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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 51


Maan and Geet have now become much more comfortable

friendly and their actually have fun together

Akhil now wants to discuss further over drinks I wonder if Maan

will stay or go home to take Geet out to the fun fair

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Part 52

Akhil-Verygood job Maan. You are a bright boy. Why don’t we discuss few thinks over a drink

As Maan neGeet ko message kar diya tha that he will be late so she was calling him but Maan’s phone was on silent

Maan says to Akhil

M- I am not much of drinker sir

Akhil-ohhh please man at least give me company

M-Sure

Akhil-Have to taste this, its pre malted vintage scotch

Maan accepts the glass looking all awkward not really knowing what to do

He takes the tiniest sip ad makes a yuck face which quickly turns into a tight smile and fake “ummm very tasty”

Akhil pats Maan’s back

Maan raises a silent toast to Akhil and then keeps the glass in his hands

Akhil-You may look like a man but you are a girl inside

M-ermm well…I just never had enough time and money to indulge..

Akhil- I guess you can try some champagne?

Maan- No, one is enough for tonight. Actually there was some good news which I wanted to give you too since you are the man who helped me in need. You are the first person I want to give my happy news too

Akhil-Say

Akhil says handing him over the glass

M- I gott his great job offer in a company close to my home town, now I can be close to my family and not miss them so much everyday

Akhi lraises an eyebrow

Akhil-hmm so you are leaving? Cool! Give your resignation. I'll see if I could accept it

M- Yes,well I was going to type out the resignation letter but I didn’t get the time

Akhil-Your notice period will be 3 months

M- But when I signed the employment contract it said 1 month notice...the new offer won’t be there for so long!

Akhil-Well...1 month notice for people who have been serving for more than 2 yrs, less than that its 3 months

Maan -But…please you have to let me

Akhil-Its just 3 months boy...don’t be a kid. Drink up and cheer!

Akhil empties the glass into Maan’s mouth

Maan looks down in his glass... looking worried and sad

Akhil checks the watch

Akhil-Boy,need to leave

Maan-See you

Akhil chala gaya

Maan gets up and grins slyly tosses in the remaining spirit

Yahan Geet idhar dhar chakkar laga rahi hai

Its almost 11, Maan nahi aaya

Phone bhi nahi utha raha

Tabhi doorbell baji

Geet ne door khola

Maan aaya

Geet door kholke mudke chali gai

He holds her hand

M- Ab itna bhi gussa mat ho . Dekho, I already took a leave isiliye aaj kaam zyada tha. We'll go tomorrow pakka. Hum poore din wahin rahenge

G-I hate liars and I hate you. Chodo mujhe!

M- I am not lying I would have come...seriously chup kar nikal jaata par boss ke cabin mein baith kar kaam karna pada

Maan lets go off her hand

G-Jhootha! Kaam karna pada ye wo! I know what you were doing! I know the smell and I have a nose. Nahi jaana tha tho bol dete

Geet jaake bed pe mooh dhak ke let jaati hai

Maan sits besides her

M- You know I don’t drink. Do I look drunk to you? Have you seen liquor around the house?I was offered some and I had to take a sip that’s all. I don’t even like the taste and why would I sit around drinking repulsive stuff while we could be i na carnival together?

Geet feels cranky like a baby and she does show her irritation and crankiness

M-Achha chalo mele mein nahi jaa paye aaj… how about a long drive? hmm? Park mein chale?

He ask smessing with her hair, curling a lock around his finger

She looks at him and pouts bada wala

Maan smiles indulgently

M-Chalo

He gets up,tugs her hand, pulling her to get up

G-Nahiiiiiiii.I dont go with drunk men, samjhe? Ullu kahin ke!

