MELA: My first short FF(Avitha)-completed

sharan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#241

tum likhti ho badha mast mast

' " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " "" " " " "

na muzko koi hosh hosh.....

us per tumari update ka josh josh..

bole tooohhh ek dum rapchik

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Yoga priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: danno
tum likhti ho badha mast mast
' " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " "" " " " "

na muzko koi hosh hosh.....

us per tumari update ka josh josh..

bole tooohhh ek dum rapchik

yeh lo danno ki shayari shuru hogayi😉

hiya danno🤗

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cupidstrike23

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Posted: 14 years ago

#243

wow sunaha...tooo gud ra..
seriously yaar dis is sooo realistic...i just feel like im watching d epi @ feel soo gud dat beech mein koi ad break nahi hota.... but now eager 4 nxt epi part..
really sunaha..u can bcum a very gud writer yaar..try out in dis field..

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Gaurishah

@Gaurishah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#244

Lovely Sunaha, loved this one too.

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Ramona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#245

wow Anusha.... Avi was 😆😆

Sorry I cudnt comment on the previous ones coz.... I was busy with Christmas preparations...

But still I managed to read the chapter.... waiting for the next one...

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sharan

@danno

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Posted: 14 years ago

#246

this is for u sunaha

1.ra rapat rapchick rapchundas bhapka updates

2.now thats what i call a update

3.chummmeshivery update

4.spendo fabulously fantastical update

5.kya baaat....kya baat....kya baat

keeeeeeepppppppppppppppp

writingggggggggggg

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Suhana6

@Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: komalSingh
OMG ur ff is like real i went in d story so much dat i felt like watchin it , great ff

tnx komal.......................😉

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Suhana6

@Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: tanisha997
hi suhana helloooooooooooooooo
i am already say u you are a good writertnkuuuuuuuuuuu and your ff is proof this
nice part dear😛

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Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: prash_t
Well Done Anusha...!!!!!!!!!!!!

This part was a completele package-love,action,bit comedy!!!!!

loooooooooved it😳😳

Hiyeeeeeeeeeeee prashu.............Next one is much more better.........i would love to hear from u on that part...........

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Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: Milii
Wonderful part Sunaha....👍🏼Tnkuuuuuuuuuuu

Lekin kya yaar...first mein hi jhatka de diya...she said I love you to the moon YAaaaaaaaaaaa....usey chand bahut pasand hai........

But that was a nice twist😉

Chalo...abhi jaldi se update karo....now Avi and Arpi r alone....plzzzzz keep them togetherYOUR wish is granted

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