SS:Gulsar_TheBrokenBits of Life, links pg18

alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Links to the updates

part1:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1929598/ss-gulsar-thebrokenbits-of-life-links-pg18

part2:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1929598/ss-gulsar-thebrokenbits-of-life-links-pg18?pn=3

part3:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1929598/ss-gulsar-thebrokenbits-of-life-links-pg18?pn=5

part4a:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1929598/ss-gulsar-thebrokenbits-of-life-links-pg18?pn=9

part4b:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1929598/ss-gulsar-thebrokenbits-of-life-links-pg18?pn=11

part5a:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1929598/ss-gulsar-thebrokenbits-of-life-links-pg18?pn=13

climax:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/gulaal/1929598/ss-gulsar-thebrokenbits-of-life-links-pg18?pn=14

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kavi.bidaai

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Posted: 13 years ago

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U have such a great talent, everything u write turns out to be best, i enjoyed reading both ur DS and SS..u r really very very great..thank u so much for spending ur valuable time for us...i ll be happy if u continue ur writings..thanks a lot once again

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alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: kavi.bidaai

U have such a great talent, everything u write turns out to be best, i enjoyed reading both ur DS and SS..u r really very very great..thank u so much for spending ur valuable time for us...i ll be happy if u continue ur writings..thanks a lot once again

Thank u so much Kavi,..I have always seen u among the like tags and today I am so happy to see your comments..so glad that u liked it and also both of them..Thank u once again dear.😊

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Beautiful...

Not to sound cliched Alanta but you have such a way with words :).

Pata hi nahi chala ke when it finished :).

Please continue making such beautiful pieces :).

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alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: rimjhim1
Beautiful...
Not to sound cliched Alanta but you have such a way with words :).
Pata hi nahi chala ke when it finished :).
Please continue making such beautiful pieces :).

Hey rim...you commented finally..Thank u so much yaar and I am so glad that u liked it😳

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: alanta

Hey rim...you commented finally..Thank u so much yaar and I am so glad that u liked it😳

Maine socha res kya karoon ek hi baar par ke 😃. I loved it though😃😃😃

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Faryal-Makhdoom

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Alanta- Hi ALANTA 😃

Visiting here Last time and beautiful SS! Love the title- it sure is life climax!!

I saw your creation. As per you made a gorgeous update ⭐️ Thank you so much. So happy to see them.

First page is fabulous wow! Also on the last update I liked the Kes Gul bit, i loved the last sentence it is and always will be simple and cute.

Keep experimenting and would love to see your next set of creations! All the best 👍🏼

Lubb Inayah aka Inz or Kesar or whatever u wanna call me 😆

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prachurya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Atlanta, I am so glad that u wrote this SS, it had a wonderfully woven story and coupled with your superb dialogues- it was a delight to read. I loved how it ended- I mean Kesar never went back to his family just for Gulaal's sake and they never even talked abt this coz he felt that wud Gulaal sad- I just love your Kesar! Please continue sharing ur creativity with us in any form.

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kiran_trudecent

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Posted: 13 years ago

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alanta 🤗 lovely SS yar 👏 lovely ending, loved it so much, i really loved it how u ended the story n specially the GK scenes, plus the last scene at the beach, they themselves didnt realize when they fell in love, i mean kesar already loved her but their bond grew stronger with every passing day, so sweet yar, loved it n hey yar really want u to start another SS or FF soon, it all have been superb 😃 thank u so much yar 😃 n sorry for commenting late 😳

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alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

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