MGFF: Deceitful Love Thread #1

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Prologue:
Dil main waafa, honton pe dua hai, aur koi sahaara bhi nahi
Rab rakh de jab dil main kisi ko, bastaa koi bhi dobaara nahi
Hain hum wahin, ho tum nahi...reh gai koi kami
Chain bhi...mera dard bhi...meri aashqui tum hi ho

"I never loved you, suna tumne ne. I-NEVER-LOVED YOU" his harsh, with a venomous filled voice still continued to echo in her mind, heart, and soul. Yet, she couldn't stop herself from loving him. Despite being thrown out of his life, ruthlessly by him, she couldn't make her heart understand to stop loving him. Could never make her heart learn the reality of her life that he never belonged to her. He was never hers and never will be. She stared at the features of his face and her fingers slightly, tracing the photo of his, as if he was right in front of her in the flesh and she is touching him, reminded her of all the moments they had spent together. From childhood to adulthood, they have shared everything, how they used to fight with each other for wanting this or that, or for just the sake of getting one another attention, and they even cried feeling one another pains. All this time, she was in illusion that just like her, He loved her too. Just like her, he had dreamed of her being his wife, just like her, he had dreamed of their future. But unfortunately, those daydreams that she had dreamed and had wished to become true one day of their futures, was just one side dream that will never come true.

"Kyun,..Kyun ek hi pal main tumne mere sare sapne chakne chor kar diyen. All these years, you showed me how much you loved me then all of a sudden you made me feel like a burden on you and this family. I had loved you from the moment I had understood the meaning of love, but you...you" and she broke into tears, feeling choked with all the emotions, hugging the picture of her love, but he didn't love her.

A man from far stared the figure sitting on the bench, burying her face in her knees and crying, but today he did not feel sad seeing her tears this time, unlike other times. A single tear in her eyes, and he would feel like to burn the whole world for whoever dared to make her cry. But this time, these tears made him happy, happy to finally see her being his. A cunning smile crept on his lips, and then giving a glance at the girl sitting alone, he sat back in his Limo and quickly made a call to his right-hand man, who though was just an employ of his company, but he was like his right hand, any work, be it related to his work or anything, you name it and he makes sure it is done without any loophole. After instructing for his next step of the plan, he gave one last quick glanced at her and he drove away, feeling contented to see the plan he had made to make her his, is working just like he had planned and now it was time for the second step to take into action for his plan.


A/N: Most probably no one might know me or remember me. But just for the Intro, I am Mariam, I used to write little stories on Maaneet but due to the lack of support I lost my interest.

So this story will be only on my Blog: https://mariammagic.wordpress.com

I will provide the chapter links here. And most importantly, I will be posting this story at my own time, meaning I will try to update as much as I can in a day or every day, but can't promise if I can do that every day as I have other works to look after too.

I hope you all will support me on with this new story, and if I see you all supporting I might finish old stories as I am in the mood of penning down my stories that were left un-finished.

Thank You!

Mariam

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character Sketch: Names and Relations
Savetri Devi Khurana; Daadi Ma or Dev and Maan Singh Khurana
Dev Singh Khurana: Younger brother of Maan and Grandson of Savetri Devi
Maan Singh Khurana: Elder brother of Dev and Grandson of Savetri Devi

Parents of Maan & Dev
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Amardeep Thakral: Father of Jai, Geet's Father, friend/ Uncle
Jai-Vijay Thakral: Son of Amardeep
Geet Handa: Daughter of Amardeep's late friend Mr. & Mrs. Mohindar Handa, she calls him Bauji



Edited by CrazzyBusy - 9 years ago
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INDEX
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Part 1 Pg. 4: CLICK HERE
Part 2 Pg. 10: CLICK HERE
Part 3 Pg. 14: CLICK HERE
Part 4 Pg. 18: CLICK HERE
Part 5 Pg. 23: CLICK HERE
Part 6 Pg. 28: CLICK HERE
Part 7 Pg. 33: CLICK HERE
Part 8 Pg. 42: CLICK HERE
Part 9 Pg. 45: CLICK HERE
Part 10 Pg. 51: CLICK HERE
Part 11 Pg. 57: CLICK HERE
Part 12 Pg. 61: CLICK HERE
Part 13 Pg. 66: CLICK HERE
Part 14 Pg. 72: CLICK HERE
Part 15 Pg. 75: CLICK HERE
Part 16 Pg. 78: CLICK HERE
Part 17 Pg. 84: CLICK HERE
Part 18 Pg. 88: CLICK HERE
Part 19 Pg. 93: CLICK HERE
Part 20 Pg. 97: CLICK HERE
Part 21 Pg. 105: CLICK HERE
Part 22 Pg. 111: CLICK HERE
Part 23 Pg. 115: CLICK HERE
Part 24 Pg. 120: CLICK HERE
Part 25 Pg. 124: CLICK HERE
Part 26 Pg. 129: CLICK HERE
Part 27 Pg. 136: CLICK HERE
Part 28 Pg. 139: CLICK HERE
Part 29 Pg. 140: CLICK HERE
Part 30 Pg. 144: CLICK HERE
Part 31 Pg. 146: CLICK HERE
Edited by CrazzyBusy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I liked ur story through i read ur story very late but I am still waiting for ur story DHDAJS and unforgettable memories ... if by chance u can update both stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sounds interesting
m in for thz
send me pm too
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting sketch ..
congrats on new story .. banner is good one too ..
seems to be my fav track 😆 😉
interested to read , if u really mean by giving update everyday or alternative days 😛
so SHE is referred to GEET ? and He is Maan ? or third person in banner ? geet cant love third person na ( my logic) lolzz ..
and The third person cant be this interesting to take a place in prologue 😆 that too my logic lolzz ..
if u give me PW , i will read and will comment but i m irregular 😆 i dont have blog account 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats on new story!!
Prologue is awesome :)
Geet loved the other person not Maan
and Here Maan made sm plan to separate them ri8 😆
With the word ri8 hand..i thought its Adi and hoped that person is Maan
Sorry if i am wrong 😆
Can we read in blog and comment here in IF??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue dear. Waiting for update.. plzz dear add me n pm plzz 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats on new ss
Awesome prolouge
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting Prologue...
cont. soon... Pls pm me.

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