SS:Gulsar_TheBrokenBits of Life, links pg18 - Page 15

Originally posted by: Kesar04

Alanta- Hi ALANTA 😃

Visiting here Last time and beautiful SS! Love the title- it sure is life climax!!

I saw your creation. As per you made a gorgeous update ⭐️ Thank you so much. So happy to see them.

First page is fabulous wow! Also on the last update I liked the Kes Gul bit, i loved the last sentence it is and always will be simple and cute.

Keep experimenting and would love to see your next set of creations! All the best 👍🏼

Lubb Inayah aka Inz or Kesar or whatever u wanna call me 😆

Originally posted by: prachurya

Atlanta, I am so glad that u wrote this SS, it had a wonderfully woven story and coupled with your superb dialogues- it was a delight to read. I loved how it ended- I mean Kesar never went back to his family just for Gulaal's sake and they never even talked abt this coz he felt that wud Gulaal sad- I just love your Kesar! Please continue sharing ur creativity with us in any form.

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

alanta 🤗 lovely SS yar 👏 lovely ending, loved it so much, i really loved it how u ended the story n specially the GK scenes, plus the last scene at the beach, they themselves didnt realize when they fell in love, i mean kesar already loved her but their bond grew stronger with every passing day, so sweet yar, loved it n hey yar really want u to start another SS or FF soon, it all have been superb 😃 thank u so much yar 😃 n sorry for commenting late 😳

Originally posted by: Savz_uniqueblis

hey alanta u ve good writing skills.delight to read ur Ds n SS.thanks for giving them.good work 👏 keep rocking 😃