My beloved - a forbidden love (a happy ending to be updated in pg 11)

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

hi thanks 4 da pm n great sad update! well written!

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Heema Somani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

You are an amazing writer.

Beautiful end

you made me cry so much really emotional one

loved it

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Me feeling sad for maneet but their souls are free and with each other, Di I thought ki story ka end maneet ke punarjanam per hoga

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janu2006

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

beautiful ending

thanks for pm dear

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swapna.p

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

beautiful ending..
thank u for pm..

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kajalranawat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

I never read such a heart touching story till date love to read it wonderful job

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Such A tragic ending

Both Sameera and Nakul Kaka tried letting Maan know his parents were deceiving him and Geet .

For Geet she was getting her lost mother back while for Maan he was just so excited so happy that his parents have accepted Geet as Khurana Babu .

I felt so sad at Maan's state searching for his love and finally he learns that she is no more but their love was so deep so pure that Maan too left this world to join his love .

When I read your note stating that you ending this story I truly felt guilty and immediately logged off , sending a message to my friend and it's truly amazing that he cannot understand why readers would not be attracted to this story or any story of yours .

He has told me you are one writer that has ventured out into the avenues of the unknown writing daring adventures with bold attitudes, he spoke of a writer that brings spice and flavour to her stories making every chapter phenomenal.

I do hope i'm not one of the reasons for bringing the story to an end .

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fmaaneet

@fmaaneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

I don't know
Mein pass word nahi hai is story k experience share karna ko
Maan geet hamesha k liye Amar honey
Is duniya k liye mit gye par
Reality mein milna howa
Kabhi kabhi
Apna bhar zayada dard detey hai

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tania90

@tania90

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

painful story yr
how brutal maan parents are yr geet konsa unke blood relation ki thi that they do this bad to geet nd ranveer he is such a shit that I cant even describe how m7ch I hate him nd maan he is all lost that his love is not with him that he killed himself infront of his parents nd yash his father how can he is so heartless for his own son just for society he killed innocent geet