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Posted: 5 years ago

Awww sooo nice they had such romantic moments! They’re doing everything like a couple in love .. only if they realize why it’s happening

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: babelicious

Awww sooo nice they had such romantic moments! They’re doing everything like a couple in love .. only if they realize why it’s happening

Thanks for the comment. By the way i love your dp. Its absolutely apt for the moment and relationship Maan and Geet have now

Just imagine agar Maan aise dekhe toh Geet toh aise hi sharmayegi naa

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Posted: 5 years ago

Yes I know , I just love the way Maan used to look at Geet with so much passion in his eyes, everytime it turns me into a mush ☺️☺️☺️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awww...so lovely one...

Both of them r dreaming,and then continue it in real tooo...

The alarms snooze makes them aware and by that they comes out...

💞😍❤

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Posted: 5 years ago

Wow what an superb update

Maaneet in hubby wifey wala romance

That Alarm clock ruined their romance. LOL

Waiting for next

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Posted: 5 years ago

Both maan n Geet dream sleeping in each other arms as husband n wife

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 53

fascinating update!

glad that Maan taught Geet how to ride the bike!

adored Maaneet's romance! they are indeed behaving like a married couple!

ahh this alarm clock!!

update soon!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 54

She runs into the washroom

Maan moans and buries his face in the pillow

Why did the alarm ring? stupid stupid alarm!

Geet was panting hard

Jaise aag se nikal kar aayi ho

What was she thinking? Was she even thinking? She is so stupid stupid stupid! Idiot gadhi! Akhil ke peeche padke sab kharab kiya, ab Maan ke peeche

She can imagine that his intimate touch won’t be repulsive and he did seem to know what he was doing and making her happy

Wohi toh problem hai naa, she knows she loved what he did, so she won’t be able to control herself the next time if it ever happens

There is a knock in the door

Geet somehow found her voice and says a hmm

M- ermm,are you ok... you looked choked up...

G-emm..yeah..I am...fine…never better

M-And I thought I was dreaming so…really I wouldn’t have done that if I had been awake…I mean fully awake…ermm you take your time

k-yeah..hmm...I understand

Maan kehkar chala jaata hai

He goes tokitchen makes some coffee

Geet kaafi time lagake nahaake aati hai, making herself normal

Maan wasn’t sorry for what happened it seems premature but he certainly wasn’t sorry and it had felt real good too. It was that simple for Maan

G-Hi. office chutti?

Maan smiles back at her

M- Yup. Kahan tha naa, aaj aram kaenge. Tum naha li? Par main der se nahaunga..phir thodi der gariyayenge, uske bad mele mei jayenge

G-Gariyayenge?

M-Laze around, I call it gariyana

G-See I had these....batana bhool gai…uss din mile the

She shows some passes kinda thing

G-sauna vouchers

M-Cool. Wanna go?

She nods

G-It would be my first time

M- Alright.I’ll go get ready then we'll go

Maan finishes is coffee and hurries out to get ready

Maan aajata hai jaldi taiyar hoke

Wahan pohonche to bada hotel tha

Andar special sauna ye wo, badi tashaan wali jagah

The hotel was owned by Maan’s group of companies but not many people knew ki Maan kaun hai

Maan is at ease with all the glamour of the place

Geet looks around with awe

G-Kitna badiya hai naa!

He nods

G-Sab badelog aate hain yahan. Kitna shaandaar hai. Koi badi wali gaadi se kam to hai hi nahi

M-Well, 5 starrer hai toh shandaar toh hona hi chahiye

G-Haan

Geet aur usne change kiya separate changing rooms mein

Both alag-alag wrapped in towels

Ye lo pata laga...they have unisex sauna

Sab ka saath

Geet was in a white towel little dampened

She looks around

All the half naked men and women

She is self conscious

Looking around like a lost child

Maan comes to her side, smiles at her, just as he had smiled at her everyday

Geet ne dekha hi nahi

She was looking around with her doll like eyes

He calls her name softly

M-Geet Chalien?


He says pointing her to a sitting area inside the sauna

She jumps a little then looks. She is relieved finding Maan next to her

They walkover to a bench and settle down

Maan has towel around his waist and his real body is on display, his sculptured abs and muscles

M-Toh mele mein itna khaas kya hai?

Gee tlooked at him head to toe

She knew all men were looking at Maan with envy and all women were drooling

She was so self conscious

She had such an ugly figure compared to these groomed women and Maan was so perfect

But she didn’t realize that Maan wasn’t paying any attention to the groomed woman. He was more interested in the sweet little woman next to him

The sauna heat made her white skin become pinkish

He is chatting away ki mele mein kya karenge phir kahan jayenge kahan khayenge

Geet was looking around...with inferiority…as the eyes of those ladies threatened her to move away from their catch

He notes her becoming a shade of pink and she just looks lovely; just as lovely as she had been looking in the morning

He wondered if she would turn such a delightful shade of pink if he kissed her again

Fir aese hi baithte hain thodi der

Maan starts feeling quite hot and asks ki chalien he has had enough of the stem

Geet nods in relief

Maan slightly touches her elbow and guides her out

M-I’ll wait for you in front of the reception, ok?

She nods

Geet comes out...her skin had turned to a glowing shade of pink

Maan wahin wait kar raha tha with a ready smile

Dono pohonchte hain mele mein, puppet show dekhte hain, chaat etc khaate hain

Geet says:

G-Chalo ye kya Donkey show ka advertisement hai, likha hai koi chamatkaari donkey hai…chalo dekh ke aate hain!

Maan aur Geet wahan se nikalte hain haste haste ki kya fraud hai naa

G-wo gadha aake hamare paas aajaata hai..aur uska wo master bolta hai…this couple will get married…kuch bhi

She starts laughing

M-Fraud

Is it really fraud? Maan sochta hai

G-Kuch bhi...log bhi naa

Maan doesn’t think ki gadhe ne jo kaha it wasn’t so impossible

Geet stops near a pandit

G-Chalo haath dikhate hain

M-Hmm toh gadha fraud hai.. aur pandit par poora vishwaas hai

He teases her taking her to the pandit

G-Panditji meri shaadi kab hogi?

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Edited by NilzStorywriter - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Lovely so is maan actually falling for her

It’s little confusing though geet is definitely fallen now she just needs to accept but she needs to come out from akhil

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awww they are so cute. They are really close and I am so happy to see them together. I hope Geet gets over her insecurities. They are so lcose and oblivious and just fighting the feeling but Maan is accepting it :)

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