M-I am not drunk

He walks away placing one foot in front of another and walks back the same way

M-See perfectly sober. Chalo warna yun hi uthakar le chalunga

G-So jao. Kal office se jaldi aana

M-Kal officehi nahi jaate. Chalo

G-Chupppppppp

M-Aaj late soenge, kal late uthenge, late nahayenge aur phir mele mein jayenge

G-Hye bhagwan ye ladka pagal ho gaya hai! Tum hamesha se aise ho, Maan? Ajeeb

M- Chalo warna ek aur pagalon wali harkat karne par majboor ho jaunga

Geet gets up placing her hand on his, then she smiles looking at him

G-Tum kya mills and boons se uthkar aaye ho?

M- Bilkul nahi…that stuff is too corny

He winks her and drags her outside the house taking his keys wallet and closing the door

Bike nikali, Geet ko bola hop on

Geet ne protest kiya ki nahi jaana, mujhe andhere mein akele darr lagta hai, sunsaanjagah hai

M- Akele kahan? Main hoon na tumhare aage hi toh baitha hoon. Chalo no more excuses , grow up and stop being afraid. Kuch nahi hoga

He takes Geet for a long drive, cool summer wind blowing around them

Nothing but the noise of the bike racing and them

Kaafi der ghuma fira kar ice cream khila kar Geet Maan ko wapas le aya

Geet zidd karti hai mjhe bhi bike chalane do

Since gharke paas ki sadak khali rehti thi

Maan makes her sit in the front

Lets her control the accelerator and the handle, teaching her how to change gears

Geet toh petrol tank pe baithi hai aur Maan seat pe warna Maan ka haath handle tak nahi jayega

Maan ko bhi Geet ki tiny waist pakadne ka mauka mil gaya

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Posted: 6 years ago

Both parts r awsm

Loved it...

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Posted: 6 years ago

Wow that was lovely

Maaneet having quality time together

He is teaching her to ride his bike.

Waiting for next

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 52

excellent update!

Hate Akhil!! Maan was helpless but glad that he did not drink!

why does Akhil insist that Maan serve notice for 3 months?

Geet was upset with Maan!

awesome Maaneet moments!

Maan teaches Geet how to ride the bike!

continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Very nice update

Akhil said maan of 3 moth’s notice period before leaving job

Geet is angry on maan as he come late n drunk

Maan promise to take her to mela next day

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 52


Fabulous Chapter


Maan tells Ahkil he wishes to resign as he misses his family

did Maan speak to Geet about his plans or is he again playing some

game with her

Ahkil wants Maan to work in his notice period for 3 months

Geet annoyed that Maan did not take her to the carnival but instead

he got drunk

nice Geet now in the front learning to ride a bike while Maan at the back teaching her

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Posted: 6 years ago

Akil made Maan late and when Maan told about leaving job he told to complete 3 months period

Geet was angry first he didn't picking hr call came late drunk

He promise to take hr mela

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Posted: 6 years ago

Sorry for no updates for so many days. I have come home for vacation. Will update asap.

Lots of love

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 53

He takes Geet for a long drive, cool summer wind blowing around them

Nothing but the noise of the bike racing and them

Kaafi der ghuma fira kar ice cream khila kar Geet Maan ko wapas le aya

Geet zidd karti hai mjhe bhi bike chalane do

Since ghar ke paas ki sadak khali rehti thi

Maan makes her sit in the front

Lets her control the accelerator and the handle, teaching her how to change gears

Geet toh petrol tank pe baithi hai aur Maan seat pe warna Maan ka haath handle tak nahijayega

Maan ko bhi Geet ki tiny waist pakadne ka mauka mil gaya

Geet toh bass accelerate kart rehti hai

Maan handle naa pakde toh kabhi brake time pe lage hi naa

1-2 baar girte-girte bhi bachte hai

Maan ne Geet ko bike chalana sikhaya as long as she wanted to

She asks

G-Did I do fine?

M- Suberb for the first time!

