Tormented MG OS updated Final Part on Page 28 / 19-3-2018

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@TwinFlames

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Suspicious something happened b/w maneet which tormented her.. & she is quite & silent now.. & maneet met after 8 long years & maan is changed.. geet was so sad to know this

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drrose31

@drrose31

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Congozz for the new work sweets...

I like it...

Brij and Geet nice bond...

Maan and Geet know each other... Yet, Maan has moved on but Geet hasn't ...

waiting for more

Thanks for pm sweets

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Congrats for new OS

Nice update

Waiting for next update

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ns.1

@ns.1

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Congrats for the new os. Very interesting yet scary start. Is it related to geet's past which is why she is very quiet and scared and stays aloof most of the time. Her brother loves her a lot and his childhood friend Maan Singh Khurana visits them but geet is not excited to meet him also or is she disturbed to know about his girlfriends and fiancee. Well even I am disturbed on knowing that sameera is maan's fiancee 😡 pehle hi update mein witch ka naam agaya 😡 aage kya hoga 😕 geet cried thinking that maan has changed a lot 😭 what is the mystery of the night she was thinking which has changed everything and what were maan's unsaid words to geet's brother? Eagerly waiting to know. Continue soon 😊

Edited by ns.1 - 7 years ago

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Amazing start .. Is 1st para by any chance related to geet and Maan 😲

I mean the way geet behaved infront of Maan.. was unusual and weird 🤢

What happened 8 years ago? Waiting for mystery to be unfold.. 😉

Waiting for next update

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Congrats for the new story

very interesting

Geet was getting scared and frightened

all the time

Brij was taking care of her as a small kid

more than a sister

what happened to her

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@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#47

very nice and different concept

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Congrats on the OS!

thanks 4 da pm.

Part 1

superb update! wonderfully written.

Loved the bond btwn Geet and Brij! he is very protective of Geet! wonder what happened that night!

So Maan and Brij are friends.

Seems like Geet likes Maan. Maan teases Geet! Geet was upset hearing Maan has a fiancee.

eager to know what Geet meant when she said Maan has changed!

update soon

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#49

New story. Brij & Maan r childhood friends. But something has happened in the past Geet is reserved and she's scared as when pinky holds her hands she gets very scared. Waiting for the story to unfold