MG FF- Riyasat- Part 19-Page 66-29/05/2018

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: tabby999
awww...yeh kab hua ..
ek comment se story remove ..aisa kaunsa dhamkedar comment kar diya tumne ki poori story hi mitti mein mil gayi ...

yeh drishtifan aaisi nahi hai ...she cares ..she will not remove her story ...

About an year back

Even i used the same words... Ye title story ko suite nahi karta.. etc etc... Tho seeing your comment yaad taza hogai😆

Thank God if this writer isn't that sensitive

Warna history ka repeat telecast hojata🤣

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

superb intriguing prologue! awesome title! will b waiting 4 cs n updates 😊

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

About an year back
Even i used the same words... Ye title story ko suite nahi karta.. etc etc... Tho seeing your comment yaad taza hogai😆

Thank God if this writer isn't that sensitive

Warna history ka repeat telecast hojata🤣

🤣 koi history repeat nahi hogi ..

yeh aacchi hai ...

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misty_drastifan

@misty_drastifan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: tabby999
🤣 koi history repeat nahi hogi ..
yeh aacchi hai ...

GUYS PHIR CONFUSION MEIN HOON...RIYASAT IS GOOD PAR AVANTIKA ADD HOTA TOH ACCHA HOTA

LET ME THINK

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: misty_drastifan

GUYS PHIR CONFUSION MEIN HOON...RIYASAT IS GOOD PAR AVANTIKA ADD HOTA TOH ACCHA HOTA

LET ME THINK

aree yaar chod do avantika ko ...plz ...tum characters name rakh lena...

story titlenahi ...waise stoy is urs...koi na tum jo bhi name rakh lo ...

no tension abt name ..u start posting the story

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

dekha i told u the writer is obsesed about AVANTIKA

short form rakhlete hai of AVANTIKA something like Tika... tiku... ya Tik😆

the "Riyasat ki Tik" kya mast naam hai na😎🤣

jaldi jaldi update karo so that we could get some hints about what this whole story is about

and waise bhi bade nahi kehte Naam me kya rakha hai😉

waiting for the story to start!

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Congrats new story

Interesting prologue

Pls don't soon

Thanks sweety

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

are haan u could call her princess also

see Elegant princess or elegance of commoner could also do..

if u want to replace avantika.. then just mention her character problem solved

ab ye batao when can we expect the update

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
dekha i told u the writer is obsesed about AVANTIKA

short form rakhlete hai of AVANTIKA something like Tika... tiku... ya Tik😆

the "Riyasat ki Tik" kya mast naam hai na😎🤣

jaldi jaldi update karo so that we could get some hints about what this whole story is about

and waise bhi bade nahi kehte Naam me kya rakha hai😉

waiting for the story to start!

🤣 Riyasat ki tik .

Edited by tabby999 - 8 years ago

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misty_drastifan

@misty_drastifan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
are haan u could call her princess also

see Elegant princess or elegance of commoner could also do..

if u want to replace avantika.. then just mention her character problem solved

ab ye batao when can we expect the update

Not a bad Idea Elegant Princess will do...let me ask with tabby also because she is the one who helped me first