Congrats on 50 updates!
superb update!
Loved Maaneet's teasing banter!! seems likes Maan is falling for Geet!
but he is unsure if its love!
lovely moments!
update soon
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Congrats on 50 updates!
superb update!
Loved Maaneet's teasing banter!! seems likes Maan is falling for Geet!
but he is unsure if its love!
lovely moments!
update soon
maan seriously thinking to marry geet when she ask him in joke n think that why he wants geet around him all the time conclude that he like her if not love
I just hate creatures like Antara 😣
Well, now that Geet is gone,MAAN is full on his revenge plan.So that scoundrel Akhil is strucked a little. But he should suffer a lot more.But you know, in order to clean this mess up, Maan has to go through a disgusting situation. Eww !
I just hope everything goes well between them.
Life is so beautiful when it is so simple.We human make it complicated and ugly.
Loved the update
Both r crazy
💙
Part 51
Maan finally moves away a little when Geet asks
M- Now who you are calling fat. I just might sit on top of you to teach you a lesson
Geet shows her tongue
G-Batao ye goatee kyun hatayi? Achi thi naa
M-It itches....when...
Maan looks at her lips and then gets up and steps away from her
G-When?
M-It just itches a lot, all the time. I am not used to it
She pulls a face
G-Weird you are, but I still like you
She says happily giving a cute smile and a bear hug
He holds her a bit stiffly
M- I didn’t know that I gotta fan for life
He says with a diva smile all smirky and high class
She laughs
G-Bass! Sarr pe chadh gaye tum. So jao
Geet pulls her covers and closes her eyes
Maan bhi let jaata hai apne cot pe
M-Good night Geet
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Next day,Maan office ke liye ready hoke nikalne laga toh uska chashma kahin nahi mil raha
Har jagah dhund daala
Geet bhi kahin aas-paas nahi hai ki use puche
Geet toh kitchen mein breakfast bana rahi hai kaan mein earphones lagake
Maan walks into the kitchen
Takes the earphones off her ears
M-Have you seen my glasses?
She looks over her shoulder at him
Geet ke ankhon mein hain Maan ke glasses
M- Now what are you doing with these?
He plucks them off her nose
She smiles
k-Aise pade the, mujhe mil gaye
He takes out his hanky to clean them up
G-Par inn chasmein mein toh power hi nahi hai. Kyun pehente ho?
M- Haan nahi hai. It’s for working on computers and lot of paper work and for stress. It’s the glare less thing
He says and puts on the glasses
M- And don’t take my things
He says turning around
G-Haan toh hamesha kyun pehente ho?
M-I am used to them
G- You look so better without them
M-Now there you go, obsessing about my looks again...
She smiles
M- Didn’t I tell you, I don’t want to look attractive? It’s annoying and gets unwanted attention
G-Awwwwwww for me....
Gives him puppy eyes
M- Sweety..no.
G-Ooooohhhhhhh...
She raises an eyebrow
G-Matlab attention nahi chahie?
M-Nope
G-Thik hai ab tum dekhna
M-What? You'll ignore me? Teach me a lesson?
G-Yup
She nods vigorously
M-Now, I would have believed you if you hadn’t yupped on that. See you later, hon
Maan kehkar kitchen se bahar nikal jaata hai
G-Wait and watch
She says after him
He waves his hand and snorts
Jaakar gets his stuff ready and comes down for breakfast
M-Kya bana hai aaj?
Geet rakh deti hai table pe
She starts having the breakfast with earphones on
Maan smiles and starts eating too
Somehow Geet ki ignoring mein sirf not talking aaya ... not noticing nahi
He starts eating happily plotting how to get her to talk to him again by impulse...
Maan office pohoncha toh pure din Akhil cabin mein band tha
Lunch time par Geet ka phone aaya
He picked up her call
M-Yes dear? Miss me already?
G-Ufff pagal! Aaj offc se jaldi aa sakte ho? Bolo?
M-Well…dekhta hoon agar permission mili toh warna.... tell me why, main aise hi aajaunga
G-Aise hi? Nahi...nothing important…waise pata hai..yahan mela laga hai. Mera jaane ka mann tha
M-Hmmm I’ll try and come as early as possible…aur mela kahin nahi jayega... we'll still go there ok, even if I don’t come early. Do you want me to get you anything from the market?
G-Arre mela bass kal tak ka hai
M-Don’t worry about it. I’ll take you there.
G-Aaoge yaa nahi? Nahi aaoge to main ready nahi houngi
M- Uff ho jao ready. I’ll be there
Maan says resolved ki ab toh job doesn’t matter anyways
G-ooooo thanks
She says happily
“Maan”
He heard Akhil call his name
M-Talk to you later, bye
M-Yes boss?
He asks putting away his phone
Akhil-Ye kuch files hain puri karo. It’s very crucial. Let’s sit in my cabin
M- ermm boss I need to go home an hour early today
Akhil-Yeah fine, finish the work, then you can leave
Maan nods and doesn’t say anymore
He follows Akhil to his cabin
Kaam khatam karte hue 7 baj jaate hain
Akhil checks the file and he is happy to see it
Akhil-Very good job Maan. You are a bright boy. Why don’t we discuss few thinks over a drink
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Part 51
magnificent update! well written!
awesome Maaneet moments!
omg Geet wore Maan's glasses!!! liked their convo!
so Maan goes back to work!
at least Akhil agreed that Maan could leave work early!
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