Tormented MG OS updated Final Part on Page 28 / 19-3-2018

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priyankadwivedi

@priyankadwivedi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Nice start... Curious to know why geet is so timid n scared all the time... Was maan related to that somewhere...

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Its a Mind Blowing Start

Something had happened to Geet was she tortured or something she gets scared easily

and she is so timid and quiet

it seems like Brij her brother truly loves and cares for her and makes sure that she enjoys herself

Maan a childhood friend and wow he has four girlfriends and even a fiance

it also seems like he is very friendsly and perhaps kind too

Geet for some reason I feel she does not truly enjoy herself when she is with her friends she just does everything as duty towards them

I'm waiting to know more about Geet

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Brij taking gud care of his sis but y she scared and always get tensed Maan brij's childhood friend came after 8year's engaged

Maan asked about Geet vut brij change the topic and brij want hr to enjoy

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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Reading the starting I thought u planned it something horrible n dramatic starting..Like bloody screams filled the horror..Its scary...

Bt thankfully for the first update u only kept only little prt of it..

Bt eventually r u planning to twist the story in either making us cry or scaring ??

However I like the update bt geet's character is intriguing..

Usually in most stories geet is bubbly bold or angry bird types..

Nd here she is so quiet n timid..

Infact she get scared so easily which I think some incident cause it..

Brij taking care of his sis really well n priortize her more than himself..

Nd about maan I don't find anything weird about him now bt as said he changed alot so I wondering how he has been before...

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Mahika

@MGMahika

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

I thought it some vampires or werewolf ki story hai but ...acha kya geet maan ko chahti hai isilye woh udas ho gayi...past mein hua kya tha 😲 kya chupa rahe hai Maan aur brij ? I want to know kya suspense hai aur unn dono ne jaanbujke kuch nahi bola they knows we are hearing everything 😆

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Nice update dear Brij told that Mann is coming to visit them and make arrangements according after his visit she is very sad next day she went out with her friends

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metromasti

@metromasti

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Congratulations sweetie for new story 😃
awesome update . looks like geet has some bitter past... something happened with her , thats why she is little weird . her brother & friends knew about her , they care for her & protective to her . maan is geet's brother's friend , he visited their house & met geet but geet didn't show interest towards him , though he knew her from childhood . geet & her friends roaming in mall when maan saw her & talked to her .
waiting for next