. They both spent hours talking to each other and having fun.
Lajo loved being in Nikhil's company. The time passed like a blink of an eye
for lajo and she had to leave for home. She never liked saying buy to him.

Lajo spent that night thinking about
Nikhil. How supportive he has been for lajo.!! He stood by her in all her
troubles. They both shared their happiness and sadness and never let each other
down. Nikhil was for sure something more than a mere friend for Lajo. But Lajo
never opened her heart and confessed her feelings to nikhil. She was scared,
scared to lose nikhil as she was unaware of what Nikhil's feelings were.
According to her, it was just one-sided love. She wanted to be in his company
all the time but never got the guts to confess her love. Nikhil had a special
place in her heart. She thought that it was near to impossible for her to get
married to Nikhil as according to her, she was nothing more than just a friend
for him and she definitely never wanted to hurt him.

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So this is the first chapter. Hope you liked reading it. Please do leave your comments below about how you liked it. :) Chapter 2 will be updated shortly.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice and intersting ,so laajo a writer, very interesting very nice...would love to see what happens next keep it up..good work .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sami01

very nice andintersting ,so laajo a writer, very interesting very nice...would love to see what happens next keep it up..good work .



thnx alot sami ^_^ more interesting chps coming up soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks alot :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Usma55

Love the story

Update soon


Thnx alot 😳
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Chapter 2

Nikhil lied down in his bed thinking deeply about his relationship with Lajo. Why so attachment? Why so likeness towards her? He couldn't answer any of his questions. It was a mysterious feeling for him.

The next morning, he woke up to his mother shouting her throat out at him. He was late as usual and his dad wasn't going to spare him this time. His mother lectured him about how careless he is and how important it is for him to take up his father's responsibilities of the business. Nikhil rarely paid attention to any of his mother's lectures. He got up and started getting ready for the office.

He wasn't very interested in the official matters and spent most of his time talking to lajo on the phone which was extremely disliked by his parents. According to his mother, Lajo was a hindrance to Nikhil's progress as a businessman. Lajo was therefore disliked by Nikhil's mom to an extreme extent. Nikhil on the other hand being unaware of his mother's opinion about lajo, kept weaving dreams of his life with her.. Both of them were in love but never confessed it. But Nikhil decided to do so very soon. He was very concerned about continuing his life with Lajo.

It was midnight when Lajo's phone rang. It was Nikhil. He had called her to talk about something important. Lajo got scared as it was the first time ever that nikhil called her up so late to talk about an important matter. She couldn't wait to hear what it was. Nikhil hesitated to say anything. Lajo was tensed and so forced him to speak up. Nikhil hesitantly started the conversation by saying that its time they think about their lives together. "We've been friends for almost 15 years now. We've spent our childhood together and even u know that we can't live without each other". Lajo was shocked and asked what he meant. "I know u know what I mean and I need your answer" Lajo couldn't believe that Nikhil was in love with her too. She was extremely happy to know that it was not one-sided love, unlike what she thought. She opened up her heart too because she knew she wouldn't get a better chance to speak up about her feelings.

Both of the love birds were happy as hell, unaware of what Nikhil's mother's opinion was. The next day, Nikhil planned to talk about his relationship with Lajo to his mother. Nikhil was sure that his mom would agree but to his shock, she said a clear NO for the relationship. Nikhil was shocked and devastated. According to him, his mother's rejection was baseless and unnecessary which caused him to be extremely angry with her.

Her mother couldn't bare her son's behavior. She couldn't see him so depressed and angry. Nikhil did not even talk to his mom for almost a week, which forced his mom to give up and agree for their relationship. Nobody knew what was decreed for lajo and nikhil. They couldn't wait to get married but their parents wanted them to be settled in life before that.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hm nice so in second chapter only love confession kya baat hai...so momy is mean here too... dekhte hain ...aage kya hoga
keep it up very good.
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Originally posted by: sami01

hm nice so in second chapter only love confession kya baat hai...so momy is mean here too... dekhte hain ...aage kya hoga

keep it up very good.



Thnx dear ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey there Marvi_21
I love your SS, and liked this avatar of Lajjo as an author. I liked the flow of your storyline and has great potential. Look forward to more of your work.

Congratulations.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: londonkababu

Hey there Marvi_21

I love your SS, and liked this avatar of Lajjo as an author. I liked the flow of your storyline and has great potential. Look forward to more of your work.

Congratulations.



thankyou sooo much dear :) Means alot for me

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