Tormented MG OS updated Final Part on Page 28 / 19-3-2018

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Shalini barman roy

@shalini28

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Interesting start
Looks like Geet is either scared or sad about something
What happened to her?
Geet's brother Brij loves Geet very much and take care of her
Before doing anything,Geet always take Brij's permission
Maan was Brij's childhood friend
He came after so many years
He is engaged to Sameera
Eagerly waiting for next update

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Amiyousuf

@Amiyousuf

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Congrats for new story.
Interesting start. And Nice update.
Waiting for next update.

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Doracake

@Doracake

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Nice Intro

Geet meets Maan after 8 Years

Maan changed a lot. Sameera is his Fiancee

Geet seems to be upset

May be Geet oves him

Waiting for next update

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Anotherstar

@Anotherstar

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

nice start
full of suspense

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

new story👏

very interesting

what is geet's past that she is like this scary

maan visit India after 8 year saw very this geet n ask brij but he avoid it

geet feels maan change completely

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

wht happened geet became like dis?...

interesting starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Mindblowing start...
totally loved it...
Congratulations on new story...

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shailja250

@shailja250

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Hii dear. ..

Starting para is hell confused n rest is amazing but but geet ka character is really confused means har chiz se darna n Maan ko dekh kar scare hona i don't know what is happened in their past... N now ek or jhatka Maan four girlfriends and one fiance????? What is going on n Ky Maan ka physically related h in sab se ... Yaar it's really hell confused whole part n geet..