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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwww dannooooooooooooo.....so sweet of you...........❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunaha6

@ priya...................oh dear.............so sweet of you....you round my work worth mentioning to others also.....i am really happy..............😊


waiting for your next update😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
helllllllllloooooooooooooo.............This part has action, love, drama and above all AWDESH😉🤣

Happpppppppppppy reading..............and a happpppppppy weekend😊

Part 10

Awdesh felt the hot wax burning now...He was clueless...She uttered the words looking at the moon...

Arpitha--"I love you mr.Moon...Don't you awdesh ji...He makes me feel good"

Awdesh felt jealous...For a moment, he came under the false impression that she actually said those tree magical words to him...but no...

Awdesh--"No...I don't"

Awdesh looked at the moon and sighed away...

Arpitha (confused)--"you...don't...But why...It's such a pleasure to watch him..."

Awdesh--"I am not interested..."

Awdesh walks away and places the candle on the table...Arpitha follows him...

Awdesh--"you must be tired...Take rest...you can sleep on the bed..."

Arpitha looked puzzled...

Awdesh--"I mean, you must be feeling sleepy..."

Arpitha--"no...I am perfectly alright and am not tired..."

Awdesh--"and what else do you like...other than your mr.Moon"

Arpitha(excited and smiling)--"oh...I like chocolates...Getting drenched in the early monsoon shower...sit alone watching the sky, till late night...listening to soft music...etc...Etc..."

Awdesh watched her speak without a stop...He wanted to listen to her all his life...Knowing all her likes made her much more familiar to him...he silently heard her without any movement...

Arpitha noticed that he was staring at her...

Arpitha (thinking to herself)--"what am I doing...I wanted to know about him and here it's the opposite happening...control Arpitha...control..."

The lights came back...Awdesh gaining his senses, realized that he was shirtless...He located it on the bed...He hurried to the bed and quickly wore back his shirt...Arpitha couldn't understand his behavior...

Chulbul opened the door and finding Arpitha there, he turned around...pretending that he is ignorant of her presence...

Chulbul (smiling)--"Bhayaji...everything is clear now...I am going and will be back in a moment..."

Awdesh turned to Arpitha...

Arpitha--"I must leave now..."

Arpitha dashed towards the main door and exits...

Awdesh moves near to the window and watches the moon...

Awdesh--"no...Arpitha...He is not looking good...not more than you..."

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At the rai mansion

Rv--"uncle, where is Arpitha?"

Mahesh (worried)--"Don't know beta...please help me find her...You are in the police Na...I can't even file a case...You see my reputation and more than that, arpitha's future...you are her cousin...Who else would better understand..."

RV stays calm...Arpitha was his little sister...He always cared for her...After his parent's death, he almost was shattered...it was Arpitha who always kept up his spirits to become something in life...

RV (determined)--"don't worry uncle...Nothing will happen to Arpitha...She will be home soon...it's my promise..."

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Awdesh entered her room...She was still in her bed...wrapped up in the blanket...

Awdesh watched her as she slept in peace...Her innocent face...Even in her sleep; she wore a little smile...Arpitha turned in her bed...Awdesh moved to the opposite side of her bed...her hair fell on her eyelid; partially covering her face...Awdesh moved near her and gently pushed the hair from her face with his fingers...Arpitha moved in her bed and felt the warmth...

Awdesh (whispers)--"Must be watching the moon all night, without sleeping...right!!!!"

Arpitha (still sleepy)--"hmmm..."

Awdesh smiles...Arpitha opens up her eyes slowly and smiles at him...

Awdesh--"Good morning"

Arpitha (smiling)--"good morning"

Arpitha jumps in her bed and sits back...What is he doing here...was he missing me...Still looking at awdesh, Arpitha tries to adjust her hair...

Awdesh--"last night you were a little troubled with the wound, so I thought would check once to see if you are o.k..."

Arpitha looks at her wrist...She touches the bandaged part...

Both awdesh and Arpitha get worried...The wound had swollen up so much...

Awdesh--"you need medication...We have to see the doctor now...Get ready...we will go the hospital..."

Arpitha--"o.k."

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At the hospital...

Doctor examines arpitha's wrist...and does the bandage...

Doctor--"it will be alright...take your medicines in time and you will be alright by tomorrow..."

Awdesh--"I will make sure that she takes her medicines in time... "

Arpitha is touched by his words...his gesture moved her to tears...He may not utter a word to her, but now she completely trusted him and knew he loved her equally...

Awdesh and Arpitha take leave from the doctor...

Awdesh--"stay here I will get the medicines..."

Arpitha nods in a yes...

Awdesh smiles at her and finds his way to the medical store...Awdesh heard someone shouting...He identified the voice...He knew the owner of the voice...He turned around and it was Pappu...Pappu shouted at an old man who almost came under his car...he drove into the basement of the hospital...

Awdesh threw away the prescription in his hand and ran towards him...by the time he reached...the car was parked and he found no one...

Awdesh shouted in wrath...

Awdesh--"Today I am not going to leave you...your death is written in my hands..."

