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Posted: 6 years ago

Geet feeling something fr Maan he was worried fr hr but after asking his men he start enjoying with antra

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Part 48

Maan smiles down at anntarad kisses her forehead

M- The fun is only starting

Andar gaye

They were waited on hands and knees

Waiter-Sir champagne, mam wine?

Aas-paas smart-smart si airhostesses hain but Maan has eyes only for her

Antara is flying with happiness

He concentrates on Antara and asks her about her day and life while he had been away

Maan listens to her with right amount of attention

It’s a big party after a conference for international business men

Maan and Antara ne closely dance kiya

Antara ko bhi achhe se tayar hokar badi pary attend karne ka mauka mila

To Maan's utter horror Antara was rubbing herself onto him in the wrong area while dancing

But Maan was a nice partner, he didn’t ignore her to talk business people, even introduced her to everyone as his very good friend

Antara took him to a quiet corner

Body to dikh hi gai this Maan ki...fab toh thi hi

Bass utaardi shirt

Maan holds her hand

M- Let me kiss you

He says and kisses her with wild abundant passion pulling on a strap off one shoulder

Wahan sab log Rajeev Rajeev baat kar rahe hain (Maan’s pseudo name), wahan jitne bhi associates hain

Akhil kabhi bohot dino se mann ho raha tha is naye bande se milne ka, to size him up and see how good he is; ki kisi ne kaha ki Rajeev ki gf jo ladki hai... i think i have seen her somewhere i think she's model or actress..doosre ne kaha ki nahiI don’t remember any good ones with name Antara

Akhil ke kaan khade ho gaye

Waise hi usse lag raha tha itne dino se ki she is avoiding him…mann mein ye bhi tha kiusse koi aur naa mil gaya ho, seems like his worst fears were being confirmed

Antara says sultrily to Maan...

Antara-Lets go into the room

Maan just groans…

M- Lemme just... one more kiss

He pushes her against the wall and bends his face to her neck

Itni der mein wahan Akhil aaya to hope that what he was hearing was wrong

But what he saw...

His girlfriend had her head thrown back in ecstasy, a guy kissing her like that in almost public....

Akhil-ANTARA!!!!

Maan straightens up giving Antara a passion filled grin...then pulling her dress up back to proper place

Akhil grabs Antara and pulls her

Ladke se panga lene ki himmat nahi as he looks stronger than him

M-Hey what the heck you think you are doing? She is my date! Let go of her. Babe, do you know this fool?

Antara: No

Akhil glares at Antara

Akhil-she is my gf...back off a**hole

Akhil didn’t recognize Maan that is why the whole champu and geek look was for, besides it was dark and the the place was on the beech

M-You are jus tjackass and she isn’t your anything until she says she is. Antara hon, do you know this....shall we go now? We have ocean view in or room

Akhil pulls Antara's hand and drags her with him

Maan puts his hand on Akhil’s shoulder and stops him

He twists Akhil’s free hand

M- Let go off her right now or I’ll have this hand broken. You don’t touch her with your filthy paws ever again

Maan was twisting Akhil's hand itne mein 3-4 bodyguard types log aa gaye

Bodygaurd-Rajeev sir, are you ok?

Maan letsgo off Akhil and bodyguards also look at Akhil intimidatingly

Akhil cowers and throws some empty threats

But the body guard hold him by his shoulder guide him away

Other one says to Maan ki sir your ride is here

Maan ne kaha ki make sure he is never within 20 feet range of miss Antara again or he will be tried by laws of his country

The bodyguard looks frightened enough and hurries away

Maan pulls his coat around Antara and tells her to go on ahead of him

Antara looks at him with adoring eyes

Antara-Aren’t you coming?

