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Faryal-Makhdoom

@Faryal-Makhdoom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Kesu's comment:)

oye Alanta🤗

meri pyari 🤗
meri sweety🤗
kuch jyada ho gaya🤔🤣🤣
thanks a lot 4 the SS update😎❤️
waise if u would not have done that then my heart would have becum like>>🥺🥺🥺 and my eyes likeface like🤣

i deserve the first spot dont i😎😆
arre thank u me mai Secondi feel as if i won an oscar🤣🥳
arre waah kya title hai☺️KG first Hug😉
but no Alanta😔
and dont worry ye SS to december me mai phinish kar dungi😛🤣
i hate rules🤣
haila SS update done😲
ye lo chabi and open it🤣🤣🤣

okaii the thing i dont Understand is how kesar can drink that Black tea in one sip eww...😕

and whats wrong with Kesu... why did he hide Vassu's Photo from Galool

and arre yeh kya Gullu rani was Vassy's GF

nd as usual K G wali chotu waist hug scene mast ahi😊

😳 Update soon yaar 😳

😭 kya mast chappie likha hai tune Alanta 😭

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prachurya

@prachurya

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

I love the Gk dynamics here- they hav such an established relationship obviously with a past which both of them share- I loved the short bit of flashback, luks like Vasanth and Kesar shared a very strong bond as brothers. Intrigued to read on more. BTW, i loved dat u chose the whole forum's fav outfit of Kesar- red shirt and jeans. Awaiting the next update!

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

great part.reallly want to know what happens next

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sauris

@sauris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Hey Alanta great you have started anothernew ss,bahut interesting hai,ab jaldi se update kar par thoda bada sa

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: prachurya
The beginning was really sweet! Kesu wearing spevs, reminded me of the episode where he wore munim ji ke chasme...😆. I just loved the diary entry. And the ending scene was just too sweet...nyc stroy build up...eager to knw wat brought them together. Beautiful writing, Atlanta! update soon 😊

Thanks prachu...are munim ji ke chashme😆..this is not that soda glass😆..Thank u so much dear

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Savz_uniqueblis
nicely written,interesting start waiting for ur updt

Thank u Savz

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: smitha2728
plz do continue the chapter is very intresting👏

Thanks Smitha

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: MR21
res

Edit:

Alanta...so they both are working...yeh kya FB shuru hua hai ki khatham bhi ho gaya...me wanted to knew what happened 2 yrs back...
good one...update soon...

Yeah you are right..thoda sabr kar yaar..FB abhi bhi baaki hein..I was supposed to complete this whole SS in one stretch..but I couldnt due to time constraints and my health condition..I will try to update the final part asap😳

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Kesar04
Kesu's comment:)

oye Alanta🤗
meri pyari 🤗
meri sweety🤗
kuch jyada ho gaya🤔🤣🤣
thanks a lot 4 the SS update😎❤️
waise if u would not have done that then my heart would have becum like>>🥺🥺🥺 and my eyes likeface like🤣
i deserve the first spot dont i😎😆
arre thank u me mai Secondi feel as if i won an oscar🤣🥳
arre waah kya title hai☺️KG first Hug😉
but no Alanta😔
and dont worry ye SS to december me mai phinish kar dungi😛🤣
i hate rules🤣
haila SS update done😲
ye lo chabi and open it🤣🤣🤣

okaii the thing i dont Understand is how kesar can drink that Black tea in one sip eww...😕
and whats wrong with Kesu... why did he hide Vassu's Photo from Galool
😲 and arre yeh kya Gullu rani was Vassy's GF 😲
nd as usual K G wali chotu waist hug scene mast ahi😊
😳 Update soon yaar 😳
😭 kya mast chappie likha hai tune Alanta 😭

Thanks a lot...will clear everything in the next update and there is nothing of that sort..Kesar was just teasing him and why are you crying update pasand nahin aya??