Awdesh enters the hospital and checks every room in search of Pappu...He enters a room and is about to leave...But turns back in a shock...He couldn't believe his own eyes...It was lal singh... (sajjan singh of paratigya)

So, this was his hideout...His room was lavishly set with all the comforts...Awdesh was stuck by his mind power...Who on earth would predict that a gangster is hiding in a hospital...Awdesh took his gun and pointed it to lal Singh's forehead...

Lal singh woke up from his peaceful sleep and terror filled his eyes, at the sight of awdesh...

Awdesh--"Remember your dear ones...your death is determined today and it is in my hands..."

Lal singh--"beta...listen to me...I am like your father..."

Awdesh--"don't you dare call yourself equalent to my father...You made my life miserable...killed everyone...everyone in my family..."

Pappu enters the room...awdesh looks around his shoulders still pointing the gun to lal singh...Finding the right time, lal singh kicks awdesh's hand with his leg...Awdesh loosens the grip and the gun slips away from his hand...

Lal singh runs for his life...he exits the room and enters the lift...Pappu joins him...awdesh chases him but misses...

Lal singh--"how did he find out I am here..."

Pappu--"i don't know..."

Lal singh--"you idiot...you must have bought him here after you...he traced me because of you..."

The doors of the lift open up and lal singh is shocked to find himself on the terrace...

Lal singh--"You idiot...you don't know how to operate a lift also..."

Awdesh comes up through the stairs...and runs into lal singh...

Awdesh punches him straight on his face...sending lal singh flying in the air...Pappu interferes and gets badly beaten up...Lal singh is still down on the ground...Hitting Pappu to unconsciousness, awdesh heads towards lal singh...Lal singh crawls on his back towards the end of the terrace...

Lal singh—"Please...forgive me...I will accept all my crimes and surrender to the police..."

Awdesh ignores his cry...With revenge in his eyes and all his strength centered in his fist, he lifts him up with his collar...

Awdesh—"Your sins have no forgiveness..."

Lal singh tries to free himself and struggles in awdesh's hold...

Awdesh leaves his collar...Lal singh steps back and slips...He falls down from the terrace and lands straight on the ground, hitting his head hard on the ground...lal singh is drenched in his own blood and he closed his eyes with a last sight of the world...

Awdesh watched his deadliest enemy die in pain...and shouts out all his agony...

Awdesh—"Dad...brother...I have done it..." tears roll down his eyes...

People gather around the dead body of lal singh...Confusion prevails in the hospital...Arpitha tries to locate awdesh...She runs to find him and runs into a tall muscular young man...she looks up...

Arpitha—"bhayya..."

RV (shocked)—"Arpitha...Don't worry...You are safe now...we will soon reach home..."

Arpitha—"ya...But...Awdesh ji...He told me to wait here..."

RV—"how do you know him...he is a gangster...Did he harm you..."

Arpitha—"no...Bhayya...he cares for me...He didn't harm me...he actually rescued me from the gangsters...I know he is against the law...but he has a golden heart...He respects me"

Arpitha tries to explain RV, that awdesh is her savior...

RV—"try and understand...He is a blood-shed gangster...He kidnaps the relations of rich people and demands money in return...he can even kill people...He carries a gun also...do you know that?"

Suddenly a bullet is shot in the air from no where...People ran for their lives...Arpitha and RV are moved apart in the crowd and Arpitha gets worried...

RV (screams)—"Arpitha..."

Suddenly she feels someone's hand holding her's...It is wet...

It was Awdesh...His hands were wet stained with blood...Arpitha's eyes were filled with tears...She couldn't believe that he was a murderer...She actually trusted in a gangster...

Chulbul comes in with the vehicle and locates them...

Chulbul—"Bhayaji...I will handle everything here...You leave...The police is already here"

Awdesh with Arpitha leaves the hospital premises in no time...Awdesh is driving...Hot tears rolled down her eyes...she didn't believe first, but his blood stained hands told her the truth...He was busy with the road and hardly noticed her...

Arpitha (thinking to herself)—"so, he never loved me...never cared for me...He is just trying to use me...used me to demand money from dad..."

Oh dears😭...............don't worry.............sabh kuch achey khey liye hi hota hai.😉.............

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Posted: 14 years ago
Its really good Sunaha👏👏.. Cant wait for the rest of the parts😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: emina

Its really good Sunaha👏👏.. Cant wait for the rest of the parts😍



haiiiii emiiiiiiiiiii...........how are you dear...............hyd kaisa hai.............😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
first i was in la la land then i got shock......i am not able to come out now....
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Posted: 14 years ago
emi dear and sunaha 🤗
Suhana6 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
gud morning priya.................🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

first i was in la la land then i got shock......i am not able to come out now....
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don't worry yaaaaaaaaaaar, kuch paney khay liya kuch khona padtha hai..............😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunaha6

gud morning priya.................🤗

how are you dear?
did u have breakfast?
i was soo sleepy but after reading this my sleep gone.....
slept at 6:30 am....i was writing Toefl sample papers.....

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