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alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Savz_uniqueblis
very nicely written.while reading can visualise it. so beautifully written really good job 👏.nice going story waiting for ur next one bring it soon 😳

Originally posted by: Savz_uniqueblis
nicely written,interesting start waiting for ur updt

thank u so much Savz..I am so glad that u liked it..last part also updated..😊

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: arti07
lovely ss i loved it it reminds of virgina wolf mrs dolloway
i love how the ss is travelling forwards and back in time and in and out of the characters' minds...this kind of style is too tough to pen down we know gulaal and kesar are already leading the happy life we know they both love each other now ts the past that has to revealed so intersing and loved how u sketch the character nice job alanta

Originally posted by: arti07
oh ur ss is so captivating cant stop myself and thought to peep in...oh wow loved kesar protected her...and vasant deadth was so sad but anyways life has to move on now me curious how love blossomed between the two lovely update and waiting for next😳

I am so glad that u liked it..thank u so much for ur lovely comments dear😳

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
👏Alanta ..What a beautifully written story..It is beyond my words..How can I comment on such a beautiful piece of work...It was superb to read your updates and Its my special and humble request that you should pls come up with another SS very soon..I am desperately waiting..Loved this one..and the title..🤗.Now the broken bits of life have been created to form a new fantastic beginning...👏

Piu..😳 I am really very glad seeing you comments..it means a lot..Thank u so much dear..Yes dear, I shall try for a new one..as soon as I get a new plot..😊..lekin tab tak tu muje bhulna mat😆

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: arti07
lovely piece of writing alanta i loved how u explain the whole scene it like everything is right infront of our eyes adn so they didnt confess and just excepted each other and now are soulmates lovely ss alanta though i would love to read a ff written by u😳😳😳

Arti🤗...at the time when I joined this forum, i didnt even know the meaning of FF, SS , OS...and it was ur FF that I read for the first time..and to get such comments from u means a lot...arey arti ithni saari ff queens ke beech mein akeli kya karungi..😛..I love reading all ur ffs dear😳..phir bhi agar mein kuch likhungi, tho will definitely let u know😊

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: sauris
Aaree Alanta itne jalde kyu khatam kiya.Bahut acha likhti hai umeed karte hu ki bahut jald dusra ek bada ff lekeaayegi

Thank u sauris..thank u for ur regular and inspiring comments..and this time mein bada waala chappi le ayi😛..hope so dear..😳

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: rimjhim1
Phew, i read that super fast.
It was beautiful :), absloutely love the way you write. im like so awestruck :)

Hope Gulaal gives a good reaction rather than a bad one and is happy with what kesar did. :).

Lovely :). update soon.

thank u so much rim and am very glad that u liked it..the last part is up. please do read and comment dear😊

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Kesar04
Finally. Finally, you knocked some sense into that brain of yours and wrote a chappie! Weee :D Seriously dude, it's about time. I've been telling you since FOREVER :|it was okai just average 😕

Originally posted by: Kesar04
😕😕WHAT WAS THIS CHAPTER ABOUT AGAIN 😕😕

Kesar, ur criticisms are always welcome😊..but I would be glad if you could say, where I went wrong, so that I could correct it, atleast for the next time *hopefully*😊

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: bioinfo
i am sorry again😳he he 😳but lovely updates alanta both chappi 3 and 4 are interesting, i like the way ur taking the story the transition between past and present which u bring in intervals is an interesting concept, looking forward for ur next update😃

Arey Chaithu🤗..thank u so much dear..and I am so glad that u liked it..the last part is also up..hope to see u soon😳

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: smitha2728
Alanta kay yarr tu ne phir se chota chp lika ye nahi hogo jalidi se bada chp likna

chp was really gooddd the way u describe the past of gull in the flash back its too go ...od toda tho bada chp likna plsss

smitha, I am so glad that u liked it..thank u so much..last part is updated

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#130

Thank u so much for supporting me. As I told earlier this was my first attempt to write an SS..but it went a bit long unlike a short story..but still u encouraged me a lot, with your comments..and I am so so glad with ur response..and the last update is also up..kindly read and comment on it too...Thank u so much once again...and sorry for the late reply..was waiting for the story to end...Thank u once again for all those who also silently read and liked..

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