Tormented MG OS updated Final Part on Page 28 / 19-3-2018

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Nefret19

@Nefret19

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Congratulations on the new story dearie:):):) An awesome & intriguing start:):):)

I love the way Brij cares and loves for his sister Geet. And her 2 sweet friends who care a lot for her. But am so curious why is there that sadness in her eyes...what happened in Geet's life? Was it Maan? There was a mention of that night...and something happened...And Geet cried after seeing Maan so changed...4 girlfriends and 1 fiance? So bad...and it hurt Geet so much...what happened between Maan & Geet that she is so hurt by him? It will all unfold as the story progresses so am so so excited to read on:):):) All the best my dearie:):):)

Edited by Nefret19 - 7 years ago

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nigah

@nigah

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Thanks for the pm and update...

Everything is so confusing AND specially geet she is sad and not interested in anything...

And everything seems to be related with maan and maan is having 4 girlfriends and one finance wow nice going maan...

What happened with her in that night that she changed...

Waiting for next update and also update soon your other stories to...

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zariya1234

@zariya1234

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

nice and intriguing story
what happened that night
I think maan was involved that night

therefote geet was not happy around maan

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kuhu

@kuhu18

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

CONGRATS FOR NEW STORY

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kuhu

@kuhu18

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Lovely start
there must be something terrible in past and has leave deep mark on Geet
Brij is so caring and loving for Geet
there is something happining bet Maan and brij
i felt Geet had some thing for Maan
cant wait to read more

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Nice start. What happened to geet. Why is she not happy. She seems to be depressed due to some particular reason. She was not pleased with the news of Maan's coming. She was avoiding him. What happened in the past which is still disturbing her. Waiting for next dear