Tormented MG OS updated Final Part on Page 28 / 19-3-2018

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mehrunnesa

@mehrunnesa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

good story, but may be the victim is geet, and dark person is maan
but not have idea why she got afraid to go with her friend pinky
may be will reveal later😳😳

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Hi richa

Congrats for new start.

Geet in trouble coz of her past ..

Maan already engage ..want to know why geet turned so dull.

Thanks for the update

Waiting for next

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Leenu

@Blossom_29

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Interesting & Intriguing story
Who is that screaming???? Maan was geets brother friend
Both life's are different
Waiting to read more

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Congrats on new OS

Interesting start

Liked it!!

Geet seems to be timid and diffident. Geet's characterization had a touch of fear deportment. Brij invited Maan for dinner and informed same to Geet. What happened in Geet's past that she turns gloomy or tries to interact with others whilst even brij is concerned for Geet and is protective for her. Curious to know about Geet's characterization.

Thanks for the pm!

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Congrats for new story..

Interesting update..

Geet met Maan after 8 years..

She is sad..

Waiting for next update..

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Aditi Choudhary

@aditilovesmsk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

congratulations for the new story richu
tormented!!
u gave slight picture of it in 1st pts
geet nd her veerji
she is very reserves
dont wanna enjoy
like a caged bird
nd Maan
after 8yrs they met
waiting for the story to unfold

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

awesome update maan and brij are chilhood friends but there is a deep cvonnection betwewen maaneet something happend 8 yrs ago that changed geet so much made her quiet and detached and scared brij wants to cheer his sietr biut seeeing heraloof and broken kills him maan came back after 8 yr and is a changed man engaged to sameera and a flirt he can also see changes in geet who is quiet and is staying away from him geet feels heartbroken to see maan changed so much it kills her geet loves him maybe and is feeling all alone geet and friends in mall watch a movie when she runs into maan

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Asheley

@Asheley

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Congrats for your new story dear

Part 1

What happened to geet??

Or what happened to them ??

Looks like something major has happened which is tormenting their life now

Did geet have feelings for maan

What happened that night ?

I am so curious to know what happened in the past

Thanks for the update

Thanks for the PM dear

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CRAZYCUTEE

@CRAZYCUTEE

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

SUPERB UPDATE

WHY GEET IS LIKE THIS

WHAT HAPPEN IN THE PAST THAT CHANGED HERR SO MUCH

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amazonforest

@amazonforest

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

CONGRATULATIONS baby for new story 🥳

super start . geet is mysterious , its confirmed something happened with her & not only her brother , her friends too knew that . geet's brother is very protective towards her . maan is her brother's childhood friend & he came to visit them . he knew geet too from childhood . looks like he is well established & engaged with some sameera . he tried to talk to geet but she didnt talk much . next day geet went to mall with her friends & maan too went there .

eagerly waiting for next part