My beloved - a forbidden love (a happy ending to be updated in pg 11)

hi sangita

Singhita you truly on a roll , when I first read that Yash has killed his family I thought maybe there is some mistake a father cannot do this
but when Nakul came and saw him and his words that he spat out throwing the wedding card and bridal wear than that made me think
Yash should really be hanged
at present both Maan and Geet's friends are at their graves and the pain that they still carry knowing that they will never see these two wonderful people again

Maan asking Geet if she remembers their moments its almost like they still alive only that they aged

Maan and Ranveer both brothers yet Ranveer had characteristics of his step mom while it seems Maan was a man of principals
Mohini leaving her daughter just because she married Yash
she truly has to be a terrible mother
Geet dad dies and he wanted Yash to adopt Geet which happened
only because she was Mohini's daughter

Maan and Geet's first meeting he was mesmerized by her but than his father tells him thta she is his sister and that certainly angered him which is not his fault but Geet on the other hand was standing afraid and nervous and no one is actually worried about her
but that was the day she met Nakul and both bonded well

Geet been 2years older than Maan actually seems so refreshing
Nakul Kaka tells her that Maan has an idol in his room and Geet decides to have her morning prayers she enters Maan's mansion this is a place that no one is allowed to come and she has entered
she was so intrigued by his interior his furnishings than finally she prays and at the same time Maan enters he tells her he'll send an idol to her room but she is not allowed to entered his Mansion
eventually they become friends Maan tried hurting himself physically
as he had to go abroad for studies for 8 years while Geet went on a hunger strike both now loves each other and have to stay away from each other for eight years

looking forward to see what happens

Beautiful and Vibrant Start

Disturbance of India bangai ho tum😡

shuruat dukhwali...

dekhte hai age kya hota hai...

Lovely update kind bold dear really good so maans father whom is also geets step father killed his whole family now waiting for his death najul visit him and blasts him yash is repenting for his deeds maaneet r dead so sad but they r watching in heaven in each other arms so yash is a ruthless guy who married geets mom who herself was a gold digger she not once thought abt geet and left her maan is their son who was nothing likr his dad but rajveer was exactly like his dad geets father died he gave geets custody to yash who adopted her as his daughter maan saw geet immediately attracted to her but angry at the thought of her his sis even we r dude maan avoided his so called family he is the only person who prayed geet went to see the idol which was in maans room no one was aloud maan was very lonely though he had a million riches but no friends geet was expliring his place she was astounded with so many shoes he has but she prayed for him hid when he came maan smelled her he told he will get idol for her maan was getting attracted towards geet he would help her stand up for her geet was his friend after lots of caojoling by nakul but maan was sad he had a fight with geet as he was supposed to go to London for studies for which he dosent wanted to go

Hey Sangeeta!!!
i have already .. read it but in other thread ...

aWsm updt. ...I really like the concept...maneet r nt biologically bro sis bt as per law thy r. ...both realise their true feeling...both r inseprable...so yash cunningness might hs killed thm ...nakul is big supportr. ...updt soon...nd thnx fr pm dear

intresting update..maaneet actually stepbrother and sister.. but they love each other..yash killed them.. eager to read more

thanks for the PM sangeetha
I will read and comment in the evening