Wired Hearts (7) Thread:8, Pg:1 - Page 97

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Beautiful. So our geet madam has kinda fallen for maan eh. What about him. Hmm. Just wondering g did he not sense geetvstarung at him The whole time??

Anaya is a great friend

Exactly my question! Did he not even notice a tiny bit of staring? How could MSK be so ignorant?!

Originally posted by: sgmiss2003

Amazing chapter. Worth the long wait. Looks like the tables have turned now. Good to see this side of Geet. She is completely smitten over Maan. I am sure Maan must have noticed it too. Looking forward to reading more. Hopefully we get more frequent updates now. I am in love with this story.

Thank youu! It feels great to be able to actually write something you all like! I'm going to try and give this story more time now...

Originally posted by: coderlady

They got back safe and sound. Now that they are back, the formality has come back too.

Yes, formalities need to be shot down, don't they?

Originally posted by: dqno1

Ye kya hua, kaise hua, kab hua😳

Iska naam sahi mein JHALLI in caps hai

Sach mein!

I love the sisters scene so much.❤️

You conveyed the anxiety, the fear of being left by all family so well.

Both these girls are strong and yet they are so so maasoom in their love for each other.

Having sisters, I can totally relate.

This sisters' bonding is actually relatable to me too.

Vyan and Kittu😆 still friends and caring for her; I loved that she keeps all her relationships close.

Relationships is all one has in the end, no?

The scene stealer of the whole update was definitely Ananya👍🏼

Without the shoving and pushing of that friend our princess jhalli would just be playing if-but in her mind.

Now she is being pushed to be aware of her thoughts and is being introspective and expressive for the first time.

I like Ananya too because she is like me😃

Poking and prodding and asking for details, just as a best friend should.

You are an inspiration when I write Anaya! 😃

I like this strategy you used to get another character to open up Geet's character some more.

There are a few people who need that kind of person in their lives...

Another one who I adore is Maan's mom.

I could crave the warmth that Geet gets from total unadulterated selfless love that only a sensitive and caring human can give.

She is elegant, sophisticated and open and I adore that about her; so much like my own Mom.

Very well crafted character👍🏼

Again, I do have an inspiration for writing Maan's mom - my own mom.

Then there is the man himself, hiding in the shadows, near and far to tease and tantalize. Reminded me of one of the song sequences in the show where Geet was looking for him.

Lovely memory.

I know right! Lovely memories!

It is a big switch from the character we saw with his heart in pieces to the one who was bitter (and rightly so) to the one who forgave and accepted to who he is now. It is your talent that we all stood by him through out each of those phases and actually empathized with him.

I wonder how easy it will be for him to be just as playful and open and fun with her. Love is not thought through however and it will come naturally I think.

This. Love comes naturally and does not have to be thought through..

So waiting for the violins and flowers and kisses and babies.

Slowly and patiently of course.

Like fine wine and good story should be savored.

Loved it so much and totally well worth the wait.

This is the trophy for me!

Thanks Mari!

With two kids running around you are still a master of your craft👏

Haha! Thank you! Although, two kids running g around have reduced the crafting pace to nearly nil. 😞

Thanks for always being there, Avi! 🤗

Originally posted by: dqno1

I found the perfect song for this update.

Not that you need it but just my thing, you know😉

Aap yun faaslon se guzarte rahe
Aap yun faaslon se guzarte rahe
Dil se kadmo ki awaaz aati rahi
Aahaton se andhere chamakte rahe
Raat aati rahi, raat jaati rahi
Aap yun

Gungunati rahin meri tanhaiya
Dur bajti rahin kitni shehnaiya
Zindagi zindagi ko bulaati rahi

Aap yun faaslon se guzarte rahe
Dil se kadmo ki awaaz aati rahi
Aap yun

Katra katra pighalta raha asmaan
Katra katra pighalta raha asmaan
Rooh ki wadiyon mein na jaane kahan
Ek Nadi, ek nadi dilruba geet gaati rahi

Aap yun faaslon se guzarte rahe
Dil se kadmo ki awaaz aati rahi
Aap yun

Aap ki garm baahon mein kho jayenge
Aap ki narm gaalon pe so jayenge, so jayenge
Muddaton raat neende churati rahi

Aap yun faaslon se guzarte rahe
Dil se kadmo ki awaaz aati rahi
Aap yun, aap yun

Well the last para has not happened yet but one can hope☺️

This song was in my mind for so many days after your posted this! I love it.

Originally posted by: aparna3011

anaya is teasing geet in the name of maan

geet wants to share with anaya but still noe able to give name to her feeling so dint wants to diclose it to every one

Yes, she should be sure of herself before stepping forward...

Originally posted by: janu2006

Awesome part

Loved the way Geet being teased by Anaya

Hope maan and Geet are able to talk soon

Cont soon

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: muskanp

Wow so many days ... still the story has its charm ... so beautifully written thanks

Thank you Muskan! It is a big compliment for me! 😳

Originally posted by: maansi25

Ch 54

Worth waiting for....

Now after so many years Geet is seeing Maan the way she should have years back.

Loved the queries put forward by Anaya...

It made me remember my past with friends 😂...

Such should be the friendship....

Because our jhalli needs someone to point out what is happening with her..

And she should also take the bitter medicine which maan took...

Loved the way Mr Khurana called her daughter and introduce her such..

One day dhe truly will be...

Geet is staring at maan throughout the party, aware of him..

We hope Maan is also aware of her infatuation...

As Geet we also wanted some conversation between the two..

May be next time.

Waiting eagerly for the next as we might get fire round of anaya...

And Maan too 👍😘

Thank you! It's a pleasure knowing you're here and you're enjoying the story!

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Hey Mari. So good to see an update on this story.

It was brilliant to say the least. I am very pleased with the way Geet is handling this situation. She knows that her feelings for him are changing, but she is not sure what it is yet. I am glad she is keeping in under wraps until she knows what it is that she is feeling, and what it is that she wants. I know that this story is intended as a happy ending, so the wait is exciting. Otherwise I would be so nervous with Geet's decision to wait.

That's the consolation right there. Lol. A promised happy ending

Maan, hummm! I am not very convinced that he doesn't know the effect he is having on Geet. I think he knows very well and is intentionally playing innocent. He is too emotional, sensitive about Geet to not know or recognize the change in her. Let's see if my instincts about this turn out to be correct.

Let's see... I do agree that he is too sensitive towards her to not know the change but let us not forget the pain he went through for being sensitive like that...

Aanya - I am a bit nervous about this one. She is very sweet, but she is also very impulsive. I hope she doesn't let the cat out of the bag (If she gives Geet a call and hear's everything from her that is. I also hope she is too tired to call tonight)

Haha! Anaya is unpredictable. You never know what she's going to throw towards Geet.

Lovely update Mari. Thank you!

Thank you for being around and leaving such encouraging comments!