My beloved - a forbidden love (a happy ending to be updated in pg 11)

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sanum23

@sanum23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Yash buhat arrogant hai usse sirf lena or order karna ata hai he only knows to rule and can't listen against his wish and geet maan disobeying his order

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Chapter a has already captured my attention so now I'm going to read from the start of this story

So the night Yash threw a party for Maan that very night Ranveer misbehaved with Geet and that's the reason for her broken state while Maan been in love with her cannot see her like this Geet also knows that he is trying with all his efforts to bring back that happiness she once had and she too is in love with Maan

Maan remembers that Geet likes pottery and he does same so she can at least take her pains out and concentrate on creating something but their closeness to each other effected them more than both realized and they decided to become one

Geet's parents blame her as she is the root problem for their son Ranveer going to jail but Geet's mother does she also think her daughter is at fault

During the course of today I'll read from first chapter of this story and then comment while all the other updates you've sent me I'll read them on Sunday and comment

thanks a ton for PM

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Ch.1

Awesome

YSK is waiting for his death sentence which he appealed bcoz he can,t carry the burden of his sins, YSK has killed maneet 18 years ago and now repenting, Nakul his servant came and said that he does not want YSK to live his last night in peace even, all friends of maneet paying homage to maneet and crying for them and maneet,s souls watching everything from heaven.

YSK was so disgusting, he married Mohini who was already married and have a daughter Mohini also left her daughter with her ex-husband and enjoying her life with YSK who has already two sons Maan and Ranveer, Mohini ex-husband MH died and left Geet for YSK and Mohini and YSK adopted her

Edited by preetidhawan - 9 years ago

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Ch.2

Maan fell for Geet at first sight when he was 13 years old and Geet was 15, Geet came to Maan,s mansion for pray to God as there was no temple in KM and Maan have idol of krishna in his bedroom, Maneet became friends but Maan knew that he was in love with Geet who is his sister by law which is forbidden, Maan going to abroad for 8 long years and maneet reacted intensely, feeling so bad for maneet,really fate is cruel for them

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Ch 3

Painful and terrific Update

That B******* Ranveer lusted over Geet and molested her, poor Geet, Maan did the right thing, broke Ranveer,s hand and handed over him to police and supported Geet .

How much maneet are suffering, Sameera knew it that Maan loves Geet but not ready to accept it for Geet,s sake as this feeling is forbidden, he was ready to live alone but not ready to cross that line

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

CH. 4a

Poor Geet crying on her fate and felt numb, Maan tried his best to sooth her pain and promised himself that he will never left Geet alone like past time, Pari,s proposal came for Maan and YSK is ready to fix this alliance only for his business benefits, Maan taking Geet for pottery making to divert her mind as pottery is Geet,s passion

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

CH.4b

Maan took Geet at the basement for making pots from the clay and Geet tried for Maan,s happiness

Lovely song and loved Maneet,s hot and passionate moments

Maneet confessed their love for each other and both are ready to face the consequences of their relationship

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garga016

@garga016

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

hi thanx for pm...nice update...waiting for nxt...

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Previously in My beloved

The Khurana royal family was the oldest and most prestigious royal families in India.They were the richest and most powerful family among all. The owner of the Khurana Empire "Yash Singh Khurana" fell in love with Mohini , who was already married , when he saw her in a party.Lady Mohini Singh Khurana was the 2nd wife of Lord Yash Singh Khurana.Lady Mohini and her orphaned ex-husband Mohinder Handa , had a daughter together

named Geet whereas when Mohini married Yash , he was already a father of 2 little boys "Maan and Ranveer" from his 1st wife Lady Naina Singh Khurana , who died while giving birth to Ranveer.Maan , who was never loved by his parents , became an introvert while Ranveer turned to be like Mohini.Both brothers fell for Yash's adopted daughter Geet while Geet was in love with Maan which was no secret to Ranveer.When Yash sent away Maan for higher studies , the separation brought them closer.But Ranveer took this separation as a perfect opportunity to force Geet to make him his , but failed which angered him more and he became desperate.After Maan returned back to his country , Yash threw a party in Maan's honour , but the night turned ugly when a drunken Ranveer tried to sexually abuse her.Although Maan reached on time and saved her , but the incident shook her and she became a juicy scandalous gossip for the media.Infact , her position in the castle worsened as Yash-Mohini considered her as the root cause of Maan sending Ranveer to jail , and spoiling the family name.

Maan found a way to bring his old geet back...He took her to the basement where he told her to free herself and pour all that was going inside her into pottery...In doing so , they came close and expressed their love...and finally they took a decision to confess what they feel for each other to their parents...

ch 5 updated...

Guys , the low comment is making me sad...So ,I will finish it in the next update...

Edited by sanghita0000 - 9 years ago

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Lovely update maaneet walked hand in hand and maan confidentially told he loves geet and wants to marry her yash was shocked he outrightly refused insulting geet but maan stood up for declared that no one will take his geets place mohini assured that she will make his dad agree maan was happy thinking his mom will help him sameera and nakul tried to make him understand but maan refused to elope