Part 51
Maan and Geet have now become much more comfortable
friendly and their actually have fun together
Akhil now wants to discuss further over drinks I wonder if Maan
will stay or go home to take Geet out to the fun fair
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Part 51
Maan and Geet have now become much more comfortable
friendly and their actually have fun together
Akhil now wants to discuss further over drinks I wonder if Maan
will stay or go home to take Geet out to the fun fair
Part 52
Akhil-Verygood job Maan. You are a bright boy. Why don’t we discuss few thinks over a drink
As Maan neGeet ko message kar diya tha that he will be late so she was calling him but Maan’s phone was on silent
Maan says to Akhil
M- I am not much of drinker sir
Akhil-ohhh please man at least give me company
M-Sure
Akhil-Have to taste this, its pre malted vintage scotch
Maan accepts the glass looking all awkward not really knowing what to do
He takes the tiniest sip ad makes a yuck face which quickly turns into a tight smile and fake “ummm very tasty”
Akhil pats Maan’s back
Maan raises a silent toast to Akhil and then keeps the glass in his hands
Akhil-You may look like a man but you are a girl inside
M-ermm well…I just never had enough time and money to indulge..
Akhil- I guess you can try some champagne?
Maan- No, one is enough for tonight. Actually there was some good news which I wanted to give you too since you are the man who helped me in need. You are the first person I want to give my happy news too
Akhil-Say
Akhil says handing him over the glass
M- I gott his great job offer in a company close to my home town, now I can be close to my family and not miss them so much everyday
Akhi lraises an eyebrow
Akhil-hmm so you are leaving? Cool! Give your resignation. I'll see if I could accept it
M- Yes,well I was going to type out the resignation letter but I didn’t get the time
Akhil-Your notice period will be 3 months
M- But when I signed the employment contract it said 1 month notice...the new offer won’t be there for so long!
Akhil-Well...1 month notice for people who have been serving for more than 2 yrs, less than that its 3 months
Maan -But…please you have to let me
Akhil-Its just 3 months boy...don’t be a kid. Drink up and cheer!
Akhil empties the glass into Maan’s mouth
Maan looks down in his glass... looking worried and sad
Akhil checks the watch
Akhil-Boy,need to leave
Maan-See you
Akhil chala gaya
Maan gets up and grins slyly tosses in the remaining spirit
Yahan Geet idhar dhar chakkar laga rahi hai
Its almost 11, Maan nahi aaya
Phone bhi nahi utha raha
Tabhi doorbell baji
Geet ne door khola
Maan aaya
Geet door kholke mudke chali gai
He holds her hand
M- Ab itna bhi gussa mat ho . Dekho, I already took a leave isiliye aaj kaam zyada tha. We'll go tomorrow pakka. Hum poore din wahin rahenge
G-I hate liars and I hate you. Chodo mujhe!
M- I am not lying I would have come...seriously chup kar nikal jaata par boss ke cabin mein baith kar kaam karna pada
Maan lets go off her hand
G-Jhootha! Kaam karna pada ye wo! I know what you were doing! I know the smell and I have a nose. Nahi jaana tha tho bol dete
Geet jaake bed pe mooh dhak ke let jaati hai
Maan sits besides her
M- You know I don’t drink. Do I look drunk to you? Have you seen liquor around the house?I was offered some and I had to take a sip that’s all. I don’t even like the taste and why would I sit around drinking repulsive stuff while we could be i na carnival together?
Geet feels cranky like a baby and she does show her irritation and crankiness
M-Achha chalo mele mein nahi jaa paye aaj… how about a long drive? hmm? Park mein chale?
He ask smessing with her hair, curling a lock around his finger
She looks at him and pouts bada wala
Maan smiles indulgently
M-Chalo
He gets up,tugs her hand, pulling her to get up
G-Nahiiiiiiii.I dont go with drunk men, samjhe? Ullu kahin ke!
