My beloved - a forbidden love (a happy ending to be updated in pg 11)

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Amazing one
dis was one of my fav in os thread...maaneet were in love n yash got them killed..nakul comes to meet him in jail...waiting 4 nxt

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

a fresh concept and s beautifully written

loved it a lot
the fact that geet is elder than maan makes it so endearing
maan and geet wants to be together
but she is his step sister and isn't it kind of incest ( as she is his sister , by law)
but still they r pure soul that makes it cute one

aweee I love when their souls were talking
totally different and lovable

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priyasree

@priyasree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Concept is different n interesting

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Ranveer calls Geet as sister still he lust her he is jealous that she shares a close bond with Maan

Geet cannot even complain to her mother or Ranveer's father surely they will not believe her

they will somehow think she is trying to trap Ranveer as he is rich .

she is always uncomfortable in front of him but managed always to get him away from her

she missed Maan a lot and he too in London missed Geet he even tried dating Sameera but their relation was platonic as if they only friends and that was simply because he could never cheat Geet

when Sameera had told Geet that she is Maan's ex Geet was not angry because she trusted Maan and maybe she knew he would never cheat on her

however much they loved each other they could not be together as according to Mr and Mrs Khurana they were brother and sister while society too saw them in the same way

pain was evident they loved yet they could not be together

Ranveer finally tried his luck with Geet and thankfully Maan had come to see Geet and saw Ranveer manhandling Geet

Maan instantly became furious and handed Ranveer over to the police while Geet for the very first time went against the Khurana's as she had her Maan by her side

but now surely Mr and Mrs Khurana will not sit quiet surely they will avenge Geet for having Ranveer arrested and their name dragged through the mud

Geet has been severely effected and she became withdrawn too making Maan move into the Mansion so that he could check on Geet .

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deep002

@deep002

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Sad update dear, people like ranveer they got sick mentality , just hate him 😡

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annirogc

@annirogc

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

nice part.. maaneet both are missing each other.. maan came to india just for geet.. omg that ranveer was very bad why he did this to geet

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

I'll get back n comment

Geetu... I've got so many shikayate to do... Lekin I've been traveling n signals are playing hide n seak😡

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Nice part
hate ranveer
he is so disgusting
poor geet

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Nice part.. Ya yash moanster yai apne hi family member ko apne bacho ka murder kar dia and maan geet ka relation is sweet and ranveer is so disgusting kitna ganda admi hai.. Waiting for next..

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! well written! Disgusting Ranveer! Feeling 4 Geet! Maan is announced as heir! he is upset! he always wanted 2 be a fashion photographer! Maan recalls his convo with Sam! Maan loves Geet bt will nt confess as she is is adopted sister n elder than him! he doesn't want her 2 b humiliated. Maan saves Geet frm Ranveer! Ranveer sent 2 jail! Geet is nt depressed! update soon