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Faryal-Makhdoom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

aisa kyuun kiya tumne Kesar ko rulaa diya

dekh mein also be roing 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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Raunika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: alanta

Thank u so much rsk..lekin mein tuje kya bulau??

ur welcome.my name is raunika😊

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alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Kesar04
aisa kyuun kiya tumne Kesar ko rulaa diya
dekh mein also be roing 😭

rona abhi bhi baaki hein😆...cool down..kam se kam show ke uthna nahin na...😉...stop crying dear please😳

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: rsk16

ur welcome.my name is raunika😊

Thanks again😳

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MR21

@MR21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Alanta...so kesar chup chup ke pyaar kartha tha gulaal koh...ohh i cant see him like this fully shattered and heart broken...even gulaal dont knew abt this marriage announcement with vasant...

ab aage kya hoga...how they r married and how the relationship turned to the one we see today...

jaldi se update kar...waiting desperately...

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: MR21
Alanta...so kesar chup chup ke pyaar kartha tha gulaal koh...ohh i cant see him like this fully shattered and heart broken...even gulaal dont knew abt this marriage announcement with vasant...
ab aage kya hoga...how they r married and how the relationship turned to the one we see today...
jaldi se update kar...waiting desperately...

Remya..Thank u so much for commenting dear..when I wrote I just wrote it..but on seeing all of your comments ab mein bhi😭..hope to update soon...

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Faryal-Makhdoom

@Faryal-Makhdoom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: alanta

rona abhi bhi baaki hein😆...cool down..kam se kam show ke uthna nahin na...😉...stop crying dear please😳

haan au kyan tumne Kesu ko bhi rulaya aur Kesar ko bhi not fair yaar..

i know show mein Kesu jab roing mein bhi also roing, jab Kesu happy Kesar bhi happy shappy 😆😆

ive stoped and giving u a big smile 😃😃😃😃

Alanta dear when u gonna update 😡😡

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Kesar04

haan au kyan tumne Kesu ko bhi rulaya aur Kesar ko bhi not fair yaar.. 😭😭
i know show mein Kesu jab roing mein bhi also roing, jab Kesu happy Kesar bhi happy shappy 😆😆
ive stoped and giving u a big smile 😃
Alanta dear when u gonna update 😡😡

Thanks for commenting dear

@bold: mujpe ithna gussa kyun??meine Kya kiya??😭

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minizz

@minizz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Atlanta,I just came back from vacation today.I am so happy that you decided to write a new one.will comment as soon as I finish reading😃

1st chapter: loved the first chapter.great intro.so Gulaal and Kesar share a warm and loving relationship😊It will be great to see how they reached this point and Kesar with glasses reminded me of Neil with those funny glasses from the show😆Gulaal remembering the sad day-very emotional😭but she has Kesar,so need to worry.great read Atlanta👏

2nd chapter: the beginning was so sweet and romantic😳loved the whole chapter...Kesar remembering Vasant -very nice.very clever of you to reveal bits and pieces of the past,it helps create the suspense👏loving the flow of the story.now let me move on to the next one😃

3rd chapter:oh...yeh lo kahani mein twist aa gaya.bechara Kesar...uski dream girl ab uski bhabhi banegi😭loved the twist and the chapter.lovely story telling. now please update soon.

from now on I will comment as soon as you update😊so beware of the super fast comments😆

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alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: minizz
Atlanta,I just came back from vacation today.I am so happy that you decided to write a new one.will comment as soon as I finish reading😃

1st chapter: loved the first chapter.great intro.so Gulaal and Kesar share a warm and loving relationship😊It will be great to see how they reached this point and Kesar with glasses reminded me of Neil with those funny glasses from the show😆Gulaal remembering the sad day-very emotional😭but she has Kesar,so need to worry.great read Atlanta👏

2nd chapter: the beginning was so sweet and romantic😳loved the whole chapter...Kesar remembering Vasant -very nice.very clever of you to reveal bits and pieces of the past,it helps create the suspense👏loving the flow of the story.now let me move on to the next one😃

3rd chapter:oh...yeh lo kahani mein twist aa gaya.bechara Kesar...uski dream girl ab uski bhabhi banegi😭loved the twist and the chapter.lovely story telling. now please update soon.
from now on I will comment as soon as you update😊so beware of the super fast comments😆

mini..🤗

I am so happy to see you back...missed u a lot and yeah..ab se thu roz aayegi yahan...Thank u so so much for commenting on each chapter and I am so glad that u liked it..and the problem is this is my first SS..and am trying to include more info..in its precise format...hope I wont disappoint you...😳

@blue apna vaada nibhaana😛

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