M-I am not drunk
He walks away placing one foot in front of another and walks back the same way
M-See perfectly sober. Chalo warna yun hi uthakar le chalunga
G-So jao. Kal office se jaldi aana
M-Kal officehi nahi jaate. Chalo
G-Chupppppppp
M-Aaj late soenge, kal late uthenge, late nahayenge aur phir mele mein jayenge
G-Hye bhagwan ye ladka pagal ho gaya hai! Tum hamesha se aise ho, Maan? Ajeeb
M- Chalo warna ek aur pagalon wali harkat karne par majboor ho jaunga
Geet gets up placing her hand on his, then she smiles looking at him
G-Tum kya mills and boons se uthkar aaye ho?
M- Bilkul nahi…that stuff is too corny
He winks her and drags her outside the house taking his keys wallet and closing the door
Bike nikali, Geet ko bola hop on
Geet ne protest kiya ki nahi jaana, mujhe andhere mein akele darr lagta hai, sunsaanjagah hai
M- Akele kahan? Main hoon na tumhare aage hi toh baitha hoon. Chalo no more excuses , grow up and stop being afraid. Kuch nahi hoga
He takes Geet for a long drive, cool summer wind blowing around them
Nothing but the noise of the bike racing and them
Kaafi der ghuma fira kar ice cream khila kar Geet Maan ko wapas le aya
Geet zidd karti hai mjhe bhi bike chalane do
Since gharke paas ki sadak khali rehti thi
Maan makes her sit in the front
Lets her control the accelerator and the handle, teaching her how to change gears
Geet toh petrol tank pe baithi hai aur Maan seat pe warna Maan ka haath handle tak nahi jayega
Maan ko bhi Geet ki tiny waist pakadne ka mauka mil gaya
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Both parts r awsm
Loved it...
Wow that was lovely
Maaneet having quality time together
He is teaching her to ride his bike.
Waiting for next
Part 52
excellent update!
Hate Akhil!! Maan was helpless but glad that he did not drink!
why does Akhil insist that Maan serve notice for 3 months?
Geet was upset with Maan!
awesome Maaneet moments!
Maan teaches Geet how to ride the bike!
continue soon
Very nice update
Akhil said maan of 3 moth’s notice period before leaving job
Geet is angry on maan as he come late n drunk
Maan promise to take her to mela next day
Part 52
Fabulous Chapter
Maan tells Ahkil he wishes to resign as he misses his family
did Maan speak to Geet about his plans or is he again playing some
game with her
Ahkil wants Maan to work in his notice period for 3 months
Geet annoyed that Maan did not take her to the carnival but instead
he got drunk
nice Geet now in the front learning to ride a bike while Maan at the back teaching her
Akil made Maan late and when Maan told about leaving job he told to complete 3 months period
Geet was angry first he didn't picking hr call came late drunk
He promise to take hr mela
Sorry for no updates for so many days. I have come home for vacation. Will update asap.
Lots of love
Part 53
He takes Geet for a long drive, cool summer wind blowing around them
Nothing but the noise of the bike racing and them
Kaafi der ghuma fira kar ice cream khila kar Geet Maan ko wapas le aya
Geet zidd karti hai mjhe bhi bike chalane do
Since ghar ke paas ki sadak khali rehti thi
Maan makes her sit in the front
Lets her control the accelerator and the handle, teaching her how to change gears
Geet toh petrol tank pe baithi hai aur Maan seat pe warna Maan ka haath handle tak nahijayega
Maan ko bhi Geet ki tiny waist pakadne ka mauka mil gaya
Geet toh bass accelerate kart rehti hai
Maan handle naa pakde toh kabhi brake time pe lage hi naa
1-2 baar girte-girte bhi bachte hai
Maan ne Geet ko bike chalana sikhaya as long as she wanted to
She asks
G-Did I do fine?
M- Suberb for the first time!
