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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#501

Interesting , Curious and Tensed Teaser

Will Be Waiting For Update

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mariam.ahmed197

@mariam.ahmed197

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#502

Can't wait jaldee do update please

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#503

Part 17: CLICK HERE

Do like and comment!

Thank you to all, who commented on the previous part, and liked it.

Please-please do leave me a proper comment and press the likes button to motivate me.

Enjoy!

-Mariam

PS: I will try to write the next part ASAP, and depending on how quick I get all your responses I will update the next part...

Also, since I will be reveling Maan past, the real story will not be starting until another few updates like 3 updates. Hopefully, I will be able to get Maan past done in 2 parts.

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crazyfriends007

@crazyfriends007

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#504

Wow superb long update
God maan torturing himself ...poor geet
Daadi not well...
Hope party goes well

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#505

Fabulous update ...
its sad to see maan like that ...
he forgt his pains when he came near geet ..its looks like geet is the only one who can take his pains and give him much needed peace .
I don't like geet behvr with maan in this. .how can she blm maan again and calling him janwar and all ? did not she realized that he was in pain ?
the curiosity is still there ..want to know the past .
continue soon...

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neel11

@neel11

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#506

Love it poor maan so much pain and what about her and dadima waiting for the next update

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#507

hi mariam ...

please i want to ask when u r going to update ur previous stories ..

they r wonderful ..plz complete them specially DHdajs ..

do reply ..

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#508

Maans past has made him hard

His sufferings has made him like a phsyco

His madness had no boundaries

Geet scared seeing him doing harsh exercise

Torturing himself n bleeding

Her words hit him deep again n he kept her close to make her fear him

But it resulted in other way

When will he know about jay n geet

Dadi is sick

Geet checking the arrangements of party

Her dress spoiled bcoz of pinky

Is it kurban hua dance

Nice part

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#509

intense update! Well written! Maan livid! Geet stunned seeing him wrk out! she calls him a janwar! Maan upset! he comes closer n she pushes him away! Geet in tears! Dadi questions her n she lies! Dadi confromnts Maan! Maan tried 2 commit suicide before! Geet stunned! Dadi unwell! Geet prepares 4 the party! Pinky ruins her dress! dadi tells Geet 2 change! dadi doesn't wt happened 2 Maan! awesome precap! update soon