She grins happily

G-Toh roz sikhenge

M-hmm why not. Maybe I can get you a second hand one fir saath ghumne bhi jayenge

G-Issi pe sikhenge naa

Aise behas karte karte ghar ke andar chale jaate hain

Geet looks at Maan while lazily lying on the bed

Maan laptop mein kuch kaam kar raha hai full concentration ke saath

A crazy thought creeps her mind...ki agar Maan sahi mein uska hubby hota toh kya hota?

She's living with him cooking for him taking care of him.. even sleeping in same room

Kya difference hai? Nothing…except the sex

Maybe marriage isn’t that difficult coz she isn’t finding it bad at all

She was looking at Maan with adoring eyes

She crawls towards him and shuts the laptop hood

G-So jao. Band karo

M-Just this last mail, 1 min and you should sleep too

He pats her cheek

She smiles....blinking her eyes and slightly purring like a tamed kitty

He gives her an amused grin...

M-Sweet kitty, shall I scratch you behind your ears?

He says actually giving her a soft caress behind her ears

Geet looks at him...amused by the new flirty Maan

She bites her lips with a cute glint

He moves his hand a bit to the back of her neck and then back to her ears again

M- Your ears are cute…like those pixie…fairy things

Geet cant help but close her eyes for a moment and give a slow moan

Maan’s hand stills for moment, he didn’t even realize what he had been doing was close to foreplay

He smoothes the hair on her head and then takes his hand away and opens the laptop.

M-Lights out in 1 min promise

Geet lays on the side, head on pillow and one hand holding his waist

He clicks the send button on his application for sick leave and shuts it off and puts the laptop away

Now he doesn’t know what to do

He won’ ttell Geet to move and go back, his brain was addled

He very much liked where she was

But he didn’t want to do something which would make things awkward between them

And right now…he had a feeling that he just may do that

He put his hand on her head and runs his fingers through her hair

Caressing her neck at times

Not going an inch lower

Just sitting there quietly gazing at Geet

She is laying there like a lost child who found her loved one

Geet falls asleep

Maan bhi slips into sleep before he realizes kyunki uska plan tha to move to his bed before falling asleep but neend kab aayi pata nahi chala

He slips down to sleep besides her

The hand on her head slips down to her waist

His shoulder takes the place of the pillow under her head

She also nuzzles and cuddles to him like a kitten

Maan has a very peaceful sleep full of nice dream where his sister can walk talk move with every one, his parent are alive too,they all live with the grandfather and somewhere weaving in and out of his dream is Geet too

Aur Geet ne apne dream mein koi filmy gaana imagine kar liya Maan ke saath

Dono ki neend ek saath khulti hai as alarm bajta hai

Maan toh abhi bhi adhi neend aur adhe sapne mein hi hai

M- hi beautiful

He says kissing her forehead

Geet slowly opens her eyes

G-ummm...umm

She looks at Maan and has a dreamy smile

He is still smiling, running his free hand up and down her spine

Geet kolaga sapna hai husband wife wala, ankhein aaram se band conmfy, nuzzling to his chest

Maan breaths in her hair kissing her head pulling her closer

So that they are now embraced in a hug

G-Honey...[she utters in sultry sleepy voice...as per Geet husband wife sapna hai]

M-hmm

He dips his face to kiss her neck

Which felt all the more better than it had a few minutes ago

Maybe this dream was even better than the last one

Geet gives a moan plus a soft giggle

Maan nuzzles her neck happily, ignoring some irritating thought which wanted itself to be heard in his head

He had a more better plan to kiss his way to her ear and then to her mouth

Geet ki dheere-dheere neend hatt rahi hai aur realization aa rahi hai

ki mobile ka snooze alarm wapas baja

Tab Maan ko realize hua ki irritating thought kya tha…sapno mei alarm nahi bajte

Geet looks at alarm then looks around

She think shey ram...ye to

She jerks away

Maan lifts his head away from her and removes his hand the same instant she jerks away

Her whole face red

She runs into the washroom

Maan moans and buries his face in the pillow

Why did the alarm ring? stupid stupid alarm!

Geet was panting hard

Jaise aag se nikal kar aayi ho

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