She grins happily
G-Toh roz sikhenge
M-hmm why not. Maybe I can get you a second hand one fir saath ghumne bhi jayenge
G-Issi pe sikhenge naa
Aise behas karte karte ghar ke andar chale jaate hain
Geet looks at Maan while lazily lying on the bed
Maan laptop mein kuch kaam kar raha hai full concentration ke saath
A crazy thought creeps her mind...ki agar Maan sahi mein uska hubby hota toh kya hota?
She's living with him cooking for him taking care of him.. even sleeping in same room
Kya difference hai? Nothing…except the sex
Maybe marriage isn’t that difficult coz she isn’t finding it bad at all
She was looking at Maan with adoring eyes
She crawls towards him and shuts the laptop hood
G-So jao. Band karo
M-Just this last mail, 1 min and you should sleep too
He pats her cheek
She smiles....blinking her eyes and slightly purring like a tamed kitty
He gives her an amused grin...
M-Sweet kitty, shall I scratch you behind your ears?
He says actually giving her a soft caress behind her ears
Geet looks at him...amused by the new flirty Maan
She bites her lips with a cute glint
He moves his hand a bit to the back of her neck and then back to her ears again
M- Your ears are cute…like those pixie…fairy things
Geet cant help but close her eyes for a moment and give a slow moan
Maan’s hand stills for moment, he didn’t even realize what he had been doing was close to foreplay
He smoothes the hair on her head and then takes his hand away and opens the laptop.
M-Lights out in 1 min promise
Geet lays on the side, head on pillow and one hand holding his waist
He clicks the send button on his application for sick leave and shuts it off and puts the laptop away
Now he doesn’t know what to do
He won’ ttell Geet to move and go back, his brain was addled
He very much liked where she was
But he didn’t want to do something which would make things awkward between them
And right now…he had a feeling that he just may do that
He put his hand on her head and runs his fingers through her hair
Caressing her neck at times
Not going an inch lower
Just sitting there quietly gazing at Geet
She is laying there like a lost child who found her loved one
Geet falls asleep
Maan bhi slips into sleep before he realizes kyunki uska plan tha to move to his bed before falling asleep but neend kab aayi pata nahi chala
He slips down to sleep besides her
The hand on her head slips down to her waist
His shoulder takes the place of the pillow under her head
She also nuzzles and cuddles to him like a kitten
Maan has a very peaceful sleep full of nice dream where his sister can walk talk move with every one, his parent are alive too,they all live with the grandfather and somewhere weaving in and out of his dream is Geet too
Aur Geet ne apne dream mein koi filmy gaana imagine kar liya Maan ke saath
Dono ki neend ek saath khulti hai as alarm bajta hai
Maan toh abhi bhi adhi neend aur adhe sapne mein hi hai
M- hi beautiful
He says kissing her forehead
Geet slowly opens her eyes
G-ummm...umm
She looks at Maan and has a dreamy smile
He is still smiling, running his free hand up and down her spine
Geet kolaga sapna hai husband wife wala, ankhein aaram se band conmfy, nuzzling to his chest
Maan breaths in her hair kissing her head pulling her closer
So that they are now embraced in a hug
G-Honey...[she utters in sultry sleepy voice...as per Geet husband wife sapna hai]
M-hmm
He dips his face to kiss her neck
Which felt all the more better than it had a few minutes ago
Maybe this dream was even better than the last one
Geet gives a moan plus a soft giggle
Maan nuzzles her neck happily, ignoring some irritating thought which wanted itself to be heard in his head
He had a more better plan to kiss his way to her ear and then to her mouth
Geet ki dheere-dheere neend hatt rahi hai aur realization aa rahi hai
ki mobile ka snooze alarm wapas baja
Tab Maan ko realize hua ki irritating thought kya tha…sapno mei alarm nahi bajte
Geet looks at alarm then looks around
She think shey ram...ye to
She jerks away
Maan lifts his head away from her and removes his hand the same instant she jerks away
Her whole face red
She runs into the washroom
Maan moans and buries his face in the pillow
Why did the alarm ring? stupid stupid alarm!
Geet was panting hard
Jaise aag se nikal kar aayi ho
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