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Posted: 9 years ago
wow lovely amazing omg superb update..te way geet was hurt with jai ki words and who was manoflying her,was lovely.,opps geet and jai ki gola date and my maan witnessing tat and his anger seeing his love in someone's hand,omg.oops geet ki dream so she getting feeling tat my maan was hurt which was true..te way geet ki restless with my maan ki ignorance yes pinky is correct if he cum near also fault and ignored also fault wat will my maan do geet baby..te way geet trying to dress his wound but his anger but atleast my maan have to mend in front of his geet...opps my maan hugging her and soothing his wound hear..yes my maan touch te right its easy to say to forgot but tough to feel te pain..opps gundas ki attrack my maan have nearly killed who laid his eyes on his geet now my maan will take care of his geet..opps my maaneet in uk..i love te update so much yar
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice story. Waiting fr next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear jai scholded geet for not beinen there at bauji ill health geet is very hurt and stop talking to him but he monify her after 2 days geet blackmailed Mann to give her post back
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superbbb story and concept ...
I just read in one go all parts...
totally loved it...
Excited for next part...
plzzz update soon...
and Add me too in ur pm list...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Teaser:

"Khabardar jo aab mujhe cho ya bhi aap ne tu" Geet whispered to him sternly the moment air hostess was away from there.

"nahi tu kya" he spoke challenging her.

"nahi tu I will start screaming and call all the people here and tell them you were troubling me and they will send you away from me" hearing that Maan starts to laugh holding on to his stomach, and Geet just got lost in his laugh.

"Where is he? Where is Dev, Aston" He spoke through gritted teeth, anger emanating from his entire body as he held him by the collar of his shirt.

"Where is she?" asked Maan changing the topic and Dev made a babyish face, knowing Maan will scold her and said "with the doctor" and then quickly added "don't yell at her"

"You will never, I know you will never Meera, but now I think I have had enough of your drama...I had warned you Meera before itself that if anything happens to my brother, I will not leave you, but you still don't understand this part...now I think it's time to show you a live telecast of what I do to people who hurt my family" and with that he punched in a few numbers in his mobile and within a few minutes his mobile beeped with a sound. "See this here, maybe then you will understand the depth of my words" and he shoves his phone in her hand with a video playing, where a girl in a beggar dress was sitting along with other beggars, lifelessly.

Coming out of her thoughts, she was left shaken just with the thought of what will he do to her family now. No matter what she says now he will not believe her and in fear she starts crying and shaking saying "no-no sir. I promise I will love him. I promise I will love Dev. I promise sir...please just don't hurt them. Please don't punish them for my mistake. Please sir, I...I promise I will do whatever you say..." and then she felt herself being shaken.

"...aap ne tu kabhi kisi se pyar hi nahi kiya...aap ke seene main dil nahi pathar hai pathar...agar dil hota tu na kisi ke liye dhadka tha...ya kisi ka dard mehsoon hota..."

"Maaan Sir" Geet screamed facing Maan, seeing the man squeezed the trigger and a wisp of smoke escaped from the gun barrel, with a single bullet.

Posting tonight, just needs to edit them...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting
Teaser was quite dhamekadhar
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Posted: 9 years ago
interesting teaser ...continue soon ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome teaser...waiting for update tonight :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 24: CLICK HERE
Do like and comment!
Thank you to all, who commented on the previous part, and liked it.
Please-please do leave me a proper comment and press the likes button to motivate me.
Enjoy!
-Mariam

PS: Some of you may not like this update cos of Maan, but that is how MSK is in this story...
And guys, I am feeling much better now Alhumdulilah, so thank you so much for asking about my health. Hope someday, I will fully get rid of this headache.

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Posted: 9 years ago
brilliant...so many things happened here
first of all so glad geet gave a piece of her mind to dev and to maan about meera..seeing meera being frightened she opened dev's eyes am hoping...now what does she do...she takes the bullet meant for maan...maybe this will make maan realize the importance of her in his life...waitig to see what happens now...

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