MELA: My first short FF(Avitha)-completed

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Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: komalSingh
Ur story did sent me to avi dreams land. 😍

perfect , awesom, and sooo on.

thnk u..........komal.......😊

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Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: Milii
Heyyy Sunaha....again a wonderful part dear 👏👏👏

And thanx for making it quite long...I enjoyed it fully....

At last Avi said 'I love you' 😍
That was soooooo cute....

Waiting for Arpi's reaction in the next part 😃

@ bold.............mili...for second i wondered............di, its arpi who told that😆
😆

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Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: prash_t
Anusha🤗🤗

m mesmerized!!!!! totally in avi's dreamland😍

cant get out of it😆

first with avi nd 2nd with this part!!!!

this is for u

👏

amazing anusha!!!!! it was really beautiful😳

tnkx dear..............all the best for your exam tomorrow👍🏼

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Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#214

@ priya...................oh dear.............so sweet of you....you found my work worth mentioning to others also.....i am really happy..............😊

Edited by Sunaha6 - 14 years ago

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Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: _nandini
Sunaha 🤗 Awesome.

Few quick compliments to u first. This part was mesmerising. U created magic. I was lost in the story. Thanx tonns 😃tnkx diiiiiiiiii

And now a complaint ... Grrr why did u have to stop at this point.hahahaha🤣🤣 Arpita said i love u and to know wat happened nxt, do we have to wait till nxt week. as u wished Christmas to all.No diiiiiiiii seeing your desperateness i wrote it last night am still working on it...Sorry for being so impatient bt i got excited to read those 3 words 😳 Come back with the next part quick 😃

Merry Christmas to u too 😃Merry Christmas.............

Edited by Sunaha6 - 14 years ago

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Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: cupidstrike23
wow!!!! sunaha.....awesum yaar...luv u 4 dis ..
esp. i loved dis part a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt......... i just dint wanted it 2 finish ...nd now eager 2 read other part..
chala superb ra,..i was just visualising all dese acts with avita...

thnx luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv🤗..........Hope you like the next part also...........😊

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Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: danno
👏 sunaha us scene mein jab arpi sochti hai ki kahi muzhe avi se pyaar toh nahi ho gaya
i remember one song

haye mera dil ye kaha kho gaya re

abhi toh yahhan tha kaha kho gaya re...............

sakhiyon se poocha toh hasne lagi woh hass hass ke taane kasne lagi woh

maa ne bataya

chota sa dil ab badha hio gaya re

yaaaaaaaar thu jabh bhi kuck comment karthi hai, merey chehrey pai, close up smile ley athi hai...............thnk u so much............❤️

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Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: emina
Sunaha you are awesome... Now I know why Priya was going on and on about your writing.. It was just awesome.. Please continue writing dear👍🏼 I ll read it whenever i can😊

tnx a lot emmi...............🤗
Merry christmas..............🥳