M-I’ll be right behind you in another car. Why don’t you go and pour yourself a glass of champagne I have freezing on the patio

Antara nods happily and goes

Maan goes to where Akhil was

2-3baatien sunata hai jitni insult usne Geet ki ki thi.. wo sab sood samet wapas kartahai.. aur jitna hurt Akhil ne uski ki behen ko kiya hai wo to bass abhi chalu ho raha hai

He has Akhil thrown into jail for assault and harassment

Maan keh deta hai ek body guard to hit the other one and they say that Akhil did it

Akhil lands in jail

Wahan Antara pours the champagne takes few sip and she is blissfully passed out before Maan gets there

Maan ne champagne mein kuch mila rakha tha ki in few sips she was out like a fused bulb

Maan aaya he lays her down on the bed, covers her up, lays down besides her for few moments so it looks like that he had slept there with her

Then gets up and leave the room

He can’t stay in her obnoxious company for very long

Wahan thodi publicity bhi hui Akhil ki he was arrested for assault on the bodyguard of an young actress and for harassing her

But Akhil didn’t have to stay long, just overnight and then had himself bailed out

But his pride had taken a blow and his heart... was in rips ki kitni aasani se Antara ne keh diya ki nahi jaanti

Jahan Akhil ko kiss karne bhi nahi deti wahan wo uss ladke ke saath aise hi beach mein lagi hui thi…how .. how.. howww!!!

How could she reject him for someone else!!!

Akhil was angry with desire for revenge, for him Rajeev may have won the battle but not the war

For Maan the battles were all fixed and the result of the war long ago declared

Agle din

Antara woke up late

Maan aaya taiyar hoke

He kisses her warmly as she wakes up then tells her to get up and get ready as they have to attend this charity fashion show in two hrs

Antara tries to lure him back in

Maan says that they can’t be late

Dono gaye show mein

Antara bohot khush hui, sab se mili, khoob uchli how pretty how beautiful karke

Khoob logon se mili

Shaam ko Maan usse achhi jagah shopping lekar gaya

Fir dinner par achanak Antara ka phone baja

It was her manager

The manager called her ki she had landed in a big role in a superstar cast film and she has to come back immediately to meet the director and sign the deal and read the script

Antara can’t believe her luck ki itna sab kuch achha ek saath kaise ho sakta hai

Haan she didn’t get to sleep with Rajeev yet but still wo kahin thodi jaa raha hai

She believes she has him wrapped around her finger


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Posted: 6 years ago

Very nice update. Maan sorta gets started on his revenge on Akhil... and Antara, the despo is also getting a lot of attention from him offlate even unwantedly 🤢 missed Geet in this. Wonder hw she is? Still so mny unsolved questions like why Maan had to waste sooo much of his time on this chichora Akhil and also Geet, wat abt wat she had felt for Akhil like was it love, was it becoz she felt she owes him something,... waiting for more

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update

She says that she doesn't know him,

Maan succeed in giving a blow to Akhil

Antara is in dreamland

Waiting for further

Missed geet

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Posted: 6 years ago

The revenge starts.

Waiting for next

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Posted: 6 years ago

maan's revenge starts as per his plan . he humiliate akhil like akhil does with geet. akhil is going to face much more than what he can imagine

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

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Posted: 6 years ago

explosive update!

great that Maan has started his revenge plan!

so he is using Antara!

Akhil deserved it!

of cos Maan cannot stand Antara!

update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Maan playing his card very well he also taking revenge of Geet humiliation antra thinking Rajeev in hr hand

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Part 49

Antara can’t believe her luck ki itna sab kuch achha ek saath kaise ho sakta hai

Haan she didn’t get to sleep with Rajeev yet but still wo kahin thodi jaa raha hai

She believes she has him wrapped around her finger

Aur aise offers roz nai aate

Rajeev is the lucky charm

She tells the news super excitedly to Maan while hugging him and kissing him, and calling him her lucky mascot her guardian angel and begs ki mujhe wapas le chalo pls

Antara-I know its rude and wrong, you have such a wonderful things planned and i feel like a monster but try and understand

Maan nods being fully understanding and charming

M-ok you go ahead. I have to attend the meeting tomorrow anyway

Maan usse jet mein baitha kar wapas bhej det hai

Antara wapas pohonch jaati hai

Wapas jakar she signs the contract, and shooting is in some remote someplace for next 6 months so she is off Maan's case

Maan now starts on putting phase two in motion

Jab Akhil wapas pohoncha toh usse pata chala ki his image has received some damages

But before he can repair his image, some of the big clients of last 4 yrs back out

It’s the news in market that Akhil is a fickle impulsive man, he is too young to run the company

The board of directors go in meet to discuss changing of CEO

Maan is backto his remote home after 3 days

Ghar kedoor par chaabi lagake ghumai nahi ki door khul gaya

He is surprised

Saamne…it’sthe lady herself

Geet ne door khola

Maan looks at her totally shocked for words for a moment

Maan to hapne dude avatar mein tha

She smiles

Out of his impulse and happiness he picks her up and twirls her around happily

M- You are back!!

She chuckles looking at him, then giggles and finally laughs with happiness

G-Kya karrahe ho! Pagal ho?

He twirls her around 3-4 times

Then puts her down and pulls her close

She ruffles his hair

M- God! I missed you!

G-Jhootha kahin ka, ghar pe khoob masti karke aa rahe ho. Behen ne acha sa make over bhi kar diya hai. Ache lag rahe ho!

M- Oh that..She's just..

He rubs his goatee and the messes up his hair.. it’s all flat and unattractive now

G-Mat karo. Aise hi rakha karo

He shrugs

M- So howc ome you are back so soon? The mosquitoes got to you didn’t they?

Maan says letting go of her moving away bringing his luggage in

She laughs

G-Pata hai 3 din akele...3 raat...kitna darr laga mujhe

M-Toh tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahi ki tum gai nahi?

G-Tumhara phone kahan lag raha tha

M-Aur jab main keh raha tha ki mat jao tab to tumhe badi aag lag rahi thi

G-Nahi, woT rinard mein kuch…emergency aa gai aur saari flights to the country had to be diverted. Ek mahine baad ki ticket mili par ek lady bohot distressed thi..unko late ticket mili, maine unko apni ticket de di

H raises his eyebrow hearing Trinidard, as its not in Africa

M-Meaning that you are staying?

G-emm...guess thode din aur pareshaan karungi tumhe. Chalega?

He looks at her and smiles

M- So how come you had ticket to Trinidad?

Maan asks casually pouring himself a glass of water

G-emm...

She wets her lips

M- I remember you showing me ticket for Africa

She pulls a strand of hair behind her ear

G-I got another ticket and visa to....for Trinidard…I lied to you…I knew you would....I don’t know…I just...

She bites her lips

M- I would what?

G-I don’t know…I..are you mad at me?

M- I am not mad…at all

He smiles at her, a new gleam in his eyes

She smiles too

G-Thanks.So how was your home trip?

M-My trip was just fine. I would go there again next month; would you want to come along?

G-emm…sure.I would love to

She smiles

M-So you'll be here for the month. Cool!

G-Lets see

M- What do we have for dinner?

Maan asks rubbing his hands with anticipation

G-Sandwich

M-I missed your cooking the most, I guess

She smiles

G-You like it? I never expected

M-Of course I do

M- Make me something nice? Please

G-Sure. What do you wanna have?

Today, because of some reason...she is not looking here there ...but just looking at him..looking and looking…may be she missed him that much

M-Make me anything that can be made quickly

Maan is also very happy to see her but he can’t say much. All he wants to do is be happy with her, share his latest win with her but he couldn’t do that and he wasn’t liking hiding things from her

G-How’s your family?

She asks while preparing something

M-They are well. My sis is just as annoying as ever

G-Come on!I am sure she is a sweetheart. What did you take for them?

M- Hmmm I took her some jewelry and my grand-father a box of cigars

He says noticing that she is wearing the bracelet in her delicate hands that he had given her

G-Cigar?Wow…that’s costly. But you don’t smoke...do you?

M- I can smoke with him….he doesn’t like to smoke alone

She looks at him

G-Men are weird.Wash your hands and come

M-My hands are clean

G-Maan! Gande haath hain toh khana nahi milega!

M- I washed them!! You were too busy staring at